+++YoungKing-Real Talk+++

youngking187 · 01-18-2009, 04:55 AM

something quick..flow kinda fell off at the end..
i might rerecord it...just decided to drop it..
im tired as shit..its like 4 am..only did one take..lol
i got some real heat coming..so be on the look out for dat..

Quote:

(verse..1)
i do it for my family, niggaz that understand me..//
if u dont understand me,theres all ways a plan b..//
chanting my name at the grammies,hand me..//
my trophy,till yall niggaz awoked me..//
back to reality,hate when my dreams lie to me..//
dreams is unreality,so why i keep challenging..//
fortunate,portions that i think thats coming my way..//
uh huh,im god's son,so nigga why hate??
even though times is rough for me,out here..//
give me my props,cuz nigga im still out here..//
i dont plan on giving up,niggaz cuz i give a fuck..//
my mova,put me on this earth to get rich is fuck..//
i ain't going let her down,i promised to make it..//
i promised to spit fire,like im honoring Satan..//
bombing the hating,like im armed with the patience..//
niggaz hiding there face,they wearing masks like jason..//
in the projects,happy on the 1st of the month..//
my momma,invested with that work on the front..//
didnt have much,never seen no grass in the ground..//
looking for an answer,don't know if it could be found..//
hustling in school,where selling weed was no rule..//
hanging with the crews,fools,stayed on my 1's and 2's..//
everyday on the block,satan just past threw..//
some many deaths,the powerline,i put my last shoes..//
watch out they'll blast you,black ski mask fools..//
rest in peace prints,waz the most populars tattoo's..//
no wealth,my mother never asked for no help,..//
cereal wit no milk..broke down and asked god for glory..//
this is my,this is my story..//

yea this my story...

(talking)
u know...times is rough out here these days..
but you gotta keep fighting till the final round..naww mean
i remember one day..i asked my mova why we dont get no money
like the jayz's..the oprahs..bill gates
the pdiddy..will smith..
she told me..9 times out of 10..things aint goin get handed to me..
u gotta go get it yourself..and i took that statement
and ran wit it..like forreal nigga..i went out start pumping on the block..
niggaz be like aye ro u got that...i be like yea nigga i got you...
shid i went to go get it didnt i..lol
but yea man..gotta be patient..make smart decisions you know..
and you gone be str8...im still in the hood..
but im eating though..better believe that..
this real talk.....nice having yall....(applause)

inna sense · 01-18-2009, 05:53 AM

awesome flow...nice lyrics and sick rhymes...good track im feeling it

SaF HeaT · 01-18-2009, 06:57 AM

im actually realllllllly feelin this track faam emotion was koo i do think u could have showed alil more but it doesnt effect the track too much

flow delivery and lyrics were most def on point u stepped up wit the flow good shit my g

RICH$LOCO · 01-18-2009, 12:20 PM

u definitely been improving homie like ya lyrics and the outro nice too

youngking187 · 01-18-2009, 02:25 PM

.........accidently posted twice..

youngking187 · 01-18-2009, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RICH$LOCO

u definitely been improving homie like ya lyrics and the outro nice too

good lookz on the feed my nigg...appreciate it

Quote:

Originally Posted by SaF HeaT

im actually realllllllly feelin this track faam emotion was koo i do think u could have showed alil more but it doesnt effect the track too much
flow delivery and lyrics were most def on point u stepped up wit the flow good shit my g

good lookz on the feed my nigg...really appreciate it homie..

Quote:

Originally Posted by inna sense

awesome flow...nice lyrics and sick rhymes...good track im feeling it

thanx...really appreciate that...good lookz fam...

Fre3dom · 01-18-2009, 06:10 PM

Liked it alot...beat was nice...flow was mostly on point u fell off occasionally...but still nice....lyrics were ok/...ive seen u do better....but overall nice track keep doing ya thng...check mines fam
1

ortiz · 01-18-2009, 11:25 PM

good drop man....i feel you on ya lyrics.....punches werent too bad.....flow fell off a few times but still mostly good...i liked this too, alotta heads on here pretty dope...

youngking187 · 01-19-2009, 02:22 AM

good lookz on the feed yall..
bumppppppppp...
get at me bout collabs niccahz!!!!!

youngking187 · 01-19-2009, 08:58 PM

uppppppppppz

YoungJ · 01-19-2009, 09:24 PM

Good shit my dude.......u tryna collab soon

youngking187 · 01-20-2009, 06:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J.ProV.

Good shit my dude.......u tryna collab soon

good lookz nigg..appreciate it..
get at me!!!!..send me some shit...

upppppppppzzz...feed..any kind..neg/pos...it dont matter

Tom Chambers · 01-20-2009, 08:25 PM

i'll feedback this tonight

youngking187 · 01-21-2009, 01:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

i'll feedback this tonight

aight cool

youngking187 · 01-24-2009, 07:37 PM

uppppppppzzzz..

RICH$LOCO · 01-25-2009, 01:44 PM

we need to collab again homie hit me up

youngking187 · 01-25-2009, 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RICH$LOCO

we need to collab again homie hit me up

cool..im working on some shit now..
send me some shit..

Tom Chambers · 01-25-2009, 03:47 PM

your really stepping your shit up it seems every song..........its very impressive...............liek i remember the first song i heard from you....flow was all over the place...delivery was dull...........

and now your flow is getting pretty solid............delivery still has some kinks to iron out....but its getting there....................keep stepping this shit up.......maybe if you get some better quality...i'll get @ chu for a collab on my album.....

keep droppnig and stepping up tho.....

youngking187 · 01-25-2009, 03:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tom Chambers

your really stepping your shit up it seems every song..........its very impressive...............liek i remember the first song i heard from you....flow was all over the place...delivery was dull...........

and now your flow is getting pretty solid............delivery still has some kinks to iron out....but its getting there....................keep stepping this shit up.......maybe if you get some better quality...i'll get @ chu for a collab on my album.....

keep droppnig and stepping up tho.....

good lookz..appreciate the feed..
definently will be working on the delivery..
much respect....just let me know bout the collab.
i could do hooks or what ever....im down

youngking187 · 01-28-2009, 07:13 PM

upppppppzzzzzz

YoungGunna · 01-29-2009, 12:30 AM

cool beat....lyrics was pretty decent...flow was on point as well...aint seen you on here since da text days lol...good shyt tho ill prolly holla for a collab wen i get my mic 1

youngking187 · 01-29-2009, 01:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by .........

cool beat....lyrics was pretty decent...flow was on point as well...aint seen you on here since da text days lol...good shyt tho ill prolly holla for a collab wen i get my mic 1

good lookz on the feed my nigg..
i dont remember ....... lol..
did u have different name???
but holla at me when u get that mic

YoungGunna · 01-29-2009, 02:12 AM

its gunna...lol imma holla at u asap tho mabe by next week...i can still record sumtin right now if ya want but my mic isnt good...i could use the practise tho lol

youngking187 · 01-29-2009, 02:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by .........

its gunna...lol imma holla at u asap tho mabe by next week...i can still record sumtin right now if ya want but my mic isnt good...i could use the practise tho lol

oh thats whats good..i remember now..lol.

youngking187 · 01-30-2009, 02:31 AM

bumppppppppppp

01-18-2009, 06:57 AM	#3
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	im actually realllllllly feelin this track faam emotion was koo i do think u could have showed alil more but it doesnt effect the track too much flow delivery and lyrics were most def on point u stepped up wit the flow good shit my g __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

01-18-2009, 12:20 PM	#4
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,570 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	u definitely been improving homie like ya lyrics and the outro nice too __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

01-18-2009, 02:25 PM	#5
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	.........accidently posted twice.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

01-19-2009, 02:22 AM	#9
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	good lookz on the feed yall.. bumppppppppp... get at me bout collabs niccahz!!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

01-19-2009, 08:58 PM	#10
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	uppppppppppz __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

01-18-2009, 05:53 AM	#2
inna sense Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: germany Posts: 152 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	awesome flow...nice lyrics and sick rhymes...good track im feeling it

01-18-2009, 06:10 PM	#7
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	Liked it alot...beat was nice...flow was mostly on point u fell off occasionally...but still nice....lyrics were ok/...ive seen u do better....but overall nice track keep doing ya thng...check mines fam 1

01-18-2009, 11:25 PM	#8
ortiz Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: the dirty Posts: 114 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	good drop man....i feel you on ya lyrics.....punches werent too bad.....flow fell off a few times but still mostly good...i liked this too, alotta heads on here pretty dope...

01-19-2009, 09:24 PM	#11
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Good shit my dude.......u tryna collab soon

01-20-2009, 08:25 PM	#13
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	i'll feedback this tonight

01-24-2009, 07:37 PM	#15
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	uppppppppzzzz.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

01-25-2009, 01:44 PM	#16
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,570 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	we need to collab again homie hit me up __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

01-25-2009, 03:47 PM	#18
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	your really stepping your shit up it seems every song..........its very impressive...............liek i remember the first song i heard from you....flow was all over the place...delivery was dull........... and now your flow is getting pretty solid............delivery still has some kinks to iron out....but its getting there....................keep stepping this shit up.......maybe if you get some better quality...i'll get @ chu for a collab on my album..... keep droppnig and stepping up tho.....

01-28-2009, 07:13 PM	#20
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	upppppppzzzzzz __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

01-29-2009, 12:30 AM	#21
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,079 Repped: 348 Repped 128 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	cool beat....lyrics was pretty decent...flow was on point as well...aint seen you on here since da text days lol...good shyt tho ill prolly holla for a collab wen i get my mic 1 __________________

01-29-2009, 02:12 AM	#23
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,079 Repped: 348 Repped 128 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	its gunna...lol imma holla at u asap tho mabe by next week...i can still record sumtin right now if ya want but my mic isnt good...i could use the practise tho lol __________________

01-30-2009, 02:31 AM	#25
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumppppppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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