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10-09-2008, 06:26 AM
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The alias is Protege
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Ride With Me (Snippet)
i leave nothin' but honest feed 4 yall, so i expect tha same,
if ya feel it ya feel it... side note: not the best quality yet, so its best if you use headphones when listening =) [[lyrics]] you can draw...sounds... (YES)... SHOW ME... [[chorus]] come on lil mama come an ride wit me from the o.x. to the n.y.c. we can hit the streets go anyway dont matta long as you come wit me [[verse 2]] here we go, here we go dont hold back (uh huh) what the future holds girl just dont ask (ya) but i love you babe yeah just know that (uh huh) cuz this worlds so wack, wont ever go back (yup) without you mah visions just so black yeah you know that, tha ride is rough n times are tough, but its okay (okay) yuh dont gotta ask today, theres no plans today (uh uh) yeah no class today just blow ya past away jus trips to the beach on the shore togetha bumps on the road through the stormy weather (uh huh) so yah need ya here now more then ever (YES) wanna be side by side on a mountain of truth kickin back drinkin out the fountain of youth though we stuck, yeah we stuck, stuck ina cold world but i cant, just cant, cant let you go girl [[chorus]] come on lil mama come an ride wit me from the o.x. to the nyc we can hit the streets go anyway dont matta long as you come wit me  
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10-09-2008, 07:35 AM
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
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it was decent...hook was coo, verse was aight, felt more like u was readin it off the paper caz ur flow was shaky and sometimes ur bars were to long so u would try to fit it...emotion was aight, but the hook is what saves the track...rest is kinda just there
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10-09-2008, 09:31 AM
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this was a aite lil song, wasnet really feelin tha beat at all...tha hook was decent...
flow was aite..off n on, but emotion is lackin big time.... 6/10 drop stay up
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10-09-2008, 10:32 AM
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beat wasn't great...flow was iffy in parts of the first verse esp with the fountain of youth bars...learn off by heart fore spittin it sounds better....anyway your lyrics were watered down in the chorus as you were goin for a catchy hook...it was OK need some effects tho...verse wise...average verse with the usual girl bars...only diff was you had multi's...overall OK track...stay up...
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10-09-2008, 04:22 PM
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The alias is Protege
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yupyup thanks for the feed guys
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10-09-2008, 04:39 PM
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damn that song was short.. lol but yeah i liked how you used multies and its a chick song i was expecting simple rhymes but you changed it up NICE. but my favorite part was the chorus that shit sounded like some lloyd banks/50cent type shit. good shit. stay up
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10-09-2008, 05:32 PM
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chea thanks for the feed guys... +rep for checkin tha track 0ut
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10-09-2008, 08:45 PM
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it twas alright...........flow was better then your last song i heard.......beat was mehhhh.....
tbh....i didn't like the chorus.................. but it's just the typical chick song...so...can't really give to much feedback on a song that suppose to be basic........only thing i can really say is maybe throw in a lil more emotion................make every girl listening to this feel that yuor talking to them.... |
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10-10-2008, 04:18 AM
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The alias is Protege
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chea.. this song is now on my myspace
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10-12-2008, 06:03 PM
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nice singing
nah, track was cool...average lyrics for da bitches
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10-12-2008, 06:09 PM
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The alias is Protege
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LoL... thanks PAL =)
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10-12-2008, 08:50 PM
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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drop waz ok..
flow got better.. beat waz average.. ill be lookin out for the full track..
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10-13-2008, 04:48 AM
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The alias is Protege
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chea thanks 4 tha feed
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10-14-2008, 09:34 PM
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The alias is Protege
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 thanks for anyone that left feed by the way, it is really appreciated..
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