New Song - - Hello Heartbreak

TheRealProtege · 01-26-2009, 11:13 PM

Heres a joint off mah debut cd

Love & Heartbreak

I wrote, produced and recorded all the tracks, so enjoy. =)

Protege - Hello Heartbreak

-G Baller- · 01-27-2009, 05:55 AM

people gon say u tryna jack kanye with the title "... & heartbreak" sounds quite familiar

just pointing that out

-G Baller- · 01-27-2009, 05:59 AM

the beat: very impressive if u made this urself

the singing is horrible man, that shit sound wack as fuck u have to either use autotune or sing in a way lower note IMO.. (i thought i heard a glimpse of autotune in there tho)

the rapping is good, i like that shit, you got your own style and voice and thats good.. I'm feeling it

quality is very good

damn here the hook again

look man seriously, if you want to be taken serious u need to get rid of that hook cuz that shit kiillls the song (not in a good way) ... holla at somebody else do that hook

aside from the horrible hook, the song is pretty good

TheRealProtege · 01-27-2009, 12:39 PM

much respect for the feed man^^

ortiz · 01-28-2009, 09:27 PM

beats too iffy for my taste...

singing needs work...its maddd off key....needs tuning and lots of layers lol

flow fell off a few times..but wasnt too bad
quality was okay....not really compressed sounding or anything
delivery needs some work its all over the place....

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01-26-2009, 11:13 PM	#1
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	New Song - - Hello Heartbreak New Song - - Hello Heartbreak Heres a joint off mah debut cd Love & Heartbreak I wrote, produced and recorded all the tracks, so enjoy. =) Protege - Hello Heartbreak __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

01-27-2009, 12:39 PM	#4
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	much respect for the feed man^^ __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

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01-27-2009, 05:55 AM	#2
-G Baller- Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 290 Repped: 4 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 13 Times in 8 Posts	people gon say u tryna jack kanye with the title "... & heartbreak" sounds quite familiar just pointing that out

01-27-2009, 05:59 AM	#3
-G Baller- Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 290 Repped: 4 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 13 Times in 8 Posts	the beat: very impressive if u made this urself the singing is horrible man, that shit sound wack as fuck u have to either use autotune or sing in a way lower note IMO.. (i thought i heard a glimpse of autotune in there tho) the rapping is good, i like that shit, you got your own style and voice and thats good.. I'm feeling it quality is very good damn here the hook again look man seriously, if you want to be taken serious u need to get rid of that hook cuz that shit kiillls the song (not in a good way) ... holla at somebody else do that hook aside from the horrible hook, the song is pretty good

01-28-2009, 09:27 PM	#5
ortiz Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: the dirty Posts: 114 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	beats too iffy for my taste... singing needs work...its maddd off key....needs tuning and lots of layers lol flow fell off a few times..but wasnt too bad quality was okay....not really compressed sounding or anything delivery needs some work its all over the place.... 1