05/29/08 - ~~~YoungKing..w/Akon-Hustleman~~~

youngking187 · 05-29-2008, 04:28 PM

v/1
this is that promote no peace music,
that drum roll beat music..///
tragedy's,flat lines,
unlock death without the key music..///
walking through the valley of death
,with a shotty and vest..///
u probly confest,
couple females with nice body's and chest..//
now lil nigga cut the check
got a whole gang felonies,
u young niggaz is star struck..///
this chick actin all hard but,
pull my dick out this that hard stuff..///
bullets penetrate through the head
call it unthinkable aim//
who the best?undisputed and uhhhhh,
fuck it unthinkable names//(i4get!!!)
undisputed in this bitch,
now congratulate ya favorite band//
blowin that good weed product,
from over in jamaicans land//(marley!!!!)
underated lyricist,
but the lyrics keep the spirit fearless in shit//
equipped wit words to establish text now niggaz here'ing this shit//
niggaz taking shots but missing,
boys betta start steering they clips//

v/2
picture me n the crew in the lambo deep..///
felony nigga,fans act star struck,
ill jump on em like the lambeau leap..///
pistol messiah,snitching denya,
put the cannon 2 ya azz like mariah..///
oh nooo!!!king on fire,stop,roll drop king's on fire,
yankee cap all black attire..///
the kid is in a position for proficiant,
just thought i would mention..///
follow the leader with heater,
me n my weapon in the two seater..///
2 believers,well known achievers,
negative succeeders,crime leaders..///
crime lead-us,to the jell cell,
what the hell,homeboy theres bail..///
proposed 2 the paper,
burried 99 haterz,
been doin this shit 4 ages..///
my flow here is contagious,
triple x rated,
wont stop till i made it..//
reached out to the cators
i owe em a 100 favors,
ill pay em back lata..///
u fakers..have exceeded the fake route,
ima just call yall media take out..///
And Im out!!!!

YoungJ · 05-29-2008, 04:52 PM

lyrics are tight fam.. flow is still mad off. try shortenin up your lines

this is that promote no peace music,
that drum roll beat music..///
tragedy's,flat lines,
unlock death without the key music..///

promote no peace music,
drum roll beat music
unlock death without key music..

some shit like that

youngking187 · 05-29-2008, 05:04 PM

iight..i feel u....
appreciate the feed....

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 05-29-2008, 05:11 PM

lyrics is tight..u already kno cuhz....flow still needs some work..im seein a lil improvement..keep choppin at it cuhz..stay up

youngking187 · 05-29-2008, 08:02 PM

much respect....appreciate the feed bruh..

youngking187 · 05-30-2008, 03:01 AM

.................

Fre3dom · 05-31-2008, 12:06 AM

This is kool...beat and the hook is fire

Your lyrics are nice...but ur flow is really off...if u shortened your bars this woulda been a sick ass song
plus u needa learn how to bring swag and say your words clearly...u mumble at times..

but overall i like the song

Yo fam can u up the instrumental with the hook for me plz?

youngking187 · 05-31-2008, 01:57 AM

thanx 4 the feed...freedom....much respect
i had to cut the hook from the real song and add it to
the instrumental..aint good wit mixing...
soo the shit aint perfect.....^^^^^^^

SaF HeaT · 05-31-2008, 02:00 AM

this was decent faam
flow was off at pointz

youngking187 · 05-31-2008, 02:23 AM

appreciate the feed fam....
im working on my flow now....
^^^^^^^^^stay up

RICH$LOCO · 06-01-2008, 06:40 PM

shorten ya lines to fit the bars on the beat learn to count the patterns of the beat keep working on it nice lyrics though

youngking187 · 06-01-2008, 08:48 PM

str8 up my nigg^^^^^^
ima work on it

05-29-2008, 04:28 PM	#1
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	05/29/08 - ~~~YoungKing..w/Akon-Hustleman~~~ 05/29/08 - ~~~YoungKing..w/Akon-Hustleman~~~ v/1 this is that promote no peace music, that drum roll beat music../// tragedy's,flat lines, unlock death without the key music../// walking through the valley of death ,with a shotty and vest../// u probly confest, couple females with nice body's and chest..// now lil nigga cut the check got a whole gang felonies, u young niggaz is star struck../// this chick actin all hard but, pull my dick out this that hard stuff../// bullets penetrate through the head call it unthinkable aim// who the best?undisputed and uhhhhh, fuck it unthinkable names//(i4get!!!) undisputed in this bitch, now congratulate ya favorite band// blowin that good weed product, from over in jamaicans land//(marley!!!!) underated lyricist, but the lyrics keep the spirit fearless in shit// equipped wit words to establish text now niggaz here'ing this shit// niggaz taking shots but missing, boys betta start steering they clips// v/2 picture me n the crew in the lambo deep../// felony nigga,fans act star struck, ill jump on em like the lambeau leap../// pistol messiah,snitching denya, put the cannon 2 ya azz like mariah../// oh nooo!!!king on fire,stop,roll drop king's on fire, yankee cap all black attire../// the kid is in a position for proficiant, just thought i would mention../// follow the leader with heater, me n my weapon in the two seater../// 2 believers,well known achievers, negative succeeders,crime leaders../// crime lead-us,to the jell cell, what the hell,homeboy theres bail../// proposed 2 the paper, burried 99 haterz, been doin this shit 4 ages../// my flow here is contagious, triple x rated, wont stop till i made it..// reached out to the cators i owe em a 100 favors, ill pay em back lata../// u fakers..have exceeded the fake route, ima just call yall media take out../// And Im out!!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-29-2008, 05:04 PM	#3
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	iight..i feel u.... appreciate the feed.... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-29-2008, 05:11 PM	#4
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 820 Repped: 24 Repped 38 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	lyrics is tight..u already kno cuhz....flow still needs some work..im seein a lil improvement..keep choppin at it cuhz..stay up __________________ myspace.com/vicirona -KRG THOROGANG myspace.com/camden2newark -Meesh THOROGANG myspace.com/jayrell973 -jrell THOROGANG myspace.com/dimezgotti -Dimez THOROGANG

05-29-2008, 08:02 PM	#5
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	much respect....appreciate the feed bruh.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-30-2008, 03:01 AM	#6
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	................. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-29-2008, 04:52 PM	#2
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	lyrics are tight fam.. flow is still mad off. try shortenin up your lines this is that promote no peace music, that drum roll beat music../// tragedy's,flat lines, unlock death without the key music../// promote no peace music, drum roll beat music unlock death without key music.. some shit like that

05-31-2008, 12:06 AM	#7
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 924 Repped: 65 Repped 117 Times in 61 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	This is kool...beat and the hook is fire Your lyrics are nice...but ur flow is really off...if u shortened your bars this woulda been a sick ass song plus u needa learn how to bring swag and say your words clearly...u mumble at times.. but overall i like the song Yo fam can u up the instrumental with the hook for me plz?

05-31-2008, 01:57 AM	#8
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	thanx 4 the feed...freedom....much respect i had to cut the hook from the real song and add it to the instrumental..aint good wit mixing... soo the shit aint perfect.....^^^^^^^ __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

05-31-2008, 02:00 AM	#9
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was decent faam flow was off at pointz __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

05-31-2008, 02:23 AM	#10
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	appreciate the feed fam.... im working on my flow now.... ^^^^^^^^^stay up __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

06-01-2008, 06:40 PM	#11
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 2,570 Repped: 671 Repped 546 Times in 134 Posts Neg Reps: 13 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	shorten ya lines to fit the bars on the beat learn to count the patterns of the beat keep working on it nice lyrics though __________________ "no way u can miss it like a 20 foot target from a point blank distance"- rich loco

06-01-2008, 08:48 PM	#12
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,521 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	str8 up my nigg^^^^^^ ima work on it __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

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