The Masterpiece - Breathe No More open collab

Masterpiece · 01-10-2009, 01:13 PM

i have 2 verses left the middle one open for anyone that wants to do this if u do email it to me sony17701@aol.com
if not just leave feed good or bad

Tom Chambers · 01-10-2009, 01:28 PM

i would hop on...but its a lil too fast paced for me...........

feedback.....this wasn't that bad...there was one part where you slightly stumbled over your bars................
the only thing you might wanna work on is your breathe control............cuz the first maybe 8 bars.....those breathes were hella loud....maybe back off the mic some so it don't pic them up as much......keep dropping tho dun......your not bad

Masterpiece · 01-10-2009, 01:42 PM

^ good look for the feed man ill try steppin back

Masterpiece · 01-10-2009, 09:21 PM

bumpin this

01-10-2009, 01:13 PM	#1
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Masterpiece - Breathe No More open collab The Masterpiece - Breathe No More open collab i have 2 verses left the middle one open for anyone that wants to do this if u do email it to me sony17701@aol.com if not just leave feed good or bad

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01-10-2009, 01:28 PM	#2
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	i would hop on...but its a lil too fast paced for me........... feedback.....this wasn't that bad...there was one part where you slightly stumbled over your bars................ the only thing you might wanna work on is your breathe control............cuz the first maybe 8 bars.....those breathes were hella loud....maybe back off the mic some so it don't pic them up as much......keep dropping tho dun......your not bad

01-10-2009, 01:42 PM	#3
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ good look for the feed man ill try steppin back

01-10-2009, 09:21 PM	#4
Masterpiece The Mother ****in Man Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: New York Posts: 535 Repped: 1 Repped 24 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bumpin this