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05-28-2008, 04:46 PM
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05/28/08 - NU SCOOL FEAT JAE ROCK & TOM CHAMBERS... - Roll With Me .. (clubbanger)
shit got great reviews iin the chat sexhun... let's see what the Hate Comite got to say =)
just playin lol, all feedback is highly appreciated tom wuddup?? jae wuddup?? good lookin wiggas |
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05-28-2008, 06:30 PM
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i hate that damn beat
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05-28-2008, 08:32 PM
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the hook is....lacking. lol.
Verse 1- need to work on the flow a little bit. and delivery isn't as good as it needs to be for a club track. needs more swag. Verse 2- don't like this verse. ain't really feelin the flow. at all. couldn't get down with the lyrics too much either. Verse 3- This shit is what the track needed. Swag and flow just lit this track up for real. lyrics is hot too. this is the example how the track should of been. the ending was nice too. Overall- the last verse was def. the saving verse in this one. the first verse wasn't bad but it needs work on the flow. the 2nd verse artists seems like this just wasn't his kind of track or something cause it was approached all wrong. it wasn't rappin it was just talkin with some sound effects and the end of each verse. overall i give this track a 6.5/10 needs alot of work
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05-28-2008, 09:15 PM
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beat sounds like the build up song before a pokemon battle or some shit...Tom needs to stay on beat caz im a get a branch and smack him till he gets it right...emotion was aight but u need to stay on beat...Hook was aight to me tho....Scool ur verse was forgettable no offense caz the words u rymed with were awwws, ooo's and shit....need to up ur lyrics game and stop stealin jeezy's swag...Jae rock had good emotion and lyrics was on point...he saved the song...overall it could of been better caz I know lo can throw down when he wanna...
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05-29-2008, 05:21 AM
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damn lyrikcha how can u not love that beat????? erbody told me "damn that beat is so dope" so far... but thx alot for ur feedback man, appreciate it alot taht u taking out the time to check this shit.
and smoke thx alot for giving in depth feedback, appreciate it man! one question tho, culd u tell me exactly what is lacking about the hook? so i know what i have to work on |
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05-29-2008, 05:25 AM
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i'm to lazy to give feedback, but this shit is hot
girlllllllllllllllllllllllllllll dance with me toniggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhttttttttttttt chorus reminds me of some 90's song, can't think of it |
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05-29-2008, 10:17 AM
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lol, i liked tha hook alot.....i like hearing sumthing different once in awhile...
good looks on tha feed everybody....
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05-29-2008, 11:16 AM
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^^word jae lmfao......... erbody down here (belgium) is like: WHO THE FUCK ISTHIS JAE ROCK??? HOW U GOT HIM ON UR SHIT?? DID U BLEND IT??? IS HE SIGNED????
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05-29-2008, 05:07 PM
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its decent....jae rock made da tracc..imo...nu skool was pretty good..tom chambers was iight....
da hook was a lil catchy though..stay up
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05-29-2008, 05:12 PM
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the hook made me laugh.....to the point where i almost died.....but anywayz
nu skool...ya verse was good i guess.... t0m.....urmmmm...it was ok jae rock...i dont even know bout the lyrikz but ya emotion was great |
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05-29-2008, 06:30 PM
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the hook made u laugh..? what kinda weird ass wigga are u? lol just playing, thx for the feedback man
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05-29-2008, 06:44 PM
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Hook - even wit tha T-Pain effect, i STILL aint likin it... at all... datz all i can say bout it...
Tom - u gotta work on ur flow and especially swag (tha swag datz needed 4 club trax. u sounded bored)... cauze u definitely aint have it in diz right here my nig. but u definitely did ya shit... Nu Scool - i dunno if itz just me... but why tha hell u tryina sound like Rick Ross how he be swaggin on beatz like diz? May work for him but not u... but still liked ya verse none tha less dawg... Jae Rock - u basically saved it... u could cut ur verse and just play diz alone. diz iz tha type of swag u need for it. Good thing u were last and not 1st or 2nd otha wize it wouldve went from hot to just average... Overall - Track iz nice but Tom and Scool... take notez from Rock on diz fam... when u doin a club track, u needa club swag. Work on dat and u'll be good. 1.
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05-29-2008, 10:09 PM
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good looks on the feed...and this is only my 2nd ish club track......so good looks on the feedback.....
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05-29-2008, 10:12 PM
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just with the hook it sounded like you were mumbling to me. you need to have it more distinguished, don't let people hear you. MAKE THEM hear you. you gotta make that shit stand out like BAM.
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05-29-2008, 11:53 PM
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good looks on tha feed nigga
bumpin'.....
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05-30-2008, 03:32 AM
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propzzzz deeeeezy
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05-30-2008, 07:01 PM
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feelin dis shit lol
scool chorus is dope lol rock killed it and tom ye , emotion on it was nice
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05-30-2008, 08:03 PM
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propz on bein real man, that hook is dope asfuck
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05-30-2008, 11:53 PM
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tom - your flow is awful at times....no offence.....I dont know if its the way its been mixed or whatever...but it sounds like ur off beat throughout some of the verse....work on ya flow...as deezy said...ya swag was lacking u needa bring a lot of it on a track like this...so work on that....lyrics were meh...typical club girl shit...
scool - honestly wasnt feeling the hook.....I liked the flow of it coz it is catchy so propz on that..it sounds like an old song...i think i heard the original sumwhere....but it wasnt very good singing tbh....not every1 can sing...lol...anyway ur verse...flow was cool...but yet again u have done this like whispery/whiny voice...i cant explain it...couldnt really hear ur lyrics much but from what i did they sounded aiight...work on the delivery thats what ur lacking on at the moment jae- saved the track...wasnt ur best verse...lyrics were iight...but the delivery and flow was hella nice so it sounded kool...but the thing thats really bothering me when listenin to u nowadays is...that it seems like ur tryna be weezy...uve almost stole his whole swag lol...i guess its influence coz u listen to him...but u were kool overall i wasnt feeling the song...but if yall all worked on your weaknesses and redid it then it could be tight stay up and keep dropping |
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05-31-2008, 02:56 AM
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^ IM NOT TRYIN 2 BE LIL WAYNE ON ANY OF DEEZ MAFUCKIN TRACKS !!!!!!
lol, damn...im tired of niggas sayin that.... yo, when dat mic on..and im doin me....dats official baby...its been like that since '04.... but its kinda funny, a nigga " always " say that type of shit when he c anotha nigga puttin in dat work but its all good thou....thats not tha first time u said that either....and im not sayin " fuck you feedback ", im just tellin tha honest truth..and if u dont beleive me, read my sig... thanks for tha feed tho...
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05-31-2008, 05:24 AM
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i really dont see the connection between jae rock and weezy
jae always uses his lower voice n shit and speeds it up, while weezy usually raps with a high voice and slows his flow down & over-articulates his words..... |
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05-31-2008, 08:44 AM
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^ so u tellin me...i cant say " ya digg " ?....or " ya feel me " ?....lol...aite, if u say so homie...
its just me be comparin 2 wayne and how many years he been doin it..im still tryin 2 get my feet wet....
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