J-Deezy - We Got It Snippet

J-Deezy · 01-12-2009, 06:05 PM

Currently workin on diz track az im postin it lol

Tom Chambers · 01-13-2009, 10:10 AM

this was a pretty good track.....you held a nice delivery...and the beat reminded me of like a dre beat.......

-G Baller- · 01-13-2009, 10:59 AM

lol i dont check out "snippets" from internetrappers man, wait til u finish it and post the full song lmao

and internetrapper is not an insult

J-Deezy · 01-13-2009, 11:16 AM

lol aight. bump

YUNG STIXX · 01-13-2009, 11:21 AM

LOL THiS NIGGA DEEZY POSTING SONGS IN THE MIDDLE OF MAKING IT...FUNNY TYPE NIGGA...BUT THIS SHIT SOUNDS HOT...U MADE THIS BEAT?
OH AND CHECK OUT MY NEW FREESTYLE & LEAVE FEED
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J-Deezy · 01-13-2009, 11:36 AM

yea i made tha beat and i'll check it ina bit

Charismatic · 01-13-2009, 01:40 PM

Whats with the beat tag at the start? Heh.

Flow was up and down which I didn't really like. I'd recommend picking a flow and sticking to it, and switching up in the right parts(End of a bar, for example), and if you do wanna switch, do it half-way through a verse or every 2 bars, have some method, not just randomly.

Delivery was alright. But you sound like any other rapper. Try and be different. Lyrics weren't anything stand out to me, need atleast some one liners to remember. You fell off beat here and there. But you got the general idea, just do something different, you ain't gotta sound like everybody else.

Props+peace

01-12-2009, 06:05 PM	#1
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	J-Deezy - We Got It Snippet J-Deezy - We Got It Snippet Currently workin on diz track az im postin it lol __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

01-13-2009, 11:16 AM	#4
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	lol aight. bump __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

01-13-2009, 11:36 AM	#6
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	yea i made tha beat and i'll check it ina bit __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

01-13-2009, 01:40 PM	#7
Charismatic Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: The Universe Posts: 81 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whats with the beat tag at the start? Heh. Flow was up and down which I didn't really like. I'd recommend picking a flow and sticking to it, and switching up in the right parts(End of a bar, for example), and if you do wanna switch, do it half-way through a verse or every 2 bars, have some method, not just randomly. Delivery was alright. But you sound like any other rapper. Try and be different. Lyrics weren't anything stand out to me, need atleast some one liners to remember. You fell off beat here and there. But you got the general idea, just do something different, you ain't gotta sound like everybody else. Props+peace __________________ http://www.KarizmatikMusic.com

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01-13-2009, 10:10 AM	#2
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	this was a pretty good track.....you held a nice delivery...and the beat reminded me of like a dre beat.......

01-13-2009, 10:59 AM	#3
-G Baller- Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 290 Repped: 4 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 13 Times in 8 Posts	lol i dont check out "snippets" from internetrappers man, wait til u finish it and post the full song lmao and internetrapper is not an insult

01-13-2009, 11:21 AM	#5
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,902 Repped: 411 Repped 1,298 Times in 405 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	LOL THiS NIGGA DEEZY POSTING SONGS IN THE MIDDLE OF MAKING IT...FUNNY TYPE NIGGA...BUT THIS SHIT SOUNDS HOT...U MADE THIS BEAT? OH AND CHECK OUT MY NEW FREESTYLE & LEAVE FEED 166 1