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Watz good...this a new track.. on my upcoming mixtape..mind of king pt.1.. feed this man...much respect..appreciate it yall.. holla at me if anybody want to collab on a track.. Lyrics.. bitch niggaz man up,real niggaz stand up..// hustlas stand up,d.c put ya hands up..// ima be a g,dead or alive..(yea)..// gangsta lil nigga,it waz built in my pride..// stayed on my feet cuz i never had a ride..// if i say i waz bitch,then ill be tellin lies..// nanna told me,be yourself,dont be nobody else..// but these niggaz joccin me,so im everybody else..// keep a fly bitch, and a pocket full green..// nothin but respect,when king pull up on the scene..// raised by the ghetto,yea the streets made me..// need some medication,cuz the boy so crazy..// hustle all night,the sunlight amaze me..// keep light 380, in my momma's basement..// u know ive been real since an early age..// ima speak my mind,to get through the pearly gates..// hurt me to my heart,grandpa(papa) died on that bed..// i bury my emotions,but a couple tears i shed..// this is rare,brave kinda nigga,no fear..// bitch niggaz man up,real niggaz stand up..// hustlas stand up,d.c put ya hands up..// fuck what u heard,im out to get my chedder..// ima hustle my bricks through any kinda of weather..// i dont trust no man,so we cant work 2gether..// but if a nigga murk me,we goin die 2gether..// look at my style, they hatin my swagg..// haterz goin hate,they wanna be me so bad..// unlike kanye,i dont roll around wit bagz..// pocket my cash,those bagz are for fagz..// comin up from ragz,on my to riches..// curious in the whip,that y i keep flippin switches..// these hoes dont love me,they love my gutta flavor..// bitchez after,i gets my muthafuckin paper..// now or later,ima paper chaser..// ill take u off your paper,like muthafuckin erasers..// puttin in that work,thatz my dailey routine..// me n my pistol,real niggaz to 2 g'z..// your everything i need,like jodeci and bun b..// bitch niggaz man up,real niggaz stand up..// hustlas stand up,d.c put ya hands up..// think before u say the wrong words out your mouth..// bitch,get some newspaper 4 u sit on my couch..// if u think ima wife ya,ya done took the wrong route..// if u dont suck me good,good the fuck out my house..// born to be legend,i waz born for this gangsta azz shit..// all black attire,im as gangsta as it gets..// hammer in my hand,thats gangsta for u bitch..// hands so slick,thats y i keep extra grip..// u know me,thatz y keep extra clipz..// feds bring me n,lookin gangsta in my photo..// ima fuckin star,like the cowboyz logo..// i dont need no gang,ima my move my weight solo..// youngking nigga aka up in yo hoe..// cruising through streets of d.c..// smoking my weed..//haha im rollin my dutch as i speak..// cuz bitch niggaz man up,real niggaz stand up..// hustlas stand up,d.c put ya hands up..//
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bumppppp..
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danm homie u really stepped yo game up nice flow and coll lyrics but that last verse was unnecessary man but u need to work one yo hook game i hope u leave feed on my shit too 1
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i'm impressed....you really stepped the flow up....it was a lil slow.....but its good that your making progress...............keep working on that flow till you master it....then you should start experimenting with faster flow/rhyme schemes and shit....but good job on stepping up....
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^ fuck u tom
flow improved ALOT homie.....dats all dat really matters.... im impress.....emotion was pretty good.... but u shouldnet never did that last verse.....dat fucked me all up homie...tha first 2 verse was good...dont never try 2 over do it.... and tha hook was like..." wtf ? "....put more wrk in dat field homie....i kno it aint ur beats u comin off of...but work making hooks like u doin but focus on it a little more... it gon do u sum good if u ever take this serious n wanna start buyin beats... stay up thou...keep grindin
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...i said i'm impressed......i want you to find 3 other threads where i actually say "i'm impressed" to a newer mc on herei'm just saying...don't be satisfied with one style or just being good....he got a solid flow going on.....now it's time to start getting into more complex shit... bitch
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I thought it was good for some reason...even tho this kinda track would get lost in a New York Mixtape Circuit caz theres so many similar tracks like this...Emotion was on point...flow was on point...lyrics was simple...beat was aight...this is a decent drop homie...keep doin ur thang
and I agree Jae Rock...Fuck TOm Chambers man...who does he think he is...pshhhh
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^i don't think i'm the shit...i KNOW i'm the shit.......
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The alias is Protege
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i liked your flow... at first, but the song seemed too long... like cut off that last verse probably... lyrics were much on that part anyways. it was cool. what beat was that?
PS: liked when you said this is rare,brave kinda nigga,no fear..// LoL
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
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Yo Unbreakable, U watch House???
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***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG
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good lookz on the feed..loco,tom,jay-rock,lyrikcha,unbreakable,..
much respect appreciate it my niggs... and that last verse waz kinda forced..i felt i overdid it also... and once again i aint showin my lyrical skills yet untill i get my flow down,with them nice lyrics.. so im just spittin simple shit that i know i can make flow... but if anybody want to spit on that last verse holla at me.. shit can be a remix..or it could be original...// once again good lookz.... the track is from my new mixtape..so that last verse is open.. upppppppin......................
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The alias is Protege
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So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES
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Im a big fan of the show...New episode comes on tonight at 8 est time...WOOOohhoooo...
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bumpppppppppp...//
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uppppppppppppin
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