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Old 03-25-2009, 06:23 PM   #1
 
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dis is one of da extra traccs i might not put on my mixtape i been workin on...juss some shit i did over dis beat..da beat i found very weird but it sound like some shit u can get high too....

ill let yall hear some stuff from the tape soon...its official...im pushin dis one song in my hood real hard...so far niggas feelin..imma drop it on here soon...n look out for a thorogang tape too






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Old 03-25-2009, 07:11 PM   #2
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Dope shit..

Beat was ill.. flow improved

I <3 Weed so this was dope..

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Old 03-25-2009, 07:51 PM   #3
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Thats whats up I can fuck wit this..didnt expect some shit like this from you and you pulled it off well...Stay up my dude...8/10
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Old 03-25-2009, 08:19 PM   #4
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damn this shit waz ill my nigg...
your flow improved alot..
solid drop homie..
u already know what it is..
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Old 03-25-2009, 08:29 PM   #5
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i LIKED THIS SHIT CUHZ...HOOK WAS CATCHY, FLOW IS GOOD
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u already know what it is most on this section been on that canibuz so they'll feel this one i like this one
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this was decent...everyone relates to weed songs...chorus is nice and verses were ight...flow was decent to..keep droppin
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Yo hold up *starts rolling that kush* this shit was tight famo!!
im feeling this shit plus you stepped up ur flow!! sounds coo 1
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Old 03-25-2009, 09:19 PM   #9
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hmm..it was str8

i aint like the beat but i guess it fit

ya flow was good i guess..but it was shakey sometimes. wasnt that smooth. lyrics were ok
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Dope shit..

Beat was ill.. flow improved

I <3 Weed so this was dope..

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goodlookz on da feed fam..i love weed to nillz

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Thats whats up I can fuck wit this..didnt expect some shit like this from you and you pulled it off well...Stay up my dude...8/10
jea..goodlookz...we gon get dat collab craccn soon

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damn this shit waz ill my nigg...
your flow improved alot..
solid drop homie..
u already know what it is..
goodlookz w/ da feed...i recorded dat tracc..imma send it to u whenver u get on aim

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i LIKED THIS SHIT CUHZ...HOOK WAS CATCHY, FLOW IS GOOD
GOOD SHIT NIGGA
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this was decent...everyone relates to weed songs...chorus is nice and verses were ight...flow was decent to..keep droppin
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Yo hold up *starts rolling that kush* this shit was tight famo!!
im feeling this shit plus you stepped up ur flow!! sounds coo 1
lol goodlookz famu

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hmm..it was str8

i aint like the beat but i guess it fit

ya flow was good i guess..but it was shakey sometimes. wasnt that smooth. lyrics were ok
goodlookz..appreciate it


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Old 03-26-2009, 06:48 PM   #11
 
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uppin............
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Old 03-26-2009, 07:58 PM   #12
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Old 03-26-2009, 08:02 PM   #13
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Old 03-26-2009, 10:47 PM   #14
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u might as well send it through a pm..
cuz i aint goin be on aim till next week..
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Old 03-26-2009, 11:23 PM   #15
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good fuckin drop im feelin this shit righh here
everyone righh ur flow def stepped up alot
u already kno to hit me if u wanna get sum shit done
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goodlookin w/ da feed heatz...i gotchu when i whip up some more shit
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Yo check out ma new shit also hit me for a collabo about that time for some new shit 1
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you know.. the verses sounded good man, rode the beat well, lyrics and delivery was on point for sure,

I had some trouble feelin the hook.. in my opinion you should remix the hook and fit it together better, just sounded off and took away from the track over all.. I mean don't get me wrong. I dig the concept but you shoulda done some shit like..

"get high, smokin on that la la.... ( then wait til the kick) and then bring your lalala in.


hard to explain.. but yea, flow is right.


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chorus could ave been better....multi's on point although you seem to struggle flowin big words lol....flow's gettin better tho.....overall good track mate....stay up
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you know.. the verses sounded good man, rode the beat well, lyrics and delivery was on point for sure,

I had some trouble feelin the hook.. in my opinion you should remix the hook and fit it together better, just sounded off and took away from the track over all.. I mean don't get me wrong. I dig the concept but you shoulda done some shit like..

"get high, smokin on that la la.... ( then wait til the kick) and then bring your lalala in.


hard to explain.. but yea, flow is right.


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i feel wat u sayin...goodlookzin fam
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chorus could ave been better....multi's on point although you seem to struggle flowin big words lol....flow's gettin better tho.....overall good track mate....stay up
didnt see ur feed..lol goodlokz
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