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10-24-2008, 12:15 AM
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These Walls Have Ears Vol. 2 (produced by Sinima)
mixtape coming november 4th.................  i decided to release the 2nd cuz its gives a lil more detail from the 1st part....but i'm saving the 3rd part for the tape only.............i was thinking bout shooting a cheap video for the 3rd part....but it looks like it isn't gonna happen......this is just roughly mixed.....so leave any feedback...whether its about the content...story....mixing............or my singing ( )....anything would be appreciated....
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10-24-2008, 12:51 AM
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
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I was gonna shoot a video for my mixtape but I was actually thinking bout killin real people caz it cost more money to get dummy bodies, fake blood and make up artist...
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10-24-2008, 12:55 AM
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word..........................i just be finding dead pppl @ the bottom of lakes and using them....
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10-24-2008, 08:55 AM
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do not sing lmao.....lyrics were good....just need to work on ya delivery...if you are gonna keep ya singin then turn it down so it blends a lil better....you should back ya verses up to so it gives the rhymes more emphasis....
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10-24-2008, 11:38 AM
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now if u woulda used auto-tune for dat singin
it woulda sounded much, MUCH more better  @ uanyway....i done seen u camed along as way from ur rappin tom..i kno alot of niggas might think this shit is sorry, but u used 2 be awhole lot worser...n i seen u develop into a pretty decent rapper.... lyrics nice, flow aite...emotion lackin a bit but overall 7.4/10 drop 2 me stay up TOM
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10-24-2008, 11:49 AM
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dont u mean part 2?
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10-24-2008, 01:49 PM
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Damn you chambers for using the beat i was about to use grrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!
Singing wasnt as bad as i expected still it sounded half assed i think u cuda sang better iunolyrics were good some good imagery used flow was on and off iuno why i felt the first verse u were struggling with the beat...but 2nd and thrid were much better.... beat crack.....still gonna use it screw you!!! third verse was easily the best thanks to u actually putting emotion to your verse u should use that emotion on every verse overall pretty good can u leave feed on mine called by any means please |
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10-24-2008, 02:20 PM
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^....yea......i got chu...i got a feeling its the compression i used on the first two that take the emotion away...but good looks on feedback from everyone
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10-24-2008, 05:17 PM
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wasnt feelin' tha first verse for some reason, the second verse was a little better, but the third was easily the best, you should use that flow for the whole song. but dude id take out the singing on the chorus, makes the song sound like a low budget song, seriously it sounds like a asian guy trying to do karaoke, like no hate i think anyone who hears that would think that. but yeah, it was cool. needs a lot of tuning, enjoyed the first one a lot more. the lyrics on this one were better, but your flow on the first one was superior to this. overall 6.5 sidenote. i hate when people post random shit in peoples threads and dont leave feed on the actual shit in the thread, its like wtf?
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10-24-2008, 05:55 PM
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
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Lotus could perform this song at the grammy's in front of all ur idols...Have pirotech explosions set off while he rappin and naked chicks droppin from the ceiling and Eminem featuring on the track and ur ass would still be like Its aight...smh at u givin everybody low shit
I aint listen yet tho caz I hate myspace links...takes forever to load on my comp...
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10-24-2008, 06:26 PM
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Tommy Finally is getting some Swagg
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10-24-2008, 10:15 PM
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"Flaming The Haze" You Get A 10/10 For That Line
But NAW. Part 1>>Part 2 I Don't Believe Your Emotion At All, ya Know? The Beat Is So Ill And Deep, I just Don't Believe Your Emotion. 7/10 <3333
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10-25-2008, 04:00 PM
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^thats what she said
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10-25-2008, 10:02 PM
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lmao @ the singing.....why didnt you just leave it to the sample
flow was off...shaky emotion was a bit bad..... lyrics were ok |
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10-27-2008, 08:40 PM
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good looks on feed...and i'm going on a feed-frenzy tonight.....so i'll return any favors i owe....
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10-28-2008, 10:48 PM
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