SBG - Your Life (My Life beat by The Game)

kurdiliciouz · 10-04-2008, 09:23 PM

critisize!

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-04-2008, 10:17 PM

garbage!!!

kurdiliciouz · 10-04-2008, 10:49 PM

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Originally Posted by *Pistol Banger*

[size=\"7\"]garbage!!![/size]

thanks man

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 10-04-2008, 10:52 PM

Sorry, Just Being Honest^^

RICH$LOCO · 10-05-2008, 01:43 AM

damn thats what i call a throwaway and it aint a glock

kurdiliciouz · 10-05-2008, 10:53 AM

hehe, ur comments are funny. but aight. i will do better next time

keece · 10-06-2008, 02:50 PM

Idk what 2 say..just keeping working at it and you'll be str8

kurdiliciouz · 10-06-2008, 09:37 PM

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Originally Posted by keece

Idk what 2 say..just keeping working at it and you'll be str8

thanks man. but you also think it sucks, right? hehe.

this aint the best i can, im just trying something new all the time, and ive done alot of tracks, i just sent this one to get feed on it.

and i do know one thing for sure. even if the track aint all dat,
there will always be others who do it worse. and that, my friend, is a fact.

Viktor Vaughn · 10-07-2008, 04:36 PM

i really hate it when people do their own versions on these new songs coz thats what most people will compare you to and 9 outta 10 times no matter how well you did you will get a shit response, but thought i would check this out, i dislike the chorus, but , in saying that, i hate lil wayne doin it to, to editied for my likeing, i like natural sounding shit.

on to your verse, get yourself a pop filter , lyrics is ok , flow is decent to considerin the tempo of this instrumental , alil monotonous but passable

my advice is avoid doing songs like these and do your own shit, you'll go further, stay up

kurdiliciouz · 10-08-2008, 04:05 PM

thanks man. i really appreciate your comment. i see your point, and i cant actually agree more with u. believe it or not, we share the same view. and im very aware about plenty of the things u said. and i like natural sounding too. so just to make it clear, i did this song as a test first. i just got myself autotune so i thought ill try it out. i did this track using lil waynes chorus first, but i had the same verse.. i was curious to know if i could make me sound like him.. i actually think i did a good "cover" of the chorus. later on i thought to myself, i want my own chorus, so i wrote one, and made it sound different than lil wayne's. so it was never like.. a project i decided to do.. it just started off as a tryout cause i was hype about dat autotune. thats why it only got one verse too.

but thank you for ur feed and advice, man. much respect for that. and i wont make another track with autotune. i just got one question. what u mean about pop filter? i aint get that.

one love

Quote:

Originally Posted by Viktor Vaughn

i really hate it when people do their own versions on these new songs coz thats what most people will compare you to and 9 outta 10 times no matter how well you did you will get a shit response, but thought i would check this out, i dislike the chorus, but , in saying that, i hate lil wayne doin it to, to editied for my likeing, i like natural sounding shit.

on to your verse, get yourself a pop filter , lyrics is ok , flow is decent to considerin the tempo of this instrumental , alil monotonous but passable

my advice is avoid doing songs like these and do your own shit, you'll go further, stay up

TheRealProtege · 10-08-2008, 04:45 PM

its aight, not great, but ive seen worse.

Da_Hook · 10-08-2008, 07:43 PM

A Pop Filter Is So It Catches Da Air And Spit When U Rap Its Da Circle Thing U have Around Da Mic...

Witty Qwan · 10-08-2008, 07:59 PM

ima steal ya sig da hook...those r my 3 fav punchline rappers

Da_Hook · 10-08-2008, 08:00 PM

^^^ I'ma Murk U If U Steal It Dat's Mine Go Find Ur Own =P

Witty Qwan · 10-08-2008, 08:23 PM

if u try to e-murk me....ima neg u

Tom Chambers · 10-08-2008, 10:01 PM

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A Pop Filter Is So It Catches Da Air And Spit When U Rap Its Da Circle Thing U have Around Da Mic...

^wrong again mr. audio MC who hasn't dropped in 3 years

a pop filter is mainly used to stop letters such as "p" and "b" from making a huge "buh" or "puh" sound while recording words with these letters...which if let go....can create quite an ugly sound in one's recording......but you can also argue that a pop filter is used to keep distance from the mic....so that way you don't sound like a merry go round while recording.............................(it makes sence if you think)

honestly.....this song sucked.................just be yourself keep dropping and you'll improve...whether its slowly or quickly is up to how much effort you put in.............

Da Hook · 10-09-2008, 12:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

^wrong again mr. audio MC who hasn't dropped in 3 years

a pop filter is mainly used to stop letters such as \"p\" and \"b\" from making a huge \"buh\" or \"puh\" sound while recording words with these letters...which if let go....can create quite an ugly sound in one's recording......but you can also argue that a pop filter is used to keep distance from the mic....so that way you don't sound like a merry go round while recording.............................(it makes sence if you think)

I Was Puttin' Da Jist Of It...
And I Know Dis Isn't Komin' From U, If U Want It Kome Get It...

Tom Chambers · 10-09-2008, 01:50 AM

Quote:

I Was Puttin' Da Jist Of It...
And I Know Dis Isn't Komin' From U, If U Want It Kome Get It...

el oh el........

Blizzy · 10-09-2008, 10:39 AM

chorus was awful...i like this track by Game so......your verse was OK as was the flow...other than that a poor track...

kurdiliciouz · 10-09-2008, 12:13 PM

haha, okey. thanks for your comments everybody.

i also understand now what pop filter is.. thanks for clearing that up. a friend of mine will get me a new mic soon, ill buy a pop filter when i can afford one. at the time, im just gon have to keep distance from the mic.

other than that. track sucks, i think we all agree on that now.. im gon improve, but keep in mind that most rappers outside US sucks in comparision to the ones that live there. i live in norway so i actually write better nowadays in norwegian, cause ive grown up with that language, but i prefer english cause its international. but yeah, still.. i can do better. ill stay motivated and drop a new track in here when im at it. aight? dont walk with me, ill walk with you.

thank you all once again. stay up people. one!

Tom Chambers · 10-09-2008, 04:03 PM

Quote:

haha, okey. thanks for your comments everybody.

i also understand now what pop filter is.. thanks for clearing that up. a friend of mine will get me a new mic soon, ill buy a pop filter when i can afford one. at the time, im just gon have to keep distance from the mic.

other than that. track sucks, i think we all agree on that now.. im gon improve, but keep in mind that most rappers outside US sucks in comparision to the ones that live there. i live in norway so i actually write better nowadays in norwegian, cause ive grown up with that language, but i prefer english cause its international. but yeah, still.. i can do better. ill stay motivated and drop a new track in here when im at it. aight? dont walk with me, ill walk with you.

thank you all once again. stay up people. one!

i bought my pop filter for $20.....but you can also use a coat hanger and panty hose(hopefully not used.....) and it'll help some............

and i'm not down grading the fact that your foreign and try to do it english.....it was bluntly put cuz i was busy @ the time..........................just keep working on it...and you'll get it.........

xXEMaNXx · 10-09-2008, 04:32 PM

sorry not really feeling this the hook sounds weird

Viktor Vaughn · 10-09-2008, 05:25 PM

theres metal mesh pop filters and the cloth like ones, metal mesh are better,more expensive tho,i was running low on cash after i got my rode condenser so I got the cloth like one for $70, works perfect, and yes its there to stop plosives, Ps,Ts etc, put your hand behind the pop filter and blow from the other side, you will notice NO air gets through, not even a tiny bit, so yes it stops air to, even a non plosive can cause a " pop "

10-04-2008, 09:23 PM	#1
kurdiliciouz Join Date: May 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 25 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	SBG - Your Life (My Life beat by The Game) SBG - Your Life (My Life beat by The Game) critisize!

10-04-2008, 10:17 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	garbage!!! __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

10-04-2008, 10:52 PM	#4
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Sorry, Just Being Honest^^ __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

10-05-2008, 01:43 AM	#5
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	damn thats what i call a throwaway and it aint a glock __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

10-08-2008, 04:45 PM	#11
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	its aight, not great, but ive seen worse. __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

10-05-2008, 10:53 AM	#6
kurdiliciouz Join Date: May 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 25 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hehe, ur comments are funny. but aight. i will do better next time

10-06-2008, 02:50 PM	#7
keece "Real Recognize Real" Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: GBoro Posts: 1,605 Repped: 139 Repped 224 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Idk what 2 say..just keeping working at it and you'll be str8

10-07-2008, 04:36 PM	#9
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,274 Repped: 940 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	i really hate it when people do their own versions on these new songs coz thats what most people will compare you to and 9 outta 10 times no matter how well you did you will get a shit response, but thought i would check this out, i dislike the chorus, but , in saying that, i hate lil wayne doin it to, to editied for my likeing, i like natural sounding shit. on to your verse, get yourself a pop filter , lyrics is ok , flow is decent to considerin the tempo of this instrumental , alil monotonous but passable my advice is avoid doing songs like these and do your own shit, you'll go further, stay up

10-08-2008, 07:43 PM	#12
Da_Hook Da Hook Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: San Diego Posts: 8,498 Repped: 79 Repped 16 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	A Pop Filter Is So It Catches Da Air And Spit When U Rap Its Da Circle Thing U have Around Da Mic... __________________

10-08-2008, 07:59 PM	#13
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	ima steal ya sig da hook...those r my 3 fav punchline rappers

10-08-2008, 08:00 PM	#14
Da_Hook Da Hook Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: San Diego Posts: 8,498 Repped: 79 Repped 16 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	^^^ I'ma Murk U If U Steal It Dat's Mine Go Find Ur Own =P __________________

10-08-2008, 08:23 PM	#15
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	if u try to e-murk me....ima neg u

10-09-2008, 10:39 AM	#19
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	chorus was awful...i like this track by Game so......your verse was OK as was the flow...other than that a poor track... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

10-09-2008, 12:13 PM	#20
kurdiliciouz Join Date: May 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 25 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	haha, okey. thanks for your comments everybody. i also understand now what pop filter is.. thanks for clearing that up. a friend of mine will get me a new mic soon, ill buy a pop filter when i can afford one. at the time, im just gon have to keep distance from the mic. other than that. track sucks, i think we all agree on that now.. im gon improve, but keep in mind that most rappers outside US sucks in comparision to the ones that live there. i live in norway so i actually write better nowadays in norwegian, cause ive grown up with that language, but i prefer english cause its international. but yeah, still.. i can do better. ill stay motivated and drop a new track in here when im at it. aight? dont walk with me, ill walk with you. thank you all once again. stay up people. one!

10-09-2008, 04:32 PM	#22
xXEMaNXx W.C. KILLAH Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Tha O.X, Cali4nia Posts: 1,598 Repped: 789 Repped 264 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	sorry not really feeling this the hook sounds weird __________________

10-09-2008, 05:25 PM	#23
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,274 Repped: 940 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	theres metal mesh pop filters and the cloth like ones, metal mesh are better,more expensive tho,i was running low on cash after i got my rode condenser so I got the cloth like one for $70, works perfect, and yes its there to stop plosives, Ps,Ts etc, put your hand behind the pop filter and blow from the other side, you will notice NO air gets through, not even a tiny bit, so yes it stops air to, even a non plosive can cause a " pop "

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