04/02/08 - 6443 Vs. It's Like I'm Dreaming (6443 Part 2)

Spoken Word · 04-02-2008, 02:00 PM

Ok, So I've Been Getting Alot Of Different Feedback On Both Tracks, Some Say Part 1 Is Better, And Some Say Part 2 Is Better, Personally, I Love Both Tracks, Part 1 Was My Very First Studuio Quality Song, And Part 2 Is One Of The Best Hooks I've Ever Written, If Not THE Best. But I Just Want Some Opinions On It, I Don't Want Those Bullshit Feedback Reply's On Some Shit Like "Nice Tracks" Or Anything Like That, That's Not What Kind Of Post This Is! So Here Are Both Tracks, Lemme Get Some Feedback About It, And Don't Forget To Vote In The Poll Aswell..

6443 For Alexandria (Feat. Nawlage & Kristin)

It's Like I'm Dreaming (6443 Part 2) (Produced By Chakezphiere)

And Here's A Quick Update On Me..
I'll Be Re-Releasing "Mourning A Loss" Before My Collab Album With Blaze & Fabuless, The Mixtape Will Now Have 28 Tracks, Seeing As I'll Be Adding "It's Like I'm Dreaming", "I'm Back", "These Thoughts", & "Everything's Wrong". Be On The Look-Out, I Haven't Got A Certain Date Yet, But It's Coming Soon!! Now I'm Not Re-Releasing It For Nothing, I've Just Been On A Huge Hiatus, And I'm Trying To Stay Consistant, And I'm Hoping The Re-Release Will Push Farther Than The First Release Last June 26th.

Raezr Productions · 04-02-2008, 02:07 PM

Okay Heres The Verdict

Im Definitely Likin' Part II a lot better...One Reason is The Beat. I Always Like Songs With Original Beats Better Than Songs Wit Industry Beats. The Hook On Both Were Really Good To Be Honest. The Girl Singin' On Part One Definitely Made It Better. But Like You Said, The Hook On Part Two Was Dope As Hell. Also, In Part Two, you can definitely see your growth. U seem a lot more mature in it. And That "Bitch" shit jus took it to anotha level LMAO

So It's Part 2

J-Deezy · 04-02-2008, 02:53 PM

Got it posted on tha DOA blog Spo. holla.

Fabuless · 04-02-2008, 02:54 PM

they both hot,
but ima have to go with part 2, for the same reason raezr said, u seemed a lot more experienced in that track
and original productions>>>played out industry beats, anyday
both tracks are deep tho bro

Jay Duece · 04-02-2008, 03:09 PM

i hate when u fuccin beat makers only care about the beat

fucc that bullshit

we talkIN ABOUT THE SONG WRITTIN N SHIT, THE FLOWS N SHIT

part 1 WOULD APPEAL TO THE PUBLIC MORE

Raezr Productions · 04-02-2008, 03:11 PM

^no we arent...we talkin about the tracks in general

Fabuless · 04-02-2008, 03:40 PM

i hate when kid jay come and bitch about shit

but unless ur not capable of understanding,

the beat is VERY much a part of a song ,

J-Deezy · 04-02-2008, 03:43 PM

^ Once again ima state diz... hez young and dumb... doeznt know much... what tha fuck can u xpect? LMAO

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 04-02-2008, 04:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jay Duece

i hate when u fuccin beat makers only care about the beat

fucc that bullshit

we talkIN ABOUT THE SONG WRITTIN N SHIT, THE FLOWS N SHIT

part 1 WOULD APPEAL TO THE PUBLIC MORE

the beat is just as important as the song...producers dont get nowhere near as much credit as they deserve

besides the fact that raezr only spoke on the beat for 1 small sentence, which is normal for any feedback

i cant listen now, i'll feed later, beat included

N. Streetz · 04-02-2008, 04:53 PM

Part 2 For Sure

Jay Duece · 04-02-2008, 08:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J-Deezy

^ Once again ima state diz... hez young and dumb... doeznt know much... what tha fuck can u xpect? LMAO

thiz OLD FAT NI66A deezy iz right for once..even ppl around me tell me im stupid or hard headed n stuburn n shit

but fuc that ill say and do wut the fuc i feel, cuz im a down ass nigga

FUCC ALL OF U BEAT MAKERZ TALKIN SHIT, ALL YAL CAN SUC MY DICC

O WAIT LEMME GUESS...YALL BOUT TO CLOWN N SAY JAY DEUCE GON MAKE A DIZZ NOW

SMH@ ALL OF U HOE AZZ NIGGAZ MAN...............THAT OLD FAT NIGGA DEEZY....HE MAY HAVE ALREADY BEEN THROUGH THE SHIT A YOUNG RUTHLEZZ NI66A LIKE ME GOIN THROUGH

BUT I DONT GIVE A FUC CUH, DONT GO N KICC KNOLEDGE ROUND ME NI66A

Jay Duece · 04-02-2008, 08:10 PM

Pt 2 Sound Generic Feel Me?

Sounds Same Ol Same Ol New Genric Shit

First One Sounds Real Good On The Professinal Industry View

Spoken Word · 04-02-2008, 08:29 PM

Right Now, I'm Feelin' Real Disrespected. This Motha Fucka Gonna Come In Here To Try And Kick Knowledge And Disrespect Other People In My Thread, And Than Call My Shit Generic... Maan, Fuckouttahere! This Thread Ain't Going To End Up Like The Rest Of Your Fucking Threads, Either Be Respectful Of My Shit, Or Don't Even Look At The Title

BluntWrapz · 04-02-2008, 08:31 PM

I listened to the one about your bitch or whatever

wasnt wack but it was missing something

plus i caught u biting lloyd banks "temporary like baby teeth"

wordd!

Spoken Word · 04-02-2008, 08:34 PM

Son, I Don't Even Bump Banks No More, And Wow, A Huge Played Out Line That I Used As A Filler

J~Souljah · 04-02-2008, 08:36 PM

tearin up my heart by nsyncK>>>>Both of em

Fabuless · 04-02-2008, 08:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken Word

Right Now, I'm Feelin' Real Disrespected. This Motha Fucka Gonna Come In Here To Try And Kick Knowledge And Disrespect Other People In My Thread, And Than Call My Shit Generic... Maan, Fuckouttahere! This Thread Ain't Going To End Up Like The Rest Of Your Fucking Threads, Either Be Respectful Of My Shit, Or Don't Even Look At The Title

THATS what it is bro

and yo, lemme know if u wanna do another track like this

i got u for the beat

Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga · 04-02-2008, 08:51 PM

i hear yur growth on part 2..so i say part 2 is better..but ilike da smile beat more den da original so id prolly bump datone a bit more..

Fabuless Blaze Spoken Word Album On Da Way

BluntWrapz · 04-02-2008, 09:00 PM

im older than u dogg who u callin son, son

lol anyways you still bit it and have heard that line on the g unit album before so u cant avoid it

try to get more original, write when ur inspired not because u have to fill out a 16

Jay Duece · 04-02-2008, 09:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken Word

Right Now, I'm Feelin' Real Disrespected. This Motha Fucka Gonna Come In Here To Try And Kick Knowledge And Disrespect Other People In My Thread, And Than Call My Shit Generic... Maan, Fuckouttahere! This Thread Ain't Going To End Up Like The Rest Of Your Fucking Threads, Either Be Respectful Of My Shit, Or Don't Even Look At The Title

NAH FUCC U CUH, AIMIN SHIT AT ME, FUC THAT SHIT NI66A, I STATED WAT WAZ REAL AND FAGGOT AZZ PRODUCERZ HAD A 1 MOMENT BITCH FIT

Spoken Word · 04-02-2008, 09:39 PM

See, Here You Go Disrespecting Me Again. How Ignorant Can A Person Get?

Jay Duece · 04-02-2008, 09:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken Word

See, Here You Go Disrespecting Me Again. How Ignorant Can A Person Get?

how ignorant can a person get? how about how homosexual/fake can a ni66a get

LOL U THAT SAME NI66A WITH THE PINK BACC PAC N TEADY BEARS PUSSY WHIPPED OVER A TRAILER TRASH WHITE BITCH MAN LOL..GOT THE DUMB SHIT PREGNANT......NI66A U WAS CRYIN OVA YA GRANNY AND ME DISSIN HER

NI66A U THE SAME FAG THAT WAS THROWIN UP CHILD SUPPORT IN PICS

LOL ONLY 300 OR 200 DOLLARS AT THAT, USSUALY U GET 600 DOLLARZ LMAO0

NI66A THINK HE BALLIN CUHZ, U DISRESPECTIN ME WHEN U RESPONDED TO ME HONEST FEED

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 04-02-2008, 09:47 PM

you show your age wayy too much...

but if u only 15 cant really expect you to act older? ion kno

Jay Duece · 04-02-2008, 09:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by C. Sense AKA L.J.

you show your age wayy too much...

but if u only 15 cant really expect you to act older? ion kno

LOL NI66A IM 16 finnaly

PresideNt Jay · 04-02-2008, 09:49 PM

LoL @ Jay DueCe ridiNg oN these LiL Niggas aNd them geTTiNg mad...FYI, ParT 1>>>>>>

View Poll Results: Which Do You Preffer?
6443 For Alexandria (Part 1)	2	28.57%
It's Like I'm Dreaming (Part 2)	5	71.43%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

04-02-2008, 02:00 PM	#1
Spoken Word UnTouchable Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: 978 & 727 Posts: 620 Repped: 13 Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 3 Posts	04/02/08 - 6443 Vs. It's Like I'm Dreaming (6443 Part 2) 04/02/08 - 6443 Vs. It's Like I'm Dreaming (6443 Part 2) Ok, So I've Been Getting Alot Of Different Feedback On Both Tracks, Some Say Part 1 Is Better, And Some Say Part 2 Is Better, Personally, I Love Both Tracks, Part 1 Was My Very First Studuio Quality Song, And Part 2 Is One Of The Best Hooks I've Ever Written, If Not THE Best. But I Just Want Some Opinions On It, I Don't Want Those Bullshit Feedback Reply's On Some Shit Like "Nice Tracks" Or Anything Like That, That's Not What Kind Of Post This Is! So Here Are Both Tracks, Lemme Get Some Feedback About It, And Don't Forget To Vote In The Poll Aswell.. 6443 For Alexandria (Feat. Nawlage & Kristin) It's Like I'm Dreaming (6443 Part 2) (Produced By Chakezphiere) And Here's A Quick Update On Me.. I'll Be Re-Releasing "Mourning A Loss" Before My Collab Album With Blaze & Fabuless, The Mixtape Will Now Have 28 Tracks, Seeing As I'll Be Adding "It's Like I'm Dreaming", "I'm Back", "These Thoughts", & "Everything's Wrong". Be On The Look-Out, I Haven't Got A Certain Date Yet, But It's Coming Soon!! Now I'm Not Re-Releasing It For Nothing, I've Just Been On A Huge Hiatus, And I'm Trying To Stay Consistant, And I'm Hoping The Re-Release Will Push Farther Than The First Release Last June 26th. __________________

04-02-2008, 02:53 PM	#3
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Got it posted on tha DOA blog Spo. holla. __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

04-02-2008, 02:54 PM	#4
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	they both hot, but ima have to go with part 2, for the same reason raezr said, u seemed a lot more experienced in that track and original productions>>>played out industry beats, anyday both tracks are deep tho bro __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

04-02-2008, 03:09 PM	#5
Jay Duece Killarado Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Colorado Posts: 3,887 Repped: 1,463 Repped 901 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i hate when u fuccin beat makers only care about the beat fucc that bullshit we talkIN ABOUT THE SONG WRITTIN N SHIT, THE FLOWS N SHIT part 1 WOULD APPEAL TO THE PUBLIC MORE __________________ THA "SHOTS GO HIT EM AND DROP HOS" THEY'L GO STRAIGHT TO YA GUT LIKE "ROSCOES CHICCEN AND WAFLES" "mE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>" - Jay Boy Deuce

04-02-2008, 02:07 PM	#2
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Okay Heres The Verdict Im Definitely Likin' Part II a lot better...One Reason is The Beat. I Always Like Songs With Original Beats Better Than Songs Wit Industry Beats. The Hook On Both Were Really Good To Be Honest. The Girl Singin' On Part One Definitely Made It Better. But Like You Said, The Hook On Part Two Was Dope As Hell. Also, In Part Two, you can definitely see your growth. U seem a lot more mature in it. And That "Bitch" shit jus took it to anotha level LMAO So It's Part 2

04-02-2008, 03:11 PM	#6
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^no we arent...we talkin about the tracks in general

04-02-2008, 03:40 PM	#7
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i hate when kid jay come and bitch about shit but unless ur not capable of understanding, the beat is VERY much a part of a song , __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

04-02-2008, 03:43 PM	#8
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^ Once again ima state diz... hez young and dumb... doeznt know much... what tha fuck can u xpect? LMAO __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

04-02-2008, 04:53 PM	#10
N. Streetz I Was Born Elite Join Date: May 2007 Location: In The Place Of Daydreams Posts: 704 Repped: 104 Repped 82 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Part 2 For Sure

04-02-2008, 08:10 PM	#12
Jay Duece Killarado Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Colorado Posts: 3,887 Repped: 1,463 Repped 901 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Pt 2 Sound Generic Feel Me? Sounds Same Ol Same Ol New Genric Shit First One Sounds Real Good On The Professinal Industry View __________________ THA "SHOTS GO HIT EM AND DROP HOS" THEY'L GO STRAIGHT TO YA GUT LIKE "ROSCOES CHICCEN AND WAFLES" "mE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>" - Jay Boy Deuce

04-02-2008, 08:29 PM	#13
Spoken Word UnTouchable Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: 978 & 727 Posts: 620 Repped: 13 Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 3 Posts	Right Now, I'm Feelin' Real Disrespected. This Motha Fucka Gonna Come In Here To Try And Kick Knowledge And Disrespect Other People In My Thread, And Than Call My Shit Generic... Maan, Fuckouttahere! This Thread Ain't Going To End Up Like The Rest Of Your Fucking Threads, Either Be Respectful Of My Shit, Or Don't Even Look At The Title __________________

04-02-2008, 08:31 PM	#14
BluntWrapz Cold Blooded♫ Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: FunkkyTown Posts: 597 Repped: 253 Repped 120 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I listened to the one about your bitch or whatever wasnt wack but it was missing something plus i caught u biting lloyd banks "temporary like baby teeth" wordd! __________________ "I turn the ice-grills into rainwater puddles"

04-02-2008, 08:34 PM	#15
Spoken Word UnTouchable Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: 978 & 727 Posts: 620 Repped: 13 Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 3 Posts	Son, I Don't Even Bump Banks No More, And Wow, A Huge Played Out Line That I Used As A Filler __________________

04-02-2008, 08:36 PM	#16
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	tearin up my heart by nsyncK>>>>Both of em

04-02-2008, 08:51 PM	#18
Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga INT.~Rhymers~Council Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Council Board Room Posts: 2,678 Repped: 0 Repped 36 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i hear yur growth on part 2..so i say part 2 is better..but ilike da smile beat more den da original so id prolly bump datone a bit more.. Fabuless Blaze Spoken Word Album On Da Way

04-02-2008, 09:00 PM	#19
BluntWrapz Cold Blooded♫ Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: FunkkyTown Posts: 597 Repped: 253 Repped 120 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	im older than u dogg who u callin son, son lol anyways you still bit it and have heard that line on the g unit album before so u cant avoid it try to get more original, write when ur inspired not because u have to fill out a 16 __________________ "I turn the ice-grills into rainwater puddles"

04-02-2008, 09:39 PM	#21
Spoken Word UnTouchable Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: 978 & 727 Posts: 620 Repped: 13 Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 3 Posts	See, Here You Go Disrespecting Me Again. How Ignorant Can A Person Get? __________________

04-02-2008, 09:47 PM	#23
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	you show your age wayy too much... but if u only 15 cant really expect you to act older? ion kno __________________ 20100426

04-02-2008, 09:49 PM	#25
PresideNt Jay Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: May 2006 Location: Your Mothers Bed... Posts: 1,355 Repped: 59 Repped 530 Times in 178 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	LoL @ Jay DueCe ridiNg oN these LiL Niggas aNd them geTTiNg mad...FYI, ParT 1>>>>>> __________________

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