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PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 01:28 PM

Oh shit did i really just pull a Cam'ron?

Got on my Yung Stixx right quick and freestyled.. nothing serious.

Shout out to young king too

Fuck young sparks also..

"I learned everything i KNOW by saying FUCK SCHOOL,
I'm always safe, I learned from BRADY about the TUCK RULE"

^^^ I'm dope.. don't lie

Tom Chambers · 03-24-2009, 01:45 PM

hmmmmmmm FIRST!

youngking187 · 03-24-2009, 01:49 PM

solid track for a freestyle..
can def tell u been workin..
flow waz cool..few slips here and there but its cool..
lyrical content waz decent..
overal nice freestyle

ps..no shout out to king..how could u..

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 01:55 PM

My bad^^.. ahahah.. good looks on feed tho..

uppin

Witty Qwan · 03-24-2009, 02:27 PM

where da fuck is my shout out little bitch

Blizzy · 03-24-2009, 03:02 PM

flow was good but I noticed whenever you were deliverin a metaphor ya flow went off....may have to work on ya writin a bit more mate.....anyway had good lyrics with tight multi's.....stay up

props on shoutout

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 03:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blizzy

flow was good but I noticed whenever you were deliverin a metaphor ya flow went off....may have to work on ya writin a bit more mate.....anyway had good lyrics with tight multi's.....stay up

props on shoutout

Which proves ima much better writer than freestyler^^
Good looks on feed

ahahhaha @ the shoutouts.. SHOUTOUT TO everybody..

J~Souljah · 03-24-2009, 04:20 PM

not a freestyle...but decent track...didnt like the delivery though...it was too shaky...and some of the lines were too long so they didnt fit...that made the flow shaky as well...good beat choice though...i was gon rap to a variation of this...and i still may...

lyrics were GOOD though

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 04:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

not a freestyle...but decent track...didnt like the delivery though...it was too shaky...and some of the lines were too long so they didnt fit...that made the flow shaky as well...good beat choice though...i was gon rap to a variation of this...and i still may...

lyrics were GOOD though

ummm.. aight?

Good looks on feed my friend..

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 07:06 PM

Uppppppppp

Witty Qwan · 03-24-2009, 07:25 PM

thx for the shout out....now i can leave feed...all yall white niggaz sound alike...flow is better from what i remember, lyrics was cool, but ya voice couldve been clearer at sum points...adlibs are better...but still funny

i still got ya dumb it down free...Highest nigga what...I'll put u in a box like a magicians assistant....i got more shots then a bar got more metal then a car lot....

i seriously have that song on my old mp4

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 07:31 PM

^^^^

shit was wack.. ahaha'

highest nigga, what?!!?!?

RICH$LOCO · 03-24-2009, 08:18 PM

this was good but it really cant be a freestyle idk but its still dope i think some of ur lines are to long ta be a bar and it threw u off here n there but lyrical content u sound like budden on some parts

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-24-2009, 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RICH$LOCO

this was good but it really cant be a freestyle idk but its still dope i think some of ur lines are to long ta be a bar and it threw u off here n there but lyrical content u sound like budden on some parts

Good looks on feed..

UPPPPPPPPPP

Witty Qwan · 03-25-2009, 08:51 AM

by freestyled he means no subject matter.....i think

RICH$LOCO · 03-25-2009, 10:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

by freestyled he means no subject matter.....i think

thatz called freeverse

scool · 03-25-2009, 03:37 PM

it was decent

wuld never play this twice tho...

some words were mumbled.. quality is decent......

5,5/10

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-25-2009, 04:42 PM

Yea i mumble kinda when i talk^^

Something i'll fix.. Good looks on feed though^^

Upppppppppppppp

freestylin is something i worked on.. so believe what you want.. it's w.e

YoungJ · 03-25-2009, 05:32 PM

This was ight I dont like the background shit tho. Flow is gettin pretty nice PB..always brignin the lyrics just work on makin shit sound good. You can tell you didnt freestyle it off the top cuz some of your bars are stretched...usually freestyles should have a perfected flow or something close to it. The Im Only Gettin Older shits wack tho just dont talk at the end of the tracks either you can't entertain. This the second track you did that i heard you shout me out and call me a fag...if I wasnt that relevant you wouldnt do dat...but ay this was good my dude.

7/10

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-25-2009, 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J.ProV.

This was ight I dont like the background shit tho. Flow is gettin pretty nice PB..always brignin the lyrics just work on makin shit sound good. You can tell you didnt freestyle it off the top cuz some of your bars are stretched...usually freestyles should have a perfected flow or something close to it. The Im Only Gettin Older shits wack tho just dont talk at the end of the tracks either you can't entertain. This the second track you did that i heard you shout me out and call me a fag...if I wasnt that relevant you wouldnt do dat...but ay this was good my dude.

7/10

No lie.. i picked a beat and went on it.. the bars that were stretched were ones i had in my head but i suck at wording shit or putting it an order.. thats why theres words that prolly weren't even needed to be said but thats a prob i need work on.. & i mumble..

I didn't call anyone a FAG.. i said "Get off the autotune you sound like a fagget" just tryna get my opinion to you.. feel me?

& obviously i entertained you enough to listen to me talk for a minute.. =/

good looks on feed.. upppp

YoungJ · 03-25-2009, 05:39 PM

na i respect it my dude...

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-26-2009, 04:46 PM

Up..........................

Witty Qwan · 03-26-2009, 06:04 PM

bumping my shit for feed^^^

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 03-26-2009, 11:30 PM

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

YUNG STIXX · 03-28-2009, 10:48 PM

shit was koo my nigga, imma holla at you for a collab

03-24-2009, 01:28 PM	#1
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	\|PB\| Get No Younger \|MaSteRMiNdiN\| \|PB\| Get No Younger \|MaSteRMiNdiN\| Oh shit did i really just pull a Cam'ron? Got on my Yung Stixx right quick and freestyled.. nothing serious. Shout out to young king too Fuck young sparks also.. "I learned everything i KNOW by saying FUCK SCHOOL, I'm always safe, I learned from BRADY about the TUCK RULE" ^^^ I'm dope.. don't lie __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito Last edited by PBMaSteRMiNdiN; 03-24-2009 at 03:20 PM.

03-24-2009, 01:49 PM	#3
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	solid track for a freestyle.. can def tell u been workin.. flow waz cool..few slips here and there but its cool.. lyrical content waz decent.. overal nice freestyle ps..no shout out to king..how could u.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

03-24-2009, 01:55 PM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	My bad^^.. ahahah.. good looks on feed tho.. uppin __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

03-24-2009, 03:02 PM	#6
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	flow was good but I noticed whenever you were deliverin a metaphor ya flow went off....may have to work on ya writin a bit more mate.....anyway had good lyrics with tight multi's.....stay up props on shoutout __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

03-24-2009, 07:06 PM	#10
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Uppppppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

03-24-2009, 01:45 PM	#2
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	hmmmmmmm FIRST!

03-24-2009, 02:27 PM	#5
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	where da fuck is my shout out little bitch

03-24-2009, 04:20 PM	#8
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	not a freestyle...but decent track...didnt like the delivery though...it was too shaky...and some of the lines were too long so they didnt fit...that made the flow shaky as well...good beat choice though...i was gon rap to a variation of this...and i still may... lyrics were GOOD though

03-24-2009, 07:25 PM	#11
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	thx for the shout out....now i can leave feed...all yall white niggaz sound alike...flow is better from what i remember, lyrics was cool, but ya voice couldve been clearer at sum points...adlibs are better...but still funny i still got ya dumb it down free...Highest nigga what...I'll put u in a box like a magicians assistant....i got more shots then a bar got more metal then a car lot.... i seriously have that song on my old mp4

03-24-2009, 07:31 PM	#12
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	^^^^ shit was wack.. ahaha' highest nigga, what?!!?!? __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

03-24-2009, 08:18 PM	#13
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	this was good but it really cant be a freestyle idk but its still dope i think some of ur lines are to long ta be a bar and it threw u off here n there but lyrical content u sound like budden on some parts __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

03-25-2009, 08:51 AM	#15
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	by freestyled he means no subject matter.....i think

03-25-2009, 03:37 PM	#17
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	it was decent wuld never play this twice tho... some words were mumbled.. quality is decent...... 5,5/10

03-25-2009, 04:42 PM	#18
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Yea i mumble kinda when i talk^^ Something i'll fix.. Good looks on feed though^^ Upppppppppppppp freestylin is something i worked on.. so believe what you want.. it's w.e __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

03-25-2009, 05:32 PM	#19
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	This was ight I dont like the background shit tho. Flow is gettin pretty nice PB..always brignin the lyrics just work on makin shit sound good. You can tell you didnt freestyle it off the top cuz some of your bars are stretched...usually freestyles should have a perfected flow or something close to it. The Im Only Gettin Older shits wack tho just dont talk at the end of the tracks either you can't entertain. This the second track you did that i heard you shout me out and call me a fag...if I wasnt that relevant you wouldnt do dat...but ay this was good my dude. 7/10

03-25-2009, 05:39 PM	#21
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	na i respect it my dude...

03-26-2009, 04:46 PM	#22
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Up.......................... __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

03-26-2009, 06:04 PM	#23
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	bumping my shit for feed^^^

03-26-2009, 11:30 PM	#24
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

03-28-2009, 10:48 PM	#25
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,900 Repped: 411 Repped 1,295 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	shit was koo my nigga, imma holla at you for a collab __________________ MiXTAPE DROPPING S00N

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