Lyrikcha

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Mar-Velous

wooo yall check it out and hit us up with feed me an dlyrik finally teamed up and did an album ahah holla with da feed woooooo

mickilla

downloading now.

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Fre3dom

iight ill check it and leave feed...but ppl better rep and start leavin feed on mines shit from now on LOL

-G Baller-

ima just spam this thread and reply every time i heard a new song, fuck ur thread


intro track is straight crack coming out that pyrex pot
10/10

-G Baller-

miscommunication was good, great hook, amazing quality by lyrik and dope ass verse from both, funny line "ow shit ima have to call mcgyver"

still standing

this beat is dope as fuck

but yo... on the real, marv u shulda let me did that hook cuz u did it wrong IMO, it dont sound right playboy, it's playing for the second time now and its really bad lol, ur a rapper, not a singer

LOL lyrik used the autotune???????????????, LOOOLLL

what happened to the t-pain trash talk???? lmfao seems like u jacking me now hahaha

verse is flawless tho, flow is crazy

lol here's the hook again

i keep it real: this might be lyrik's best verse, of the album lol and its wasted on the worst song, so i'll never bump it again.. damn shame

-G Baller-

economy

dont like the hook on this one either, but when i hear your verse i wonder why you dont just rap cuz thats clearly what you're really good at marv, flow is flawless shit is real dope

lyrik delivers as usual

Mar-Velous

aha yea man da hook on still standin i iked at first but after bumpin it i wanted to redoit but fuk it aha

SaF HeaT

damn i thought i was hostin this for yall lol

well ill check it out in the morning

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Fre3dom

1st track - beat was ok....nuthin special.......lyric...ur flow is always nice and is on this 2....but some of ur lyrics i dont fuck with...too eminemish......the hook was kinda weak....but this was overall a good intro track

2nd track- the beat is nice....loved the guitar intro....lyric...are u eminem in disguise? ur style is almost identical to his....flow is incredibe again...lyrics were aiight....the hook was very bad in my opinion....marv...flow is nice...lyrics aiight...emotion was there this time...the story is cool tho guys...but im not feelin this much...i think the hook brings this down a lot

3rd - lol i didnt like this beat on sinimas page lol...but i'll listen...flow again from lyric is sick...lyrics were much better on this track...ur best verse so far.. chamberz....flow was good but you seem to have the same flow every track iunno....lyrics were nice...emotion was really good u sounded mad as fuck lol...i liked ur verse....marv...flow was ill...i like when u rap faster....lyrics were kool....this is the best track so far

4th - beat is ill....lyrics story was real nice...but u sound too whiny sometimes ....no need to put that much tone on your voice...again i feel like u tryna be too overthe top and like em too much but nice track tho

5th - beat was average..sounded like an eminem beat...lyrics verse was nice...hook again was weak....marvs verse was nice as well....i wanna see a diff style and topic coming up tho coz so far its been gangsta or bragging...not much diversity

6th - beat is really nice ...really like it.....omg...wtf....what the holy fucking ghost is that hook lol....no offence but that hook is atrocious...horrible...marv ur flow and lyrics are nice...but the auto tune is terrible....again that hook is awfullyric again u are the flow king lol.....such a good flow...lyrics were kool...again u make ur voice sound whiny tho...but i like ur verse a lot...Cdubz..the autotune is awful...flow was slow but ok...lyrics ok...this song could abeen hot with a good hook and no autotune...this shuda been cut

7th - beat is nice...autotune again isnt used properly...hook wasnt too bad actually...marv ur flow is sick on this...good lyrics feel u on this 1...lyrick...damn fam...seriously u r the flow king i just crowned u officially...any beat u flow to perfectly...lyrics are really nice.....really real track guys...my fav so far

8th - lol u love eminem style beats huh....ok both of u were good on this track...tho once again u are let down a lot by the hook

9th - LOOOOL another em style beat...u like sinima huh......lyric ur flow is identical to eminems...but nice....marv u do good on this as well....one of the better tracks so far

10th - nice to hear a diff typa beat...changes it up a bit....marv rips this...nice job fam....lyric did his thing on this too....nice track guys i liked it

half way thru thoughts - beats are very similar in style and so are the topics....a lot of gangsta stuff...the lack of variety is hindering this so far so is the weak hooks..some hot tracks tho...hopefully the next 11 will change up a bit

11 - beat again is similar in style to the others...the hook is better on this tho...same topic as most of the tracks tho...u do your thing tho

12 - beat sounds like a lullaby, creepy child nightmare lol....lyric u murdered this no pun intended lol...i liked the hook even tho it was like a verse....marv u did good but the flow was a bit off at times....this is by far the best track so far...REALLY feelin this!!!

13 - wasnt feelin the beat....ya both did good on this tho...aiight track

14 - finally a diff topic....beat is nice marv did nice....this is a bit late isnt it lol now u got obama....hook was again a bit weak....lyric u keep spitting like this and u could get signed....really nice..flow is phenominal again...like this 1

15 - very underground....hook was a bit better then usual...u 2 still need to work on em tho....i like this track yall did ya thing

16 - beat is dope...another gangsta track...with a story....hook again is weak...its an aiight track

17 - LOL u bastards i was gonna use this....but the guy cant sing very well...thank fuck u changed up tho....lyric i liked ya vrse but ur unneccesarily grotesque sometimes...this aint a track for that....marv..ur flow was aiight ya lyrics were ok...nice track

18 - beat is nice....this hook was actually aiight ...yall did ya thing i like this 1

19 - lol kinda ironic this track...ur talkin bout all the problems like thugs and killings yet your whole album is talking about killing people and stuff lol....hook coulda been better...but i liked the track it was aiight

20 - MOTHERFUCKERS!!!! GRRRRR....this is the beat to my song "London" i posted up aggggggeeesss ago...BITERS lol...nah but i like it...nice hook i like it...finally a good hook...i like this track....i think mines was better tho lol lol lol

21 - already left feed....still didnt rob me :)

overall - LOng fuckin tape lol....u have some really good tracks on this album...then u have complete fillers....some are banging with really good beats...others sound incredibly similar to many of the others...yall needa get diff beats so none sound too alike..i think u may have overused sinima...on another note...flows and lyrics were very good...entertaining verses...hooks were a real problem tho...they let a lot of songs down...yall needa work on em...and another flaw was the fact that nearly every song had the same topic...murder murder....ill kill u....dark gloomy story...or bragging...when u changed it up is where u really shone on the album...my fav track is def assassins code...bananas!!!!


good points :

flows
lyrics
some beats
u combine nicely

flaws:

beats too similar
lack of variety in beats and topics
weak hooks
autotune

It was a straight album...that showed a little inexperience...i think u got some stuff to work on and the next one if u do 1 will be hot

overall rating: 6.5-7/10

no hate at all...im kool with both of u and marvs been fam since gworld...good shit guys stay up

Lyrikcha

thx for the feed...Yea I definetly know we need to work on the hooks but I thought the variety aspect of it was present...I mean there was gangsteristic type tracks like Miscom pt 1-2 and In the hood...but like She made me do it...thats talkin bout lyrics in hip hop gettin people to do shit...thats not talkin gangsta as per say....but yo thx for the feed...Next time im a do a spoken word and have all sampled hooks and shit haha nah...but im a come harder on my hook game...Now I gotta sit on Msn and listen to Scool talk shit about how he got his hook game down and blah blah blah...

and a 6.5/10 dam....kinda harsh...I mean our hooks were mediocre with the exception of one very bad one...but dam, bejeeeesus man...people gon see ur take on this and be like fuck them wanna be gangsta ass hook floppin dooshes...

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Fre3dom

Lmfaooooooooooooooooooooooo

nah fam...see u can do hooks...like on assassins code that 1 was dope..just keep at it...make it catchy rather then complex...and u already got flow and lyrics down so ur set man

-G Baller-

hahaha u bum ass wigga jarod best believe i got my hookgame down and you aint shit you punk bitch :)

Lyrikcha

see...i told ya freedom...

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TheRealProtege

the fallen was nice. will listen to more later

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TheRealProtege

wow just heard sound of revenge, def. tight

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RICH$LOCO

damn marv cant believe u didnt tell me u used the beat i sent u for the westcoast tip song damn ill get at yall with some real feed when im done hearing this

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Fre3dom

lyric i said 6.5-7/10...somewhere between that on a first listen basis.....to properly rate i wud need to hear it ll for a while

Mar-Velous

wat beat was that i dont even remember

but thx 4 feed yall good and bad appreciate yall listenin
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Lyrikcha

yea I mean wtf u sayin my shit sound Eminemish so u dont fuck with some of my shit.... caz I like violence??...caz my flow is crazy?? Caz i kill every song lyric and flow wise??? Huh motha fucker...well WELLLLLL!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

nah im playin but yo yea take a few more listens...caz I mean u went Simon from American Idol on this shit...just everything, not one song u actually just thought was awesome with no flaws

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Fre3dom

simon cowel LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO well were both english ........maybe were just big criticisers

nah i wasnt trying to be overly harsh just was tryna show u guys where u could improve....if u look at my review i said i liked most of the tracks....and i thought assassins code was really good...loved that 1!! maybe its coz u said it was an album rather thena mixtape....coz every1 judges a mixtape and an album completely diff....4 instance...a mixtapes flaws wud generally get overlooked whereas if its an album everything has to be perfect or ppl will mention flaws....i dunno....ill listen again...maybe i was too harsh.. ididnt think so.. but i will review my review

TheRealProtege

okay lets see...

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TheRealProtege

this outlet.has a real good beat and lyrics first verse goes amazing with it, woulda preferred if it was just you spitting for like 2 mins like that... chorus...naw.. second verse is okay 2

fuck the economy,

assassins code has a nice beat, good flow, but i cant see mahself listening to it again, prolly cuz it gets repetetive, and the chorus sounds exactly the same as ur verses

another day in america. wow that first verse is really good.. yet again, the chorus is lacking BIG TIME

we run this town. very good beat... wasnt feelin anothin rapper wise though, purdy much any1 givin this beat coulda came just as good as that, if not alot better

Dexter. chea, love the beat and flow.. nice. only problem is 4 minutes? really... too long for my attention span. sorry.

MisCommunication Pt 1. decent filler track.. content and beats kind of getting repetitive at this point. chorus is wack.

still standing. okay...autotune? hmmm..... naw... that chorus is nooo.. it sounds really horrible. sorry. first verse sounds alot better with the autotune. lyrics verse sounds really weird, your using autotune huh? dont really go with ur voice.

destructive force. okay last track ima listen to for now... that intro/bridge sounded really bad.. w.e u used to make his voice sound like that didnt sound good. content/flow/lyrics kind of the same stuff going on through most of the cd. okay chorus is good, at least can tell it apart from the verse, not feelin the slowdown second 4 bars tho.

well my fav tracks so far are easily fallen and sound of revenge, they are tracks that can stand on their own legs strong content verse/flow and both have good choruses to keep ur attention in between the verses.

so for an underground (real underground cd) so far its at a average 7. but since it is a REAL underground cd, some advice, i would shorten the tracklist... noone wants to listen to that many tracks.

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Lyrikcha

dam...now I know why 50 feels the way he does...I dont think he could ever come back the way people want him to caz there expectations are to high...I mean dam, yea maybe freedoms right about it bein called an album so people jump on everything more but come on...I dropped House M.C. and that shit got an 8.5 on average by everybody...and I look back at that and didnt even really think that album was that great...then I do the Darkly Dreamin Lyrikcha Mixtape and that gets a 9.5 and 9's with only 8 songs and a bunch of skits...then we get together and get studio quality and make a array of songs with stories and people is like ehhhh not impressed?...i mean dam, all the ass cheeks songs I been hearin lately on here...I can strongly agree on some of the hooks and yea some beats do got the same vibe but there isnt one song on here that lack lustered lyrically or flow wise...Now I know why 50 just said fuck a good verse and makes an outstandin hook caz hip hop heads unconsciencely like songs only for that...I know it sounds like oh shit that nigga lyrikcha spazzin caz his cocky ass got some bad feed for a change...nah im just confused like Buck about this whole thing...Like the We run this town is now just mediocre caz any rapper could of ripped it but since it was us killin it, it wasnt impressive caz anybody could of ripped it?? huh...And Miscommunication an album filler?? we was actually tryin a different concept all together for the tape bout gossip gettin around and what it does to relationships but a gangsta type version caz well this is morbid america...then its just another gangsta rap track...huh...Dexter got love just 2 weeks ago and then when its on the album its to long and to eminemish...

just a few of my thoughts...im still greatful to the people who actually stopped by to listen and leave feed to by the way

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