06/19/08 - YoungKing187-Mr.King(Mr.Carter Freestyle)

youngking187 · 06-20-2008, 01:14 AM

Lyrics...////

v/1
king never back down,leave ya ass on the curb..///
me n my conscious rivalry bigger then magic and bird..///
pull the glock on em,then the hugs go round..///
,i ask for order in room like judge joe brown..///
heart is heavy,but i could bench press it,with a blood vessel..///
hood growth,evolved from a little kid,to the thugs level..///
unorthodox human,thinking wit my heart,so my brain is pointless..///
blood showers from clouds,developed pain without ointments..///
voice 2 deep for human ears,but still my best silence is broken..///
ready or not,prepared or ready,this death violence approachin..///
financially negativvve,kidney transplants 4 elders,u betta givvvve..///
times runnin out,4th quarter of life take shot 4 ya mother,let her livvvve..///
missed the open shot,overtime awakes homeboy u betta winnnn..///
Terminate residents,germs awake,heaven sends medicine..///

v/2
be honest,yall lyrics is ghost written,teach em spiritual lessons...///
thought distribution,exclusive recruiten,based on lyrical progression..///
inherited assets,marriage and stress,encouraging the less..///
Hatred,we honor it,negative acknowledgement,worthless scholarships..///
sex driven college kids,shit out of control,how i know?im part of it..///
but im positive,theres uncontrolable politics,we in shit?we started it..///
but theres no apologies,every lyric i spit,believe me,its apart of me..///
our country still at war,even though we know osama is history..///
U'g'z Is the troops,we make a better team then obama in hillary..//
ima be real wit u,i aint rich yet but homeboy i had the dreams..///
reload the clip,u'll get the picture clearer then a plasma screen..///
haters say im down by alot,they spent day's smilin at the score..///
But im ballin,im the ray allen of the board..///

mama aint raise a punk,one punch ill leave a head bleeding..///
yea i hustle,but u know i keep my eye on the reciever,im Ed Reeding..///
reading,the offence back at safety,haters dont make me..///
bring out the that lil deuce like a safety,gunz like the navy..///
yea.....fuck around wit U'GEEZ, u could get ya history revamped..///
karl malone flow,call me the mail man,every dilivery is stamp..///

J Dior · 06-20-2008, 05:01 PM

sound like you mumble a little bit and also your emotion is weak. flow is off at some points.

lyrics are dope though, just work on emotion alot before anything and that will help alot

SaF HeaT · 06-20-2008, 05:07 PM

fuck wit mixing alil bit and alil bit more emotion and u will be str8 my nigga lyrics is tight just mostly mixing and sum emotion would help alot what program do u use?

youngking187 · 06-20-2008, 06:44 PM

thanx 4 the feed...
much respect...i use wack ass audicity...
whats the best program to use...?????????

RICH$LOCO · 06-20-2008, 08:02 PM

lyrics is nice u need better delivery though homie keep working at it homie

-LATIN- · 06-20-2008, 09:45 PM

Yo fam you gotta have energy it seems you're just reading rhymes off the page..
Need alot more emotion!!! But your flow seems with practice you could get it real tight..
Lyrics are pretty dope tho fam ....keep em coming

check out ma shit leave feed

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 06-21-2008, 01:03 PM

they pretty much said everything already..ur flow is improving somewhat..just keep working on that...but you already got your lyrics down packed.. so keep shootin at it cuhz

youngking187 · 06-21-2008, 01:32 PM

appreciate the feed.....
check out the dead wrong track

Projec F2D · 06-25-2008, 12:55 PM

You getting better fam, just need to work on flow & emotion

SaF HeaT · 06-25-2008, 02:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by youngking187

thanx 4 the feed...
much respect...i use wack ass audicity...
whats the best program to use...?????????

i usually fuck wit sony acid but been using audacity till i fix acid but yea audacity takes sum work to get the mixing perfect

youngking187 · 06-28-2008, 06:11 PM

^^^^^iight.....bumppppppp

YoungJ · 07-03-2008, 08:43 PM

Try using cool edit pro..

06-20-2008, 01:14 AM	#1
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	06/19/08 - YoungKing187-Mr.King(Mr.Carter Freestyle) 06/19/08 - YoungKing187-Mr.King(Mr.Carter Freestyle) Lyrics...//// v/1 king never back down,leave ya ass on the curb../// me n my conscious rivalry bigger then magic and bird../// pull the glock on em,then the hugs go round../// ,i ask for order in room like judge joe brown../// heart is heavy,but i could bench press it,with a blood vessel../// hood growth,evolved from a little kid,to the thugs level../// unorthodox human,thinking wit my heart,so my brain is pointless../// blood showers from clouds,developed pain without ointments../// voice 2 deep for human ears,but still my best silence is broken../// ready or not,prepared or ready,this death violence approachin../// financially negativvve,kidney transplants 4 elders,u betta givvvve../// times runnin out,4th quarter of life take shot 4 ya mother,let her livvvve../// missed the open shot,overtime awakes homeboy u betta winnnn../// Terminate residents,germs awake,heaven sends medicine../// v/2 be honest,yall lyrics is ghost written,teach em spiritual lessons.../// thought distribution,exclusive recruiten,based on lyrical progression../// inherited assets,marriage and stress,encouraging the less../// Hatred,we honor it,negative acknowledgement,worthless scholarships../// sex driven college kids,shit out of control,how i know?im part of it../// but im positive,theres uncontrolable politics,we in shit?we started it../// but theres no apologies,every lyric i spit,believe me,its apart of me../// our country still at war,even though we know osama is history../// U'g'z Is the troops,we make a better team then obama in hillary..// ima be real wit u,i aint rich yet but homeboy i had the dreams../// reload the clip,u'll get the picture clearer then a plasma screen../// haters say im down by alot,they spent day's smilin at the score../// But im ballin,im the ray allen of the board../// mama aint raise a punk,one punch ill leave a head bleeding../// yea i hustle,but u know i keep my eye on the reciever,im Ed Reeding../// reading,the offence back at safety,haters dont make me../// bring out the that lil deuce like a safety,gunz like the navy../// yea.....fuck around wit U'GEEZ, u could get ya history revamped../// karl malone flow,call me the mail man,every dilivery is stamp../// __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-20-2008, 05:01 PM	#2
J Dior Burbs Finest Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: The Burbs Posts: 2,124 Repped: 1,075 Repped 492 Times in 116 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 6 Posts	sound like you mumble a little bit and also your emotion is weak. flow is off at some points. lyrics are dope though, just work on emotion alot before anything and that will help alot __________________ myspace.com/thisisjdior twitter.com/thisisjdior

06-20-2008, 05:07 PM	#3
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	fuck wit mixing alil bit and alil bit more emotion and u will be str8 my nigga lyrics is tight just mostly mixing and sum emotion would help alot what program do u use? __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

06-20-2008, 06:44 PM	#4
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	thanx 4 the feed... much respect...i use wack ass audicity... whats the best program to use...????????? __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-20-2008, 08:02 PM	#5
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	lyrics is nice u need better delivery though homie keep working at it homie __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

06-20-2008, 09:45 PM	#6
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yo fam you gotta have energy it seems you're just reading rhymes off the page.. Need alot more emotion!!! But your flow seems with practice you could get it real tight.. Lyrics are pretty dope tho fam ....keep em coming check out ma shit leave feed __________________ NEW MYSPACE NEW GRAPHICS NEW PICTURES NEW MUSIC LATIN RELOADED (COMING SOON) CUT FROM A DIFFERENT CLOTH COMING AUG 26TH

06-21-2008, 01:03 PM	#7
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	they pretty much said everything already..ur flow is improving somewhat..just keep working on that...but you already got your lyrics down packed.. so keep shootin at it cuhz __________________ myspace.com/vicirona -KRG THOROGANG myspace.com/camden2newark -Meesh THOROGANG myspace.com/jayrell973 -jrell THOROGANG myspace.com/dimezgotti -Dimez THOROGANG

06-21-2008, 01:32 PM	#8
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	appreciate the feed..... check out the dead wrong track __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-25-2008, 12:55 PM	#9
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06-28-2008, 06:11 PM	#11
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^^^iight.....bumppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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