~~YoungKing-Unhealed Pain~~

youngking187 · 10-05-2008, 02:37 AM

shouldve took more time on it
but its all good...
any feed is welcomed..
good/bad..or whateva yall do..lol
but its well appreciated thanx..

lyrics.....

we livin the world where drop outs gettin paid..//
and bitches wit aids,gettin paid to get laid..//
make away,for a slave,kids pregnant underage..//
early death threats,got niggaz diggin there own grave..//
break in skool computers,inject my own grades..//
sittin down under,this nigga satin wanna blaze..//
mind is speedin,look for a police chase..//
gettin brain from bitch,man its so descrace..//
outta the blue, followin the crowd wit my crew..//
swagger on 2002, add 2002, thats 4004..//
thats more houses 4 poor,on a island or shore..//
got game like mike n pippen,flights or whippin..//
blood or crippin, holdin a grudge or 4getin..//
hugs and kisses, thugs and bitches..//
i know,i owe to life,my goals no price..//
so i bet my life on the roll of the dice..//
im nice..//

r.ip to bernie mac...
kanye mova..
sean taylor..
and all yall folks who passed..

through the pain and the drama,i turn to my mama..//
she my sidekick so i call her my llama..//
when martin passed,thought we would let freedom ring../
come to find out,all we need waz king..//
so ima king,thats y i call myself king..//
unleash positive,and erase the red beams..//
we are gods angels,all we missin is the wings..//
im only one man,but lets develop a team..//
natural disasters is at an all time high..//
father in the basement at an all time high..//
poor need the money, come help us in the ghetto..//
ima dig my own grave,soon as i find a shevel..//
ima run off the road soon as my foot hit the pedal..//
little gurl slow your roll,little man develop a plan..//
options in life is in the palm of your hand..//
aman,jesus died for us,homie show your appreciation..//
haterz,read a bible,before u proceed to haten..//
physically the greatest,but mentally unabled..//
alive on the outside,but inside your just stable..//
granddad i miss u wit my heart and sole..//
the beat stops,cuz my fuckin heart is frozed..//
its killing me softly,so i ask for my own rebirth..//
yea and it hurts,seems like my prayers wont work..//
god bless obama,fill that white house wit armor..//

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-05-2008, 03:35 AM

It Was Dope. Flow Is Definitely Steppin Up.

8/10

youngking187 · 10-05-2008, 04:07 AM

watz good^^^...good lookin on the feed..
much respect..appreciate it..
we got to get a collab goin on somethin..
ima holla at u though..
im bout to take my azz to sleep..

Tom Chambers · 10-06-2008, 01:10 AM

Quote:

natural disasters is at an all time high..//
father in the basement at an all time high..//

^this is prolyl the best lines i've seen you write.....

you progressing fast......................overall.....easily your best track...........nice steady flow......your emotion is pretty decent........lyrics were decent.....good content.........

o/a-7.5/10.......keep steppin up dunny....

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-06-2008, 11:59 AM

def. steppin up

flow is still shaky, but def. gettin better cuz.....

just keep grindin at it, you'll get it soon

stay up

keece · 10-06-2008, 02:49 PM

this track was aight my nigga u got alot better 4rm what I heard be4 lyrics was good flow was ight but I like the song concept keep spitting what u feel 7/10 return the feed

RICH$LOCO · 10-06-2008, 08:09 PM

nice drop u definitely improvin on ya flow but ur lyrics always cool

Viktor Vaughn · 10-07-2008, 04:45 PM

great instrumental choise, lyrics is nice,i like the content here, flow is passable sliped here and there but its nothing major, work on your quality, vocal pressence needs a step up to , besides that good job bro

Witty Qwan · 10-07-2008, 07:36 PM

good drop, this was sum real talk ish...cant really say its ya best work or u improving, cuz i aint hear to much of ya audios

give me sum links to sum more of ya ish my nigg^

TheRealProtege · 10-07-2008, 09:17 PM

I liked it, also like how you post your lyrics.

only vice is you need to get amped up dawg, you sound like your just reading off a paper or something

youngking187 · 10-08-2008, 06:14 PM

good lookz on the feed all of yall.....
much respect my niggs...appreciate it..
bumpppppppppppppppppppppppp

youngking187 · 10-11-2008, 07:03 PM

bumppppp....

youngking187 · 10-17-2008, 10:55 AM

bumppppppppppppppppp

10-05-2008, 02:37 AM	#1
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	~~YoungKing-Unhealed Pain~~ ~~YoungKing-Unhealed Pain~~ shouldve took more time on it but its all good... any feed is welcomed.. good/bad..or whateva yall do..lol but its well appreciated thanx.. lyrics..... we livin the world where drop outs gettin paid..// and bitches wit aids,gettin paid to get laid..// make away,for a slave,kids pregnant underage..// early death threats,got niggaz diggin there own grave..// break in skool computers,inject my own grades..// sittin down under,this nigga satin wanna blaze..// mind is speedin,look for a police chase..// gettin brain from bitch,man its so descrace..// outta the blue, followin the crowd wit my crew..// swagger on 2002, add 2002, thats 4004..// thats more houses 4 poor,on a island or shore..// got game like mike n pippen,flights or whippin..// blood or crippin, holdin a grudge or 4getin..// hugs and kisses, thugs and bitches..// i know,i owe to life,my goals no price..// so i bet my life on the roll of the dice..// im nice..// r.ip to bernie mac... kanye mova.. sean taylor.. and all yall folks who passed.. through the pain and the drama,i turn to my mama..// she my sidekick so i call her my llama..// when martin passed,thought we would let freedom ring../ come to find out,all we need waz king..// so ima king,thats y i call myself king..// unleash positive,and erase the red beams..// we are gods angels,all we missin is the wings..// im only one man,but lets develop a team..// natural disasters is at an all time high..// father in the basement at an all time high..// poor need the money, come help us in the ghetto..// ima dig my own grave,soon as i find a shevel..// ima run off the road soon as my foot hit the pedal..// little gurl slow your roll,little man develop a plan..// options in life is in the palm of your hand..// aman,jesus died for us,homie show your appreciation..// haterz,read a bible,before u proceed to haten..// physically the greatest,but mentally unabled..// alive on the outside,but inside your just stable..// granddad i miss u wit my heart and sole..// the beat stops,cuz my fuckin heart is frozed..// its killing me softly,so i ask for my own rebirth..// yea and it hurts,seems like my prayers wont work..// god bless obama,fill that white house wit armor..// __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz Last edited by youngking187; 10-05-2008 at 02:41 AM.

10-05-2008, 03:35 AM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	It Was Dope. Flow Is Definitely Steppin Up. 8/10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

10-05-2008, 04:07 AM	#3
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	watz good^^^...good lookin on the feed.. much respect..appreciate it.. we got to get a collab goin on somethin.. ima holla at u though.. im bout to take my azz to sleep.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

10-06-2008, 11:59 AM	#5
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	def. steppin up flow is still shaky, but def. gettin better cuz..... just keep grindin at it, you'll get it soon stay up __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

10-06-2008, 08:09 PM	#7
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	nice drop u definitely improvin on ya flow but ur lyrics always cool __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

10-06-2008, 02:49 PM	#6
keece "Real Recognize Real" Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: GBoro Posts: 1,605 Repped: 139 Repped 224 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this track was aight my nigga u got alot better 4rm what I heard be4 lyrics was good flow was ight but I like the song concept keep spitting what u feel 7/10 return the feed

10-07-2008, 04:45 PM	#8
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,274 Repped: 940 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	great instrumental choise, lyrics is nice,i like the content here, flow is passable sliped here and there but its nothing major, work on your quality, vocal pressence needs a step up to , besides that good job bro

10-07-2008, 07:36 PM	#9
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,052 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	good drop, this was sum real talk ish...cant really say its ya best work or u improving, cuz i aint hear to much of ya audios give me sum links to sum more of ya ish my nigg^ __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

10-07-2008, 09:17 PM	#10
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	I liked it, also like how you post your lyrics. only vice is you need to get amped up dawg, you sound like your just reading off a paper or something __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-08-2008, 06:14 PM	#11
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	good lookz on the feed all of yall..... much respect my niggs...appreciate it.. bumpppppppppppppppppppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

10-11-2008, 07:03 PM	#12
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumppppp.... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

10-17-2008, 10:55 AM	#13
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumppppppppppppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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