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so.......along with just fucking around i've been working on tracks for my mixtape "Don't Sign me Vol. 1"...........i got about 90% of it done...and it's gonna be a prequel leading into my album...which is gonna be a masta ace type feel with a storyline for the tracks and whatnot.....
i guess you can consider this my first "single"......its not finished mix wise and i'm adding certain sound effects to make it sound al il more natural......but i'm also looking for collabs...so if your down to collab on something....my MSN is tom-chambers5388@hotmail.com or hit me up on myspace.com/t0mch4mbers all feed welcomed and i will return the favor.......... |
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i liked it. only vice is your voice.
sinimas the shit, me n him are soundclick buddies ;) dont get why he puts his beats for free download i always tell him not to, cuz unlike you people prolly gun jack that shit and say they made it, never give the producer credit but yeah track/story was cool
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^good looks on the feed.....
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shit is nize
was feelin it
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great story tellin and flow is flawless the only thing is all three verses sound exactly the same to me the beat was lay back yet good nice drop 9/10 IMO
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on sum real shit
ur flow at tha beggin of ur barz is good...but when at tha end of any of ur barz....u just lackin there 2 me...u dont carry out ur barz 2 me i dont kno if this even makes sense....but u just dont carry out well enough 2 make me feel wat u sayin.. this just me thou other than that...lyrics cool, emotion lackin a bit aite drop, stay up
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yea I was confused by the endin of the story...all the sudden u and ur mom just died...were u livin in Iraq or something caz it seemed to go u got up, brushed ur teeth, ate, went to school and got killed...well anyways like Jae rock said ur flow at the end is shaky and emotion needs to be better...u always do this mode voice like u go into a zone and only make this one tone voice so its hard to feel ur emotion...hook was coo caz it reminds me of that Mya song...la la la la la doodin doodin doo doo AHHHHHHhhHH...
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pretty good
u straightened out your flow. but somestimes the way you said certain words didnt come out right ion kno if this was a true story or somethin but it was kinda awkward listenin too 7.9/10...concepts are good and u stayed on topic but its kinda done before-ish
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^good looks on the feed...but this is only part 1........it gonna be in 3 parts......so i hope by the end it isn't like anything else.....
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Quality is good IMO vol could be turned up a bit flow is Good really improved there keep at concept good but a lil akward if ya tape/ album is filled with this type of music ima be listenin 2 ya shit but keep at it lo lo hit me up if ya needa verse or sumthin holla
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^got you........uppppppp
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DoPe.
Listened To It Two Times In A Row. Flowed Excellent. The Story Was Aight.
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up...:-)................
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...flow waz fuckin sick..
story waz good too.. beat waz sick..who produced this??? 9/10..much respect homie...
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sinima.....he's on soundclick...........most of his beats are sick
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flow was shaky....good concept....wasnt executed as well as it could have been....emotion is very lacking...lyrics were decent
ehhh didnt really like this.... |
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if so how do u find them???
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soundclick.com
register go to instrumentals... type in sinima |
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iight good lookz^^^
so what they available for download or u got to pay for them..
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^^^O MY FUCKIN GOD...IT'S FUCKIN FREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
n i suggest u get better b4 u try to spit on em = / |
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iight nigga^^^chill the fuck out...
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temper temper ssssssssssssssnakin right now buddy chill
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it wasn't too long ago that you were on his level (as was i)........beating some1 down isn't going to help them get better shogun jr.
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