Crazy World ft. B

daboss336 · 01-28-2009, 10:29 AM

Produced by: VYBE
My solo jont, holla at me. this a real nigga feel me song. comment if u like, hate if u want...u know its always welcome.

youngking187 · 01-28-2009, 01:41 PM

the beat is ill..i waz bout to go off this beat..lls
flow waz kool on most of the track..
lyrical content waz nice..good way to stay on topic..
glad to here a song with a message in it on here..
the chorus couldve been better...8.3/10

daboss336 · 01-28-2009, 01:58 PM

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Originally Posted by youngking187

the beat is ill..i waz bout to go off this beat..lls
flow waz kool on most of the track..
lyrical content waz nice..good way to stay on topic..
glad to here a song with a message in it on here..
the chorus couldve been better...8.3/10

ayy thats whats up my nigga, i appreciate dat no bullshit. i wanted to keep the same chorus but put more emotion in it. good look though homie

ortiz · 01-28-2009, 09:29 PM

song wasnt bad...the quality really turned me off tho...u got an okay flow needs a little polishing but the delivery was solid....

daboss336 · 01-28-2009, 09:31 PM

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Originally Posted by ortiz

song wasnt bad...the quality really turned me off tho...u got an okay flow needs a little polishing but the delivery was solid....

lol good look on the feedback bruh

ortiz · 01-28-2009, 09:33 PM

lol my bad for the skimpiness, in a rush ill drop better feed in a min

daboss336 · 01-29-2009, 10:45 AM

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Originally Posted by ortiz

lol my bad for the skimpiness, in a rush ill drop better feed in a min

lol thats whts up

01-28-2009, 10:29 AM	#1
daboss336 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Green$Boro a.k.a. Da GAte City a.k.a. Broccoli City Posts: 61 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Crazy World ft. B Crazy World ft. B Produced by: VYBE My solo jont, holla at me. this a real nigga feel me song. comment if u like, hate if u want...u know its always welcome. Last edited by daboss336; 01-28-2009 at 10:42 AM.

01-28-2009, 01:41 PM	#2
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	the beat is ill..i waz bout to go off this beat..lls flow waz kool on most of the track.. lyrical content waz nice..good way to stay on topic.. glad to here a song with a message in it on here.. the chorus couldve been better...8.3/10 __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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01-28-2009, 09:29 PM	#4
ortiz Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: the dirty Posts: 114 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	song wasnt bad...the quality really turned me off tho...u got an okay flow needs a little polishing but the delivery was solid....

01-28-2009, 09:33 PM	#6
ortiz Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: the dirty Posts: 114 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	lol my bad for the skimpiness, in a rush ill drop better feed in a min