Altereagle

off of my upcoming mixtape: ARES (GOD OF WAR) PRESENTS:
WAR&PEACE



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Okay...not exactly a single cause this for a mixtape but the first track I'm leaking is up and is produced by PalumboBeatz. Off the "Ares (god of war):presents:War&Peace mixtape ", The Catcher and The Rye's basic concept was to compare myself to Holden Cauldfield , the protagonist of the book "The Catcher in The Rye" . Basically comparing my difficulties with growing up with that of Holden's. Ironically this upcoming mixtape is dedicated in showing how much I have grown as an artist and I have a song about growing up and how much it sucks.

~Peace

P.S: Ares (God of war) presents : WAR&PEACE drops October

Lyrikcha

ok this was different...I dont understand what the catcher and the Rye means but I wouldnt of understanded the hook if u didnt write what u was sayin down...voice is aight but it sounds to much like u readin off the paper...hook to me was not catchy and kinda mehhh ya know...Beat reminds me of that "When we were kids" song...flow was a lil shaky to...


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dam I kinda just pointed everything out wrong with it and left u hangin...well the pros are it was a decent track and the beat was a nice choice...

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Beat Was the only thing keepin it goin for me

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Tom Chambers

your voice kinda remidns me of rise..............your flow was hella shakey......beat was dope..................honestly.....i see potential......you just gotta up your flow and work on your delivery some......keep dropping and upping your game..........

RICH$LOCO

flow was on n off but some of the lyrics where dope n story tellin is good 7/10 IMO stay up

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Rebel INS {CF}

^^^^^^^ Co-sign, and I definatly see potential, this is the type of shit I love though, for real, definatly have a nice UG feel to ur shit, the way u crafted ur song, the originality of the concept and shit, good to see someone droppin that isnt caught up in all the bullshit most net MCs try these days

One thing Im gonna say though is, forget this (God of War) in the brackest after Ares all the time, I thought u were just doin it in this thread then I seen it on what i presume is the tape cover on Soundclick

DEFINATLY stick at it, I can see u bein really good later on down the line

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