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Old 09-23-2008, 02:20 AM   #1
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These Walls Have Ears (Part 1) Produced by Sinima

so.......along with just fucking around i've been working on tracks for my mixtape "Don't Sign me Vol. 1"...........i got about 90% of it done...and it's gonna be a prequel leading into my album...which is gonna be a masta ace type feel with a storyline for the tracks and whatnot.....

i guess you can consider this my first "single"......its not finished mix wise and i'm adding certain sound effects to make it sound al il more natural......but





i'm also looking for collabs...so if your down to collab on something....my MSN is tom-chambers5388@hotmail.com

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Old 09-23-2008, 03:06 AM   #2
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i liked it. only vice is your voice.

sinimas the shit, me n him are soundclick buddies ;)

dont get why he puts his beats for free download i always tell him not to, cuz unlike you people prolly gun jack that shit and say they made it, never give the producer credit

but yeah track/story was cool
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Old 09-23-2008, 04:13 AM   #3
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^good looks on the feed.....
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shit is nize

was feelin it
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great story tellin and flow is flawless the only thing is all three verses sound exactly the same to me the beat was lay back yet good nice drop 9/10 IMO
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Old 09-23-2008, 11:05 AM   #6
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on sum real shit

ur flow at tha beggin of ur barz is good...but when at tha end of any of ur barz....u just lackin there 2 me...u dont carry out ur barz 2 me

i dont kno if this even makes sense....but u just dont carry out well enough 2 make me feel wat u sayin..

this just me thou

other than that...lyrics cool, emotion lackin a bit

aite drop, stay up
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Old 09-23-2008, 12:05 PM   #7
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yea I was confused by the endin of the story...all the sudden u and ur mom just died...were u livin in Iraq or something caz it seemed to go u got up, brushed ur teeth, ate, went to school and got killed...well anyways like Jae rock said ur flow at the end is shaky and emotion needs to be better...u always do this mode voice like u go into a zone and only make this one tone voice so its hard to feel ur emotion...hook was coo caz it reminds me of that Mya song...la la la la la doodin doodin doo doo AHHHHHHhhHH...


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Old 09-23-2008, 03:23 PM   #8
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ur flow at tha beggin of ur barz is good...but when at tha end of any of ur barz....u just lackin there 2 me...u dont carry out ur barz 2 me

i dont kno if this even makes sense....but u just dont carry out well enough 2 make me feel wat u sayin..
^do you mean i stop them early or something......................like most of my lines hit the snare on the last syllable.......and anytime i try to make them longer or try to extend or something it just sounds out of place to me...................i dunno...........
good looks on the feed everyone........
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Old 09-23-2008, 05:38 PM   #9
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pretty good

u straightened out your flow. but somestimes the way you said certain words didnt come out right

ion kno if this was a true story or somethin but it was kinda awkward listenin too

7.9/10...concepts are good and u stayed on topic but its kinda done before-ish
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Old 09-23-2008, 05:50 PM   #10
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^good looks on the feed...but this is only part 1........it gonna be in 3 parts......so i hope by the end it isn't like anything else.....

but thanks for listening
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Old 09-24-2008, 01:55 AM   #11
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Quality is good IMO vol could be turned up a bit flow is Good really improved there keep at concept good but a lil akward if ya tape/ album is filled with this type of music ima be listenin 2 ya shit but keep at it lo lo hit me up if ya needa verse or sumthin holla
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Old 09-24-2008, 10:11 PM   #12
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^got you........uppppppp
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Old 09-24-2008, 10:53 PM   #13
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^good looks on the feed...but this is only part 1........it gonna be in 3 parts......so i hope by the end it isn't like anything else.....

but thanks for listening
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Old 09-24-2008, 11:00 PM   #14
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DoPe.

Listened To It Two Times In A Row.

Flowed Excellent. The Story Was Aight.
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Old 09-25-2008, 03:53 PM   #15
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up...:-)................
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Old 09-25-2008, 04:26 PM   #16
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...flow waz fuckin sick..
story waz good too..
beat waz sick..who produced this???
9/10..much respect homie...
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Old 09-25-2008, 05:05 PM   #17
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sinima.....he's on soundclick...........most of his beats are sick
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flow was shaky....good concept....wasnt executed as well as it could have been....emotion is very lacking...lyrics were decent

ehhh didnt really like this....
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sinima.....he's on soundclick...........most of his beats are sick
his beats free???
if so how do u find them???
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Old 09-25-2008, 09:45 PM   #20
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go to instrumentals...

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iight good lookz^^^
so what they available for download
or u got to pay for them..
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^^^O MY FUCKIN GOD...IT'S FUCKIN FREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

n i suggest u get better b4 u try to spit on em = /
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iight nigga^^^chill the fuck out...
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^^^O MY FUCKIN GOD...IT'S FUCKIN FREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

n i suggest u get better b4 u try to spit on em = /
temper temper ssssssssssssssnakin right now buddy chill
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Old 09-26-2008, 01:20 AM   #25
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^^^O MY FUCKIN GOD...IT'S FUCKIN FREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

n i suggest u get better b4 u try to spit on em = /
^god...some1's got a temper and an ego........

it wasn't too long ago that you were on his level (as was i)........beating some1 down isn't going to help them get better shogun jr.
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