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Old 03-28-2009, 11:47 AM   #1
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I'm Back At It!!! I've Been Away Far Too Long, And This Time I'm Taking It Alot More Serious. Like The Title Says, This Is The First Single Off My 3rd Mixtape "Sitting In A Dark Corner, Vol. 1" And I Couldn't Help But Dedicate It To By Friend Derek Who Died In A Car Accident In January, And J-Deezy Who Was Murdered In February. This Is A Real Emotional Type Of Track, So If You Don't Like It, I Don't Give A Fuck, I'm Just Being Me. But Enough Talking, Here's The Track. Get At Me

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first bars were dope 'madafuck life its giving me a migraine'

good to see u got studio quality again

a hook wulda been nice.. cuz that sample dont do it for me..

second verse delivery sound JUST like joe budden

when u say "still sittin in the dark corner" and that line punches in "lookin for a heartwarmer" ...I think ur a jumpoff fan? its not a bad thing, I just notice it

overall this is a good song I wuld say 8/10

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Old 03-28-2009, 12:20 PM   #3
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Yeah, I'm A Huge Joey Fan, But I Didn't Even Mean To Do That. I Wrote The First Verse And BOOM, Second Verse Hit Me Like A Mother Fucker So I Dunno Lol. But Thanks For The Feed Faam, Keep It Coming
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The beat was cracck the verses were good for this type of track!!
Emotion was good everything was good fam keep em coming!!
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Old 03-28-2009, 02:25 PM   #5
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Whats poppin Spoken, Im feelin this shit...some real/deep shit
Flow was on point
good shit cuhz
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Old 03-28-2009, 02:41 PM   #7
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Old 03-28-2009, 06:28 PM   #8
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Old 03-28-2009, 07:09 PM   #9
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7 months for this...i give it a 7.5/10














nah im playin...it was good...hook was a lil meeh...but verses were on point...liked the multies alot tho...over all a good song homie...RIP Deezy
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Old 03-28-2009, 07:57 PM   #10
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damn this this song is dope u really got some shit on ya chest get it out dude nice track homie nice verses n i think the sample was cool nice drop keep em coming
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Old 03-28-2009, 08:12 PM   #11
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Old 03-28-2009, 08:19 PM   #12
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my better me is gonna be better
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Fuck you for using this beat...


Dope flow, emotion & lyrics..

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Old 03-29-2009, 11:22 AM   #14
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Old 03-29-2009, 08:24 PM   #15
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not bad at all

flow, lyric, emtion.......on point

nice drop....

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who made this beat? ive heard it before. joe beezy?

and anyways, song is dope.
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And To Protege... Yeah, The Beat Is Made By "The Klassix", And The Origional Song Is "Joe Budden - Better Me" Off Of "Halfway House"
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Old 03-31-2009, 11:21 AM   #18
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nice lyrics dude, I repsect cats with ability to write with serious meaning. props, I have hard time concentrating long enought to go deep lyrically, probably my biggest hold up in rap, anyways, flow is pretty tight too.. nice delivery and emotion in the verse... I can hear some buddens in there too.. nothing wrong with that, like you said joey the man.

beat is aight, I can't complain about anything on this track,, you pretty much nailed it my dude.

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Old 04-03-2009, 10:21 PM   #20
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cant go wrong with this beat...flow emotion everything was on point...this is some good shit here
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i think i'm gonna up this, just for fucks and giggles
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