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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
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Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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I'm Back At It!!! I've Been Away Far Too Long, And This Time I'm Taking It Alot More Serious. Like The Title Says, This Is The First Single Off My 3rd Mixtape "Sitting In A Dark Corner, Vol. 1" And I Couldn't Help But Dedicate It To By Friend Derek Who Died In A Car Accident In January, And J-Deezy Who Was Murdered In February. This Is A Real Emotional Type Of Track, So If You Don't Like It, I Don't Give A Fuck, I'm Just Being Me. But Enough Talking, Here's The Track. Get At Me
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP??
Posts: 20,134
Repped: 1,328
Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts
Neg Reps: 267
Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts
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first bars were dope 'madafuck life its giving me a migraine'
good to see u got studio quality again a hook wulda been nice.. cuz that sample dont do it for me.. second verse delivery sound JUST like joe budden when u say "still sittin in the dark corner" and that line punches in "lookin for a heartwarmer" ...I think ur a jumpoff fan? its not a bad thing, I just notice it overall this is a good song I wuld say 8/10 keep making songs and keep spitting real shit.. |
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Yeah, I'm A Huge Joey Fan, But I Didn't Even Mean To Do That. I Wrote The First Verse And BOOM, Second Verse Hit Me Like A Mother Fucker So I Dunno Lol. But Thanks For The Feed Faam, Keep It Coming
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH
Posts: 1,888
Repped: 334
Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts
Neg Reps: 54
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The beat was cracck the verses were good for this type of track!!
Emotion was good everything was good fam keep em coming!!
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R.I.P DRO
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: ON 166TH
Posts: 3,900
Repped: 411
Repped 1,295 Times in 404 Posts
Neg Reps: 63
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Whats poppin Spoken, Im feelin this shit...some real/deep shit
Flow was on point good shit cuhz 9/10 Go leave feed on my new shit though 1 6 6 t h
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Banned
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP??
Posts: 20,134
Repped: 1,328
Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts
Neg Reps: 267
Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts
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stixx git on msn you ignorant fuck
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R.I.P DRO
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: ON 166TH
Posts: 3,900
Repped: 411
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Neg Reps: 63
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^^^CALM YOUR "i MISS BERLIN" ASS DOWN NIGGA ILL BE 0N IN A SEC
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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good looks, keep that feed coming
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: woodbridge, VA
Posts: 6,370
Repped: 11
Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts
Neg Reps: 7
Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts
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7 months for this...i give it a 7.5/10
nah im playin...it was good...hook was a lil meeh...but verses were on point...liked the multies alot tho...over all a good song homie...RIP Deezy
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Veteran
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: westcoast, CA
Posts: 2,568
Repped: 671
Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts
Neg Reps: 13
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damn this this song is dope u really got some shit on ya chest get it out dude nice track homie nice verses n i think the sample was cool nice drop keep em coming
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: pittsburgh
Posts: 11,279
Repped: 132
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my better me is gonna be better
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: woodbridge, VA
Posts: 6,370
Repped: 11
Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts
Neg Reps: 7
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riiight...
Old lotus>>>>>>>>>>New CHambers
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: In ThA NotePaD
Posts: 4,902
Repped: 79
Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Fuck you for using this beat...
Dope flow, emotion & lyrics.. 9/10
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Good Looks On The Feed, Keep That Shit Coming
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G.E.D......
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: North C@rolin@
Posts: 5,578
Repped: 644
Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts
Neg Reps: 108
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not bad at all
flow, lyric, emtion.......on point nice drop.... stay up
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The alias is Protege
Join Date: May 2006
Location: ThA WiLd WeSt
Posts: 2,026
Repped: 165
Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts
Neg Reps: 149
Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts
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who made this beat? ive heard it before. joe beezy?
and anyways, song is dope.
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Good Looks Jae, I'm Gonna Be Sending You Some Shit To Jump On Soon... These Dude's Ain't Ready For Us On The Same Track...
And To Protege... Yeah, The Beat Is Made By "The Klassix", And The Origional Song Is "Joe Budden - Better Me" Off Of "Halfway House"
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
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Blibbity Blah Blah With A Hibbity Whoo Blah
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: MN
Posts: 24
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nice lyrics dude, I repsect cats with ability to write with serious meaning. props, I have hard time concentrating long enought to go deep lyrically, probably my biggest hold up in rap, anyways, flow is pretty tight too.. nice delivery and emotion in the verse... I can hear some buddens in there too.. nothing wrong with that, like you said joey the man.
beat is aight, I can't complain about anything on this track,, you pretty much nailed it my dude. keep it crunchy mfx |
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Good Looks On The Constructive Feed Fam... Keep The Feed Coming
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Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Bmore
Posts: 854
Repped: 26
Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts
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Decent.......
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The Mother ****in Man
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: New York
Posts: 535
Repped: 1
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cant go wrong with this beat...flow emotion everything was on point...this is some good shit here
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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Good Looks On That Feed, Anyone Else?
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UnTouchable
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: 978 & 727
Posts: 620
Repped: 13
Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts
Neg Reps: 1
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i think i'm gonna up this, just for fucks and giggles
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