06/02/08 - ~~~YoungKing-In God We Trust~~~

youngking187 · 06-02-2008, 03:03 AM

(verse..1)
as i close my hands, and bow my head..///
i thank,god for catching every tear that i shed..///
thank u 4 restoring every blood,that i bleed..///
i wanna take back some of the words that i said..///
never realized how much u waz there 4 me...///
but alwayz kept in consideration,there u cared 4 me..///
i always thought that i waz too thug to pray...///
when i wore blue,u kept those bloods away...///
when i wore red, u kept those cuz away..///
thank u 4 not letting, my mother abort me..///
down by 6,8 seconds,can u change the score please...///
when granddad died that the tragedy just tore me..///
going against the fire,the devil has scorched me..///
but your pain and ya rain,poored water on my name..///
well known fact,water always beats flames..///
along way i came 17 in game, aint shit change..///
sames brains,same range,god everything's the same..///
and im just looking for change,not nickels in dimes..///
just reduce crimes,and keep these young people in line..///
GOD I NEED YA,THE DEVIL CANT DEFEAT YA,
THE DEVIL CANT DEFEAT US, PEOPLE WE NEED JESUS..///

(chorus..)
god is the reason,y im on top...(god is the reason y im on top)
god is the reason y my heart wont stop(god is the reason y my heart wont stop)
god keep str8 when i get outta line(god keep me str8 when i get outta line)
when ever im late,he bring me right on time(when ever im late he bring me right time)

(bridge)
In god we trust,In god we trust...
that he got a plan,for our future..(he got a plan,for our future mane)
In god we trust,In god we trust...
nobody is above the man...(yea)
cant do nothing but love the man...

3..2..1 god send me an angel from above..///
and give pac and biggie some of this king love..///
god send me an angel from above..///
and give shawn bell, and shawn taylor some of this king love..///

(verse.2)
i waz born as soulja boy,but u is the commander and chief..///
looking at u above,but i hope u looking at the man beneath..///
thats me,k.i.n to the g,showing thanx and peace to go. to the d..///
Amen,somedays i wonder if u really exist,man i wish..///
but u will alwayz exist in the kid..///
i know aint been to church like i supposed to...///
so im writing this song cuz i feel like that owe u....///
i know i done did things, that i wish that never would of happened..///
but like an old saying,some things just happen..///
theres always room for forgiveness..///
so as a king, i beg 4 your forgiveness..///
i hope that one day that speak to u right in front of me..///
this is real even if someone have to pull a gun on me..///
this is real when u got a hard rapper in this position..///
these fake artist could learn something if they listen..///
i hope u come down 2 earth,but ill be patient and wait..///
and do the little things to keep satan away..///
but everytime i try,my brain keep faden away..///
i guess i gotta try harder,hard is a must
holalooya and amen in we trust....

(chorus)
god is the reason,y im on top...(god is the reason y im on top)
god is the reason y my heart wont stop(god is the reason y my heart wont stop)
god keep str8 when i get outta line(god keep me str8 when i get outta line)
when ever im late,he bring me right on time(when ever im late he bring me right time)

(bridge)
In god we trust,In god we trust...
that he got a plan,for our future..(he got a plan,for our future mane)
In god we trust,In god we trust...
nobody is above the man...(yea)
cant do nothing but love the man...

J Dior · 06-02-2008, 03:57 AM

lyrics is dope man. good concept for sure. but definitely work on your flow

youngking187 · 06-02-2008, 02:57 PM

iight....appreciate the feed^^^^^^^
uppppppinnnnnnnn

youngking187 · 06-02-2008, 10:13 PM

bump......................

YoungJ · 06-03-2008, 04:31 PM

Lyrics is dope, this was some real shit fam. Flow still needs just as much work as it did when I first started sayin it. But you still have that potential. Workin on the same shit myself

youngking187 · 06-03-2008, 06:13 PM

appreciate the feed..^^^^^^^^

Projec F2D · 06-04-2008, 01:14 AM

Same feed as everyone else

dope lyrics just work on the flow my dude

youngking187 · 06-09-2008, 01:49 AM

thanx 4 the feed...bumppppppppppp

Tom Chambers · 06-09-2008, 05:41 AM

it has potential....

your emotion is entirely too dull...for a song like this...there should be a strong sense of passion in your delivery....
the flow was off........work on getting the last syllable or 2nd to last syllable hitting the snare...

but yea.....def got some potential...........keep practicing and don't let anyone discourage you

youngking187 · 06-09-2008, 10:12 PM

^^^appreciate the feed...bummmmp...///'/

youngking187 · 06-20-2008, 01:16 AM

upppppinnn..4 feed.......

RICH$LOCO · 06-20-2008, 08:56 AM

nice lyrics but u aint flowin what so ever work on that homie oh and leave feed back on my tracks homie see what i need to work on

youngking187 · 06-28-2008, 07:41 PM

bumpppppppppp...feed this joint..
appreciate it....

youngking187 · 07-05-2008, 05:30 PM

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06-02-2008, 03:03 AM	#1
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	06/02/08 - ~~~YoungKing-In God We Trust~~~ 06/02/08 - ~~~YoungKing-In God We Trust~~~ (verse..1) as i close my hands, and bow my head../// i thank,god for catching every tear that i shed../// thank u 4 restoring every blood,that i bleed../// i wanna take back some of the words that i said../// never realized how much u waz there 4 me.../// but alwayz kept in consideration,there u cared 4 me../// i always thought that i waz too thug to pray.../// when i wore blue,u kept those bloods away.../// when i wore red, u kept those cuz away../// thank u 4 not letting, my mother abort me../// down by 6,8 seconds,can u change the score please.../// when granddad died that the tragedy just tore me../// going against the fire,the devil has scorched me../// but your pain and ya rain,poored water on my name../// well known fact,water always beats flames../// along way i came 17 in game, aint shit change../// sames brains,same range,god everything's the same../// and im just looking for change,not nickels in dimes../// just reduce crimes,and keep these young people in line../// GOD I NEED YA,THE DEVIL CANT DEFEAT YA, THE DEVIL CANT DEFEAT US, PEOPLE WE NEED JESUS../// (chorus..) god is the reason,y im on top...(god is the reason y im on top) god is the reason y my heart wont stop(god is the reason y my heart wont stop) god keep str8 when i get outta line(god keep me str8 when i get outta line) when ever im late,he bring me right on time(when ever im late he bring me right time) (bridge) In god we trust,In god we trust... that he got a plan,for our future..(he got a plan,for our future mane) In god we trust,In god we trust... nobody is above the man...(yea) cant do nothing but love the man... 3..2..1 god send me an angel from above../// and give pac and biggie some of this king love../// god send me an angel from above../// and give shawn bell, and shawn taylor some of this king love../// (verse.2) i waz born as soulja boy,but u is the commander and chief../// looking at u above,but i hope u looking at the man beneath../// thats me,k.i.n to the g,showing thanx and peace to go. to the d../// Amen,somedays i wonder if u really exist,man i wish../// but u will alwayz exist in the kid../// i know aint been to church like i supposed to.../// so im writing this song cuz i feel like that owe u..../// i know i done did things, that i wish that never would of happened../// but like an old saying,some things just happen../// theres always room for forgiveness../// so as a king, i beg 4 your forgiveness../// i hope that one day that speak to u right in front of me../// this is real even if someone have to pull a gun on me../// this is real when u got a hard rapper in this position../// these fake artist could learn something if they listen../// i hope u come down 2 earth,but ill be patient and wait../// and do the little things to keep satan away../// but everytime i try,my brain keep faden away../// i guess i gotta try harder,hard is a must holalooya and amen in we trust.... (chorus) god is the reason,y im on top...(god is the reason y im on top) god is the reason y my heart wont stop(god is the reason y my heart wont stop) god keep str8 when i get outta line(god keep me str8 when i get outta line) when ever im late,he bring me right on time(when ever im late he bring me right time) (bridge) In god we trust,In god we trust... that he got a plan,for our future..(he got a plan,for our future mane) In god we trust,In god we trust... nobody is above the man...(yea) cant do nothing but love the man... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-02-2008, 03:57 AM	#2
J Dior Burbs Finest Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: The Burbs Posts: 2,124 Repped: 1,075 Repped 492 Times in 116 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 6 Posts	lyrics is dope man. good concept for sure. but definitely work on your flow __________________ myspace.com/thisisjdior twitter.com/thisisjdior

06-02-2008, 02:57 PM	#3
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	iight....appreciate the feed^^^^^^^ uppppppinnnnnnnn __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-02-2008, 10:13 PM	#4
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bump...................... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-03-2008, 06:13 PM	#6
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	appreciate the feed..^^^^^^^^ __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-03-2008, 04:31 PM	#5
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Lyrics is dope, this was some real shit fam. Flow still needs just as much work as it did when I first started sayin it. But you still have that potential. Workin on the same shit myself

06-04-2008, 01:14 AM	#7
Projec F2D TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.C Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: TheTributeToUs.Blogspot.Com my blog Posts: 674 Repped: 53 Repped 217 Times in 79 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Same feed as everyone else dope lyrics just work on the flow my dude __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

06-09-2008, 01:49 AM	#8
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	thanx 4 the feed...bumppppppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-09-2008, 05:41 AM	#9
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,278 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	it has potential.... your emotion is entirely too dull...for a song like this...there should be a strong sense of passion in your delivery.... the flow was off........work on getting the last syllable or 2nd to last syllable hitting the snare... but yea.....def got some potential...........keep practicing and don't let anyone discourage you

06-09-2008, 10:12 PM	#10
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	^^^appreciate the feed...bummmmp...///'/ __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-20-2008, 01:16 AM	#11
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	upppppinnn..4 feed....... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-20-2008, 08:56 AM	#12
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,568 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	nice lyrics but u aint flowin what so ever work on that homie oh and leave feed back on my tracks homie see what i need to work on __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

06-28-2008, 07:41 PM	#13
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	bumpppppppppp...feed this joint.. appreciate it.... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

07-05-2008, 05:30 PM	#14
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	.................. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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