Chaos - Fallin 4 you

Fre3dom · 10-13-2008, 09:40 PM

off the album "Destiny" needs to be mixed and mastered

RICH$LOCO · 10-13-2008, 11:20 PM

u used that autotune shit pritty cool and the flow is cool on the rapping, simplistic lyrics but i like it understandable accent 8.5/10

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-14-2008, 10:34 AM

nice song homie, im lovin tha hook

u kno deez " BUMZ " gon come in here n bash u bout usin autotune...but fuck dat, keep doin wat yall do....

verses were aite 2...flow good, lyrics aite...emotion there

8/10 drop

stay up cruh

Tom Chambers · 10-14-2008, 02:43 PM

Quote:

nice song homie, im lovin tha hook

u kno deez " BUMZ " gon come in here n bash u bout usin autotune...but fuck dat, keep doin wat yall do....

verses were aite 2...flow good, lyrics aite...emotion there

8/10 drop

stay up cruh

WTF you saying jae?.....

tbh...i'm one of those kats who's prolly gonna "bash" this song for using autotune....but i'll listen and leave feed later

TheRealProtege · 10-14-2008, 03:48 PM

the hook was good, but those verses were atrrocious, lyrics were not good and ur voice is unlistenable. is that even you on the hook? ive heard that shit on soundclick before

Viktor Vaughn · 10-14-2008, 05:21 PM

album?, you own rights to that beat?, anyway nice flow, hook is shockinly bad, actually cringed at the chorus, ima find t-pain and whop his ass for making these vocoders popular -_- , your parts were decent , for a unmixed unmastered version its pretty good, stay up

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-14-2008, 10:05 PM

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Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

WTF you saying jae?.....

tbh...i'm one of those kats who's prolly gonna "bash" this song for using autotune....but i'll listen and leave feed later

^ u tha main big bum 2 come in here in "bash" a nigga for usin autotune...

, bastard

Tom Chambers · 10-14-2008, 10:27 PM

maybe if some1 would let it be natural instead of sounding like shit i wouldn't bash it.........

Fre3dom · 10-15-2008, 08:37 AM

LMAO at unbreakeable...ok lil one....keep biting nellys lyrics rotfl smh

Oh well I wasnt expecting much good feed on here as most ppl on the board dont listen to hip hop like this....but its all good every1 i play it for loves it..but propz on the feed

Tom Chambers · 10-15-2008, 10:35 AM

not to start shit....but what kinda "hip hop" are we talking about......i pray your talking about mainstream "hip hop"

Fre3dom · 10-15-2008, 01:16 PM

^^^ as in commercial yes as i stated this would be a single and as everybody knows your not gonna release a song about killing or an underground joint as a single...this is a radio friendly song that will get a mainstream audience to be interested as well....u gotta be versatile...as i said i wasnt expecting people to give me good feed on here coz if its not gangsta or super lyrical then its considered wack....i dont consider this a rap song....its a song...its singing and rapping...but everyone is entitled to their opinion

CaliforniKated · 10-15-2008, 03:44 PM

omGZZ!! dope ass trackkkk i swear, u people need check it!!!

BRITISH EMINEM!

omgg

TheRealProtege · 10-15-2008, 04:00 PM

shut the fuck up, the only thing mainstream about this is the chorus and thats not even you doing the chorus.

your verses were WHATEVER, honestly anyone with a pencil can write rhymes like those. sorry, the truth hurts. you added nothing to the ALREADY DONE BEAT AND HOOK.

Fre3dom · 10-15-2008, 04:08 PM

yeah ok....keep biting nelly :)

Tom Chambers · 10-15-2008, 06:58 PM

ok i'ma be honest....and i dunno how your gonna take this...........but just know this ain't hate

i didn't liek this....

for a few reasons....1st...is the autotune....i'm sick of it...it don't matter who's on it...i just don't like it..

2nd.....its a song for a bitch......i'm not big on these type of songs.............for one reason....i don't have estrogen flowing through my veins..........

and last.........for some reason....you just didn't fit this for some reason.........like you weren't really off beat.....but for some reason you just didn't sound right...........i dunno if it was your accent or what...but thats my opinion

liek i said......it's just my opinion.......but just cuz you do a "mainstream" track doesn't make you versatile.......and lets be 100% honest.......neither one of us are selling over 5k @ MAX....so why you reaching to a group of people when you could just be doing you.................you gotta find something different that noone has done yet to "get known" if you wanna be versatile......soulja boy made that gay lil dance.......t-pain reintroduced us to autotune...........no what i mean????

look @ lupe....his first single wouldn't fit under your description of "radio friendly" and he still got a few plays.....don't do something that isn't you just to get attention......make them listen to your shit because of you......

Fre3dom · 10-15-2008, 07:13 PM

That was prob the best feed ive seen on this site^^^^^

But your misunderstanding me because im not explaining certain things for certain reasons....but you remember me saying a few companies were talking to me about signing? well they asked me to make an album...their sick of people with ep's and mixtapes they want a complete album....and obv coz they wanna make money they need me to show them i can make certain typa songs while still staying as me....and tbh i like these typa songs i only make songs that i would like to listen to...i can appreaciate songs for girls coz i mean we all feel that way about girls in our lives...so...its whatever...but hopefully ive explained and maybe u'll understand a little better at where im coming from.
oh and when i say versatile...its coz on the album i have so many diff types and styles of songs and shit....i do grime-ish stuff...hip hop....commercial...street....stories....topicals. ...club songs..etc

let me know if i needa explain more or if ur unsure about thwta i jus said..otherwise thanks for the realest feed so far

Fre3dom · 10-18-2008, 03:11 PM

uppin................................

youngking187 · 10-19-2008, 12:46 AM

song waz decent..hook waz ok too..//
lyrics waz kool..emotion waz kool..//
the autotune waz in good use..//
n this drop.,also u flowed well..//
stay up homie..ima listen to the other one
n a sec..

Witty Qwan · 10-19-2008, 01:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fre3dom

^^^ as in commercial yes as i stated this would be a single and as everybody knows your not gonna release a song about killing or an underground joint as a single...this is a radio friendly song that will get a mainstream audience to be interested as well....u gotta be versatile...as i said i wasnt expecting people to give me good feed on here coz if its not gangsta or super lyrical then its considered wack....i dont consider this a rap song....its a song...its singing and rapping...but everyone is entitled to their opinion

The point of being in the game is to sell n make hit records-50 Cent

l liked it, its hot...love songs as singles>>>>>>>>>>> nething else most of da time, if ur new n wanna sell records in todays time (take Plies for ex...he always got love singles, n went gold for the second time)

sum dudes up here aint big fans of love songs, but i fuck with them hard body, if u can do dat in hold ya own lyrically, to me dats sum wut versatile...i got Fabolous on my ipod but more then half of the tracks from him are love songs, he do a bunch of songs for bitches, but he still can go hard on mixtapes, to me dats versatile

so i agree with u 100% on wut i quoted...n good luck with ya album n everything fam...stay ^

10-13-2008, 09:40 PM	#1
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	Chaos - Fallin 4 you Chaos - Fallin 4 you off the album "Destiny" needs to be mixed and mastered

10-13-2008, 11:20 PM	#2
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	u used that autotune shit pritty cool and the flow is cool on the rapping, simplistic lyrics but i like it understandable accent 8.5/10 __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

10-14-2008, 10:34 AM	#3
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,576 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	nice song homie, im lovin tha hook u kno deez " BUMZ " gon come in here n bash u bout usin autotune...but fuck dat, keep doin wat yall do.... verses were aite 2...flow good, lyrics aite...emotion there 8/10 drop stay up cruh __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

10-14-2008, 03:48 PM	#5
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	the hook was good, but those verses were atrrocious, lyrics were not good and ur voice is unlistenable. is that even you on the hook? ive heard that shit on soundclick before __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-15-2008, 04:00 PM	#13
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	shut the fuck up, the only thing mainstream about this is the chorus and thats not even you doing the chorus. your verses were WHATEVER, honestly anyone with a pencil can write rhymes like those. sorry, the truth hurts. you added nothing to the ALREADY DONE BEAT AND HOOK. __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-14-2008, 05:21 PM	#6
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,274 Repped: 940 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	album?, you own rights to that beat?, anyway nice flow, hook is shockinly bad, actually cringed at the chorus, ima find t-pain and whop his ass for making these vocoders popular -_- , your parts were decent , for a unmixed unmastered version its pretty good, stay up

10-14-2008, 10:27 PM	#8
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	maybe if some1 would let it be natural instead of sounding like shit i wouldn't bash it.........

10-15-2008, 08:37 AM	#9
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	LMAO at unbreakeable...ok lil one....keep biting nellys lyrics rotfl smh Oh well I wasnt expecting much good feed on here as most ppl on the board dont listen to hip hop like this....but its all good every1 i play it for loves it..but propz on the feed

10-15-2008, 10:35 AM	#10
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	not to start shit....but what kinda "hip hop" are we talking about......i pray your talking about mainstream "hip hop"

10-15-2008, 01:16 PM	#11
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	^^^ as in commercial yes as i stated this would be a single and as everybody knows your not gonna release a song about killing or an underground joint as a single...this is a radio friendly song that will get a mainstream audience to be interested as well....u gotta be versatile...as i said i wasnt expecting people to give me good feed on here coz if its not gangsta or super lyrical then its considered wack....i dont consider this a rap song....its a song...its singing and rapping...but everyone is entitled to their opinion

10-15-2008, 03:44 PM	#12
CaliforniKated Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Venus Posts: 4,035 Repped: 2,035 Repped 496 Times in 267 Posts Neg Reps: 223 Neg Repped at 204 Times in 130 Posts	omGZZ!! dope ass trackkkk i swear, u people need check it!!! BRITISH EMINEM! omgg

10-15-2008, 04:08 PM	#14
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	yeah ok....keep biting nelly :)

10-15-2008, 06:58 PM	#15
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,277 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	ok i'ma be honest....and i dunno how your gonna take this...........but just know this ain't hate i didn't liek this.... for a few reasons....1st...is the autotune....i'm sick of it...it don't matter who's on it...i just don't like it.. 2nd.....its a song for a bitch......i'm not big on these type of songs.............for one reason....i don't have estrogen flowing through my veins.......... and last.........for some reason....you just didn't fit this for some reason.........like you weren't really off beat.....but for some reason you just didn't sound right...........i dunno if it was your accent or what...but thats my opinion liek i said......it's just my opinion.......but just cuz you do a "mainstream" track doesn't make you versatile.......and lets be 100% honest.......neither one of us are selling over 5k @ MAX....so why you reaching to a group of people when you could just be doing you.................you gotta find something different that noone has done yet to "get known" if you wanna be versatile......soulja boy made that gay lil dance.......t-pain reintroduced us to autotune...........no what i mean???? look @ lupe....his first single wouldn't fit under your description of "radio friendly" and he still got a few plays.....don't do something that isn't you just to get attention......make them listen to your shit because of you......

10-15-2008, 07:13 PM	#16
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	That was prob the best feed ive seen on this site^^^^^ But your misunderstanding me because im not explaining certain things for certain reasons....but you remember me saying a few companies were talking to me about signing? well they asked me to make an album...their sick of people with ep's and mixtapes they want a complete album....and obv coz they wanna make money they need me to show them i can make certain typa songs while still staying as me....and tbh i like these typa songs i only make songs that i would like to listen to...i can appreaciate songs for girls coz i mean we all feel that way about girls in our lives...so...its whatever...but hopefully ive explained and maybe u'll understand a little better at where im coming from. oh and when i say versatile...its coz on the album i have so many diff types and styles of songs and shit....i do grime-ish stuff...hip hop....commercial...street....stories....topicals. ...club songs..etc let me know if i needa explain more or if ur unsure about thwta i jus said..otherwise thanks for the realest feed so far

10-18-2008, 03:11 PM	#17
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	uppin................................

10-19-2008, 12:46 AM	#18
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	song waz decent..hook waz ok too..// lyrics waz kool..emotion waz kool..// the autotune waz in good use..// n this drop.,also u flowed well..// stay up homie..ima listen to the other one n a sec.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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