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Old 01-14-2009, 09:52 AM   #1
 
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Dude ain't no one that posts on this board, but after to listening to some battles y'all post, I thought I'd show you how a battle should sound.



Fuck a battle, get Royce on the phone, cause this is a Slaughterhouse,
talking via YouTube, like he can't even afford a keyboard an mouse,
El's asking me to call his house, fuck it, he can listen to me now!
don't need no special effects, cause it sounds like your recording on cassettes
we playing Russian roulette, except I got Kevlar strapped to my head and chest,
I can just see this faggot in fishnets, with a male brunette, singing an ABBA duet,
you should fret, cause I'm up there in the ranks of vet's, you just a cadet,
I'll shadow you in, like your photography suffering a bad vignette,
you a sidekick at best, whereas I'm running Audio like Weapon X
I'll force feed you arsenic an sell your parts in a basket on the black market,
I stomped on you, notice that's past-tense, this battles just my ticket to broadcast it,
I already outclassed em', can't turn off my flow like a busted faucet,
you should forfeit, before I beat you like a midget in a gauntlet,
I could spit in Gaelic, French, an Czech or not at all, see?.....
all you need to understand, is I am your downfall, B.

Fair few personal's, so not all of you will get the lyrics, but peep!
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Old 01-14-2009, 11:39 AM   #2
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Who in tha hell iz... The El?
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Old 01-14-2009, 12:06 PM   #3
 
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Dude ain't no one that posts on this board
Uhh.. Not too bright huh?
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nigga got fuckin 7 posts

im cryingg

how u start altercations with a nigga in less then 6 posts

this cant be reality



the link aint work tho
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Old 01-14-2009, 05:01 PM   #5
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Uhh.. Not too bright huh?
i didnt read whachu had to say. didnt matta to me. just went and listend to tha track. doeznt have nothin to do bout not bein bright. dnt get tough lol
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Old 01-14-2009, 05:37 PM   #6
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Listened, and in all honesty I'm not feeling this..
Felt like this coulda went harder for being a diss.
Quality's straight, but your flow on this is not so good...Sounds rushed at many times
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Just listened tho

co sign @ ockwurdz

sentences were rushed

try and circumsize those lines....and make em shorter so it fits within the beat

pause @ circumsize tho
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Old 01-15-2009, 05:47 AM   #8
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this was ok but the whole verse wasnt on beat really like everything was rushed i definitely like ur quality tho its easy to improve on flow
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