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Old 10-18-2008, 04:56 PM   #1
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Old 10-18-2008, 07:50 PM   #2
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damn yal both killed this one hook could of been a lil better though homie but it came out sick everything overall
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Old 10-19-2008, 12:05 AM   #3
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chea, good looks on dis marv...thanks for tha feed rich

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Old 10-19-2008, 01:04 AM   #4
 
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hook is weak,beat is hot. You deliver the lines a little rushed/forced. You got some clever lyrics "Disturbing the peace like Ludacris" . Flow is good for the most part. Second dude rode the beat better but lyrics sound generic to me. Why is autotune is used at like the end lol?
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Old 10-19-2008, 02:03 PM   #5
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Thx 4 Feed thx 4 listenin to track appreciate that
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Old 10-20-2008, 12:26 AM   #6
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thanks for tha feed dawg

bumpin this one 2...
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Old 10-26-2008, 11:09 AM   #7
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Old 10-26-2008, 02:39 PM   #8
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flows ok, marv i like that you trying new things man. hook is iight, simple, but thats all it needed really.

nice pitch shifts in the verse man, im playin arounsd more with effects and shit.

jae - love the flow man, sounds raw and uncut..nice touch. good lyrics.

also nutin like a bit of autotune in there!!

nice work both of you dude. looking forward to get those tracks of you two.

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Old 10-26-2008, 04:42 PM   #9
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disturbing the peace like ludacris, game said that. but yeah this track was cool. i liked da beat and da hook, on some young jeezy shit. first verse the lyrics were cool, but emotion was kind of not believable, wasnt feelin the second verse. and whyd the volume go down halfway into the song? and wasnt feelin tha vocoder part at all. that is the yin and yang
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Old 10-27-2008, 07:33 PM   #10
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Old 10-30-2008, 12:22 PM   #11
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^ good looks fellas

damn, marv...were u at nigga ?!


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Old 10-30-2008, 01:49 PM   #12
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