Sparxz-Freestyle (First Audio)

Witty Qwan · 10-11-2008, 03:38 PM

This is my first audio up here...quality aint to hot, but pretty good if u look at the mic i used....

but check it out

TheRealProtege · 10-11-2008, 04:00 PM

hmm you had a lil mase fabolous type of flow, it was aight

only thing is i used a CLASS SICK/classic line before...

ugh.. that line is officially played -_-

Witty Qwan · 10-11-2008, 04:09 PM

good looks....fab is one of my influences

Tom Chambers · 10-11-2008, 04:20 PM

Quote:

hmm you had a lil mase fabolous type of flow, it was aight

only thing is i used a CLASS SICK/classic line before...

ugh.. that line is officially played -_-

you and every other mainstream rapper........

i can't lie i'm somewhat impressed...............if this was your true first audio...the flow was better then what i was expecting...tho it was still shakey in certain point.....and like breakable said...you got like a fab type flow going on here.......................i need to find this beat........................

overall....not bad........keep dropping.....

youngking187 · 10-11-2008, 04:44 PM

im impressed..for your 1st audio..
flow waz kinda off on some parts..
but im goin through the same thing..
u'll get better though..//
lyrics waz fuckin decent..
keep doin u my nigg...stay up.
much respect....100

SaF HeaT · 10-11-2008, 06:42 PM

im pretty impressed faam
this is good for a first audio
u was shaky but u'll improve cuhz
lyrics was good too

J~Souljah · 10-11-2008, 07:40 PM

.....flow was shaky....lyrics were quite horrible considering the amount of re~used lines....emotion is bad

fix that....

Lyrikcha · 10-11-2008, 09:53 PM

everytime i hear this song I think of this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dpMCYiaxzds&feature=related
song was aight...not really decent but not terrible...alot of of beat flowin...can tell ur read off the paper...u gotta just let ur emotion take over and not so much concentrate on what u readin but how u say it...

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SouthernAnimal · 10-11-2008, 10:00 PM

i liked it just kinda hard to hear with my speakers and the qual

Witty Qwan · 10-12-2008, 01:58 AM

thx 4 da feed everyone...appreciate it...i'll try to improve my flow, n add emotion....and sum non played punchez lol...n wut u mean by "re-used lines" J-Soulja ?

Viktor Vaughn · 10-12-2008, 04:38 PM

not bad i heard worser first audios, work on everything and get a proper mic, is this really a freestyle? , sounds prewritten , but thats just me

lol @ that video

J~Souljah · 10-12-2008, 06:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

thx 4 da feed everyone...appreciate it...i'll try to improve my flow, n add emotion....and sum non played punchez lol...n wut u mean by "re-used lines" J-Soulja ?

re~used lines=played lines

Witty Qwan · 10-12-2008, 07:14 PM

most of yall hip hop heads, n not from the new era...so yall probably heard a bunch of punchez, that yall would consider played datz new to others...but good looks...n its not a off da top of the head freestyle...their was no topic

RICH$LOCO · 10-12-2008, 09:19 PM

i think it was written or u had already tried memorizing it and that video lyrikcha posted was fucken hilarious now i know u watch too much tv lyrikcha

Tom Chambers · 10-12-2008, 11:13 PM

Quote:

most of yall hip hop heads, n not from the new era...so yall probably heard a bunch of punchez, that yall would consider played datz new to others...but good looks...n its not a off da top of the head freestyle...their was no topic

^i didn't really get into more "old skoolish" hip hop until maybe last year......b4 then the most lyrical rapper i listened to was lloyd banks........but you can dig and find ppl with punches.............

YUNG STIXX · 10-13-2008, 01:39 AM

Shit was aiight for a first audio...fix the flow and come up with new punches then you should be aiight Cuhz

Witty Qwan · 10-13-2008, 09:06 AM

grodt was the first album i listened to all the way out..Banks n Cassidy was the ONLY punchline rappers i really listened too...then i listened to a lil jada...and i honestly didnt really start listening to Fab till less then a year ago...i dont know nothing about underground punchline rappers really....

N dis was written once again...their was no concept so i labeled it freestyle....like when rappers be on the radio spitting....they dont really be coming off da head, but its lableled freestyle on da mixtape ya digg

YUNG STIXX · 10-13-2008, 04:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

grodt was the first album i listened to all the way out..Banks n Cassidy was the ONLY punchline rappers i really listened too...then i listened to a lil jada...and i honestly didnt really start listening to Fab till less then a year ago...i dont know nothing about underground punchline rappers really....

N dis was written once again...their was no concept so i labeled it freestyle....like when rappers be on the radio spitting....they dont really be coming off da head, but its lableled freestyle on da mixtape ya digg

^^DAM YOU MUST BE A Y0UNG NIGGA LOL...BUT YEA I FEEL YOU, JUST KEEP WRITING...I FUCKS WiTH FAB, CASS AND BANKS TOO BUT I ALSO FUCKS WITH NIGGAS LIKE RAKIM, NAS, JAY AND SOME UNDERGROUND NIGGAS U NEVER HEARD OF LIKE LORD FINESE AND BIG L

Witty Qwan · 10-13-2008, 05:46 PM

im 17....grodt was the first album soulja boy listened to also

and i heard of lord n big l, but neva heard any of their songz....i need to step my underground and mainstream game up and start actually listening to albums (ima mixtape person)

ex...im a gunit fan...but havent heard rotten apple, buck the world, curtis, elephant n the sand, or tos...im a cassidy fan, but havent heard any of his albums

ima newb

YUNG STIXX · 10-13-2008, 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

im 17....grodt was the first album soulja boy listened to also

and i heard of lord n big l, but neva heard any of their songz....i need to step my underground and mainstream game up and start actually listening to albums (ima mixtape person)

ex...im a gunit fan...but havent heard rotten apple, buck the world, curtis, elephant n the sand, or tos...im a cassidy fan, but havent heard any of his albums

ima newb

ALL YOU GOTTA DO IS DOWNLOADS THOSE MUTHAFUCKAS MY NiGGA LOL...ONE CLICK AWAY

Tom Chambers · 10-13-2008, 09:28 PM

Quote:

^^DAM YOU MUST BE A Y0UNG NIGGA LOL...BUT YEA I FEEL YOU, JUST KEEP WRITING...I FUCKS WiTH FAB, CASS AND BANKS TOO BUT I ALSO FUCKS WITH NIGGAS LIKE RAKIM, NAS, JAY AND SOME UNDERGROUND NIGGAS U NEVER HEARD OF LIKE LORD FINESE AND BIG L

...........

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-13-2008, 10:45 PM

Lord Finesse Beats>>

Witty Qwan · 10-13-2008, 10:56 PM

i have dail up....im downloading a instrumental (right now as i speak, about 8 mb)...this alone will take me ova 30mins to download...an album would take a life time...n local bootleggers only bring out lil wayne cds mostly

YUNG STIXX · 10-13-2008, 11:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by youngsparks

i have dail up....im downloading a instrumental (right now as i speak, about 8 mb)...this alone will take me ova 30mins to download...an album would take a life time...n local bootleggers only bring out lil wayne cds mostly

aye, well i dont know what to tell you but...get dsl.....

keece · 10-14-2008, 01:05 AM

idk.. 4 ya 1st track I guess this is aight

10-11-2008, 03:38 PM	#1
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	Sparxz-Freestyle (First Audio) Sparxz-Freestyle (First Audio) This is my first audio up here...quality aint to hot, but pretty good if u look at the mic i used.... but check it out __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

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TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	hmm you had a lil mase fabolous type of flow, it was aight only thing is i used a CLASS SICK/classic line before... ugh.. that line is officially played -_- __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-11-2008, 04:09 PM	#3
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	good looks....fab is one of my influences __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

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youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	im impressed..for your 1st audio.. flow waz kinda off on some parts.. but im goin through the same thing.. u'll get better though..// lyrics waz fuckin decent.. keep doin u my nigg...stay up. much respect....100 __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

10-11-2008, 06:42 PM	#6
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J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	.....flow was shaky....lyrics were quite horrible considering the amount of re~used lines....emotion is bad fix that....

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Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,369 Repped: 11 Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	everytime i hear this song I think of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dpMCYiaxzds&feature=related song was aight...not really decent but not terrible...alot of of beat flowin...can tell ur read off the paper...u gotta just let ur emotion take over and not so much concentrate on what u readin but how u say it... Lyrikcha's Song Meter \|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\|\| 1___2___3___4___5___6___7___8___9___10 __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

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SouthernAnimal Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: In Your Head Posts: 54 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	i liked it just kinda hard to hear with my speakers and the qual __________________ Do you really think your better than the rest? YES

10-12-2008, 01:58 AM	#10
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	thx 4 da feed everyone...appreciate it...i'll try to improve my flow, n add emotion....and sum non played punchez lol...n wut u mean by "re-used lines" J-Soulja ? __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

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Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,274 Repped: 940 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	not bad i heard worser first audios, work on everything and get a proper mic, is this really a freestyle? , sounds prewritten , but thats just me lol @ that video

10-12-2008, 07:14 PM	#13
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	most of yall hip hop heads, n not from the new era...so yall probably heard a bunch of punchez, that yall would consider played datz new to others...but good looks...n its not a off da top of the head freestyle...their was no topic __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

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RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	i think it was written or u had already tried memorizing it and that video lyrikcha posted was fucken hilarious now i know u watch too much tv lyrikcha __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

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YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,900 Repped: 411 Repped 1,292 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	Shit was aiight for a first audio...fix the flow and come up with new punches then you should be aiight Cuhz

10-13-2008, 09:06 AM	#17
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	grodt was the first album i listened to all the way out..Banks n Cassidy was the ONLY punchline rappers i really listened too...then i listened to a lil jada...and i honestly didnt really start listening to Fab till less then a year ago...i dont know nothing about underground punchline rappers really.... N dis was written once again...their was no concept so i labeled it freestyle....like when rappers be on the radio spitting....they dont really be coming off da head, but its lableled freestyle on da mixtape ya digg __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

10-13-2008, 05:46 PM	#19
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	im 17....grodt was the first album soulja boy listened to also and i heard of lord n big l, but neva heard any of their songz....i need to step my underground and mainstream game up and start actually listening to albums (ima mixtape person) ex...im a gunit fan...but havent heard rotten apple, buck the world, curtis, elephant n the sand, or tos...im a cassidy fan, but havent heard any of his albums ima newb __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

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Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	i have dail up....im downloading a instrumental (right now as i speak, about 8 mb)...this alone will take me ova 30mins to download...an album would take a life time...n local bootleggers only bring out lil wayne cds mostly __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

10-14-2008, 01:05 AM	#25
keece "Real Recognize Real" Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: GBoro Posts: 1,605 Repped: 139 Repped 224 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	idk.. 4 ya 1st track I guess this is aight

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