06/15/08 - Lyrikcha- Stop Hatin (Produced by Lyrikcha)

Lyrikcha · 06-15-2008, 09:49 AM

Havent posted in a minute...Heat rippz actually made me wanna finish this song since the people I was collabin with for this did a no show so i made it a solo track...

RICH$LOCO · 06-15-2008, 10:42 AM

nice drop homie flow always on point and lyrics is decent return the feed homie i got 2 tracks on here

Lyrikcha · 06-15-2008, 11:02 AM

thx....I will check one...UPpin

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 06-15-2008, 11:36 AM

really aint feelin tha beat....

lyrics good...flow was good...emotion there

nice shit cuz

stay up

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 06-15-2008, 01:02 PM

da beat is kinda weird..but it sound like suttin u would go off of though cuhz of ur style

but da flow was on point...lyrics were pretty good .... da hook was iight..

flow on da third flow was cazy

nice drop overall ...stay up cuhz

SaF HeaT · 06-15-2008, 03:11 PM

beat kinda wierd but is still good its like one of those beats u dont know if u can flow good on it till u try i like it alot tho

lyrics & flow was definetly on point as always stay up faam

Lyrikcha · 06-15-2008, 04:59 PM

thx for the feed...so I guess the song is pretty average...I still got 2 more limbo right now...I actually made a song for the bitches and another one just talkin shit...

Yo Heat, I got a beat I made...want to jump on it and see what happens??

Baller · 06-15-2008, 05:06 PM

beat has potential...just needs to be changed...dunno....ya flow is good like always...pretty dope actually....need to step up ya writtens a bit...try to be a lil more complex...yu got that shit in ya...its easy to just put words together just cuz they rhyme...while the lyrics aint bad.....i think yu can do much better if yu put more effort in em....wasnt really feelin da concept....a whole song about stop hatin is kinda corny....hope yu take this critism to elevate ya game...cuz yu one of da only cats in this board that drops constantly that has rhyme schemes, flows, and concepts down....1

ps...never use "sick" wordplay....shits been outdated since da 80's...

-LATIN- · 06-15-2008, 05:20 PM

The beat was missing something!!
Lyrics were eh!! You need to be a lil bit more complex!!
You flowed pretty good threw the whole thing!!
Keep em coming also peep my shit if you get a chance..

Lyrikcha · 06-15-2008, 06:01 PM

thx for the feed...I was tryin to make my tracks more commercial but I guess yall liked it better when I was just comin raw and lyrical...well no need to worry then...just testin new waters

Baller · 06-15-2008, 06:06 PM

just be yu....dont worry bout bein raw or commercial

SaF HeaT · 06-15-2008, 10:22 PM

yea definetly my nig hit me up wit a pm

Tom Chambers · 06-15-2008, 11:35 PM

yes..about this....i'ma need about a week or so cuz my laptop's screen is all fucked up....and i need to get my verses in need of recording from it to my regular computer to record.......my fault about the delay.....but i'll do the other 2 ASAP.....

i'll bring you flowers.....

Viktor Vaughn · 06-16-2008, 12:41 AM

beat is crazy,lyrics is cool, nice flow, hook seems abit empty.

Lyrikcha · 06-16-2008, 07:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

yes..about this....i'ma need about a week or so cuz my laptop's screen is all fucked up....and i need to get my verses in need of recording from it to my regular computer to record.......my fault about the delay.....but i'll do the other 2 ASAP.....

i'll bring you flowers.....

haha thx...

06-15-2008, 09:49 AM	#1
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,379 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	06/15/08 - Lyrikcha- Stop Hatin (Produced by Lyrikcha) 06/15/08 - Lyrikcha- Stop Hatin (Produced by Lyrikcha) Havent posted in a minute...Heat rippz actually made me wanna finish this song since the people I was collabin with for this did a no show so i made it a solo track... __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

06-15-2008, 10:42 AM	#2
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,570 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	nice drop homie flow always on point and lyrics is decent return the feed homie i got 2 tracks on here __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

06-15-2008, 11:02 AM	#3
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,379 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	thx....I will check one...UPpin __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

06-15-2008, 11:36 AM	#4
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	really aint feelin tha beat.... lyrics good...flow was good...emotion there nice shit cuz stay up __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

06-15-2008, 01:02 PM	#5
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	da beat is kinda weird..but it sound like suttin u would go off of though cuhz of ur style but da flow was on point...lyrics were pretty good .... da hook was iight.. flow on da third flow was cazy nice drop overall ...stay up cuhz __________________ myspace.com/vicirona -KRG THOROGANG myspace.com/camden2newark -Meesh THOROGANG myspace.com/jayrell973 -jrell THOROGANG myspace.com/dimezgotti -Dimez THOROGANG

06-15-2008, 03:11 PM	#6
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	beat kinda wierd but is still good its like one of those beats u dont know if u can flow good on it till u try i like it alot tho lyrics & flow was definetly on point as always stay up faam __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

06-15-2008, 04:59 PM	#7
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,379 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	thx for the feed...so I guess the song is pretty average...I still got 2 more limbo right now...I actually made a song for the bitches and another one just talkin shit... Yo Heat, I got a beat I made...want to jump on it and see what happens?? __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

06-15-2008, 05:06 PM	#8
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 261 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	beat has potential...just needs to be changed...dunno....ya flow is good like always...pretty dope actually....need to step up ya writtens a bit...try to be a lil more complex...yu got that shit in ya...its easy to just put words together just cuz they rhyme...while the lyrics aint bad.....i think yu can do much better if yu put more effort in em....wasnt really feelin da concept....a whole song about stop hatin is kinda corny....hope yu take this critism to elevate ya game...cuz yu one of da only cats in this board that drops constantly that has rhyme schemes, flows, and concepts down....1 ps...never use "sick" wordplay....shits been outdated since da 80's... __________________

06-15-2008, 05:20 PM	#9
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	The beat was missing something!! Lyrics were eh!! You need to be a lil bit more complex!! You flowed pretty good threw the whole thing!! Keep em coming also peep my shit if you get a chance.. __________________ NEW MYSPACE NEW GRAPHICS NEW PICTURES NEW MUSIC LATIN RELOADED (COMING SOON) CUT FROM A DIFFERENT CLOTH COMING AUG 26TH

06-15-2008, 06:01 PM	#10
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,379 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	thx for the feed...I was tryin to make my tracks more commercial but I guess yall liked it better when I was just comin raw and lyrical...well no need to worry then...just testin new waters __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

06-15-2008, 06:06 PM	#11
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 261 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	just be yu....dont worry bout bein raw or commercial __________________

06-15-2008, 10:22 PM	#12
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea definetly my nig hit me up wit a pm __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

06-15-2008, 11:35 PM	#13
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	yes..about this....i'ma need about a week or so cuz my laptop's screen is all fucked up....and i need to get my verses in need of recording from it to my regular computer to record.......my fault about the delay.....but i'll do the other 2 ASAP..... i'll bring you flowers.....

06-16-2008, 12:41 AM	#14
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,275 Repped: 941 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	beat is crazy,lyrics is cool, nice flow, hook seems abit empty.

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