Marvelous-My Stripes-Ft Official Jae Rock

Mar-Velous · 10-18-2008, 04:56 PM

Yeaaaaa Me n Jae Did It Again This anotha Track off da New Album
Hit It Up wit Feed Back Holla at Me and Big Ups To Jae I Couldnt Keep this track on da low ahah

RICH$LOCO · 10-18-2008, 07:50 PM

damn yal both killed this one hook could of been a lil better though homie but it came out sick everything overall

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-19-2008, 12:05 AM

chea, good looks on dis marv...thanks for tha feed rich

bumpin dis bitch

EDIT : wit another link

zshare been a bitch lately.......

Altereagle · 10-19-2008, 01:04 AM

hook is weak,beat is hot. You deliver the lines a little rushed/forced. You got some clever lyrics "Disturbing the peace like Ludacris" . Flow is good for the most part. Second dude rode the beat better but lyrics sound generic to me. Why is autotune is used at like the end lol?

Mar-Velous · 10-19-2008, 02:03 PM

Thx 4 Feed thx 4 listenin to track appreciate that
uppin

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-20-2008, 12:26 AM

thanks for tha feed dawg

bumpin this one 2...

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-26-2008, 11:09 AM

bumpin......

mickilla · 10-26-2008, 02:39 PM

flows ok, marv i like that you trying new things man. hook is iight, simple, but thats all it needed really.

nice pitch shifts in the verse man, im playin arounsd more with effects and shit.

jae - love the flow man, sounds raw and uncut..nice touch. good lyrics.

also nutin like a bit of autotune in there!!

nice work both of you dude. looking forward to get those tracks of you two.

check out my new track.

TheRealProtege · 10-26-2008, 04:42 PM

disturbing the peace like ludacris, game said that. but yeah this track was cool. i liked da beat and da hook, on some young jeezy shit. first verse the lyrics were cool, but emotion was kind of not believable, wasnt feelin the second verse. and whyd the volume go down halfway into the song? and wasnt feelin tha vocoder part at all. that is the yin and yang

xXEMaNXx · 10-27-2008, 07:33 PM

i like this onne

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-30-2008, 12:22 PM

^ good looks fellas

damn, marv...were u at nigga ?!

bumpin dis bytch

Mar-Velous · 10-30-2008, 01:49 PM

aha been busy famm
but goodlooks on da feedback erry1 Bumpin This

10-18-2008, 04:56 PM	#1
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Marvelous-My Stripes-Ft Official Jae Rock Marvelous-My Stripes-Ft Official Jae Rock Yeaaaaa Me n Jae Did It Again This anotha Track off da New Album Hit It Up wit Feed Back Holla at Me and Big Ups To Jae I Couldnt Keep this track on da low ahah

10-18-2008, 07:50 PM	#2
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,570 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	damn yal both killed this one hook could of been a lil better though homie but it came out sick everything overall __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

10-19-2008, 12:05 AM	#3
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	chea, good looks on dis marv...thanks for tha feed rich bumpin dis bitch EDIT : wit another link zshare been a bitch lately....... __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON.. Last edited by OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK; 10-20-2008 at 11:46 AM.

10-20-2008, 12:26 AM	#6
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	thanks for tha feed dawg bumpin this one 2... __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

10-26-2008, 11:09 AM	#7
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	bumpin...... __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

10-19-2008, 01:04 AM	#4
Altereagle Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 32 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hook is weak,beat is hot. You deliver the lines a little rushed/forced. You got some clever lyrics "Disturbing the peace like Ludacris" . Flow is good for the most part. Second dude rode the beat better but lyrics sound generic to me. Why is autotune is used at like the end lol?

10-19-2008, 02:03 PM	#5
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Thx 4 Feed thx 4 listenin to track appreciate that uppin

10-26-2008, 02:39 PM	#8
mickilla 2 Face Records Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: The Booth (audio only) Posts: 1,505 Repped: 15 Repped 24 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	flows ok, marv i like that you trying new things man. hook is iight, simple, but thats all it needed really. nice pitch shifts in the verse man, im playin arounsd more with effects and shit. jae - love the flow man, sounds raw and uncut..nice touch. good lyrics. also nutin like a bit of autotune in there!! nice work both of you dude. looking forward to get those tracks of you two. check out my new track. __________________ Deadly Sins Tape - Coming Soon! soundclick.com/cdubz

10-26-2008, 04:42 PM	#9
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	disturbing the peace like ludacris, game said that. but yeah this track was cool. i liked da beat and da hook, on some young jeezy shit. first verse the lyrics were cool, but emotion was kind of not believable, wasnt feelin the second verse. and whyd the volume go down halfway into the song? and wasnt feelin tha vocoder part at all. that is the yin and yang __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-27-2008, 07:33 PM	#10
xXEMaNXx W.C. KILLAH Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Tha O.X, Cali4nia Posts: 1,598 Repped: 789 Repped 264 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like this onne __________________

10-30-2008, 12:22 PM	#11
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	^ good looks fellas damn, marv...were u at nigga ?! bumpin dis bytch __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

10-30-2008, 01:49 PM	#12
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	aha been busy famm but goodlooks on da feedback erry1 Bumpin This

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