03/24/08 - NU SCOOL - I NEED YOU HERE (LOVESONG..) .... l

scool · 03-24-2008, 05:34 PM

got inspired by spoken word's "Its like Im dreaming" for this song.....

let me know what u think... all feedback is appreciated

u already know its crack tho, since I'm the biggest bowws u seen thus far

and yea thats me singing mafucas, what u know about that?

Spoken Word · 03-24-2008, 05:40 PM

Can't Really Understand The Hook Clearly, But YoU Don't Actually Sound That Bad Harmonizing A Hook. The Verses Sound Meaningful, Shit's Got Me Impressed, Quality Still Needs A Little Work Like I Stated Before, Dubs And Trips Do Wonders, You Sound So Echo-ish. But Other Than That, Shit's Cool Maan

Glad To See I Can Inspire People Lol, But Yea, I'm Starting To Believe That That's Your Real Voice...

But All In All Man, Nice Track You Got Here, I Give It A 6-7/10 (So Low Due To Quality Issues & The Hook Is Kind Of Hard To Understand On My Part, Someone Else Might Be Able To Understand, But I Got Kind Of Lost Lol)

scool · 03-24-2008, 05:46 PM

hahaha, yea propz man

WIG E · 03-24-2008, 06:03 PM

This shit is dope, Scool I think u should start focussing on RnB/Rap shit now for the hoe's, I think this where your talent lies, cus that other song u had on yo myspace, u remember that one, that was a fire track to get the pussy moist

scool · 03-24-2008, 06:06 PM

^^haha chea, I'm still gettin "do you still love me" money hahaha

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 03-24-2008, 06:23 PM

ha this was pretty entertaining...the singin wasnt bad at all

i agree wit Spoken's first part

D.J DIRT · 03-24-2008, 09:20 PM

lol, i need this nigga on my hooks!

scool · 03-25-2008, 10:06 AM

^^just ax for whatever whenever lol, I'm down to go (no homo)

Fabuless · 03-25-2008, 11:02 AM

well...........
singin is actually good when it come to the pitch, but as a producer i wouldnt have placed it on there, because it seemed too muffled maybe? and like spo said, its hard to understand

but

on the verses, your flow was on point, lyrics were simple, cause its a chick track probably, but ya, this is 1000x times better than ur Jeffrey diss, which im surprised ur not banned for lmao

7/10

scool · 03-25-2008, 01:25 PM

^^jeffrey can't ban me, I'm above him in the ranking round here.. I'm the bowws remember

but yo, thanks for the feedback... appreaciate it

SaF HeaT · 03-25-2008, 02:03 PM

track is pretty good juss checked it out

i would give it a 7/10
gotta work on the quality alil bit couldnt understand the hook at sum parts
keep up da rnb shit tho

scool · 03-25-2008, 03:20 PM

^^thx alot fam, appreciate the feedback

bagaric1 · 03-25-2008, 03:50 PM

props man, but buy some better mic, cause quality is fucked, but I like the style cause its new, I make some beats but I dont know if you will like em, cause I got my style if you like any just say, and I got a thread with few of them, the first link got 30 beats on it in 17 minutes...and lol at jefferey song

scool · 03-25-2008, 04:01 PM

aight famI'll check it out, propzon the feed

bagaric1 · 03-25-2008, 05:43 PM

no problem, if you dont like beats, give me feed why

Smoke1Life · 03-25-2008, 05:53 PM

Im not just hating but i honestly dont like the singing. at all. no hate. just being real.
Simple Lyrics But Thats Alright Considering Its A Chick Track. Nice Flow. I Don't Really Like How You Pronounce Some Of Your Words But Thats Just Me. For What It Is, Its A Good Track. Just Really Not What I Like Naw Mean?
Decent Track Dude.

LiLMiSs50 · 03-26-2008, 03:29 PM

it was tite i liked it

scool · 03-26-2008, 07:42 PM

^^I bet u did......................... =)

03-24-2008, 05:34 PM	#1
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	03/24/08 - NU SCOOL - I NEED YOU HERE (LOVESONG..) .... l 03/24/08 - NU SCOOL - I NEED YOU HERE (LOVESONG..) .... l got inspired by spoken word's "Its like Im dreaming" for this song..... let me know what u think... all feedback is appreciated u already know its crack tho, since I'm the biggest bowws u seen thus far and yea thats me singing mafucas, what u know about that?

03-24-2008, 05:40 PM	#2
Spoken Word UnTouchable Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: 978 & 727 Posts: 620 Repped: 13 Repped 70 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 3 Posts	Can't Really Understand The Hook Clearly, But YoU Don't Actually Sound That Bad Harmonizing A Hook. The Verses Sound Meaningful, Shit's Got Me Impressed, Quality Still Needs A Little Work Like I Stated Before, Dubs And Trips Do Wonders, You Sound So Echo-ish. But Other Than That, Shit's Cool Maan Glad To See I Can Inspire People Lol, But Yea, I'm Starting To Believe That That's Your Real Voice... But All In All Man, Nice Track You Got Here, I Give It A 6-7/10 (So Low Due To Quality Issues & The Hook Is Kind Of Hard To Understand On My Part, Someone Else Might Be Able To Understand, But I Got Kind Of Lost Lol) __________________

03-24-2008, 06:03 PM	#4
WIG E Veteran Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Cleveland Posts: 3,461 Repped: 1,108 Repped 991 Times in 358 Posts Neg Reps: 29 Neg Repped at 34 Times in 27 Posts	This shit is dope, Scool I think u should start focussing on RnB/Rap shit now for the hoe's, I think this where your talent lies, cus that other song u had on yo myspace, u remember that one, that was a fire track to get the pussy moist __________________ "Don't Take life so Seriously, nobody gets out alive..." - Phil Jayhan

03-24-2008, 06:23 PM	#6
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	ha this was pretty entertaining...the singin wasnt bad at all i agree wit Spoken's first part __________________ 20100426

03-25-2008, 11:02 AM	#9
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	well........... singin is actually good when it come to the pitch, but as a producer i wouldnt have placed it on there, because it seemed too muffled maybe? and like spo said, its hard to understand but on the verses, your flow was on point, lyrics were simple, cause its a chick track probably, but ya, this is 1000x times better than ur Jeffrey diss, which im surprised ur not banned for lmao 7/10 __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

03-24-2008, 05:46 PM	#3
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	hahaha, yea propz man

03-24-2008, 06:06 PM	#5
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	^^haha chea, I'm still gettin "do you still love me" money hahaha

03-24-2008, 09:20 PM	#7
D.J DIRT T-FACE Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Da Dirt Posts: 615 Repped: 45 Repped 312 Times in 81 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 3 Posts	lol, i need this nigga on my hooks!

03-25-2008, 10:06 AM	#8
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	^^just ax for whatever whenever lol, I'm down to go (no homo)

03-25-2008, 01:25 PM	#10
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	^^jeffrey can't ban me, I'm above him in the ranking round here.. I'm the bowws remember but yo, thanks for the feedback... appreaciate it

03-25-2008, 02:03 PM	#11
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	track is pretty good juss checked it out i would give it a 7/10 gotta work on the quality alil bit couldnt understand the hook at sum parts keep up da rnb shit tho __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

03-25-2008, 03:20 PM	#12
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	^^thx alot fam, appreciate the feedback

03-25-2008, 03:50 PM	#13
bagaric1 stranger Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: LJ Posts: 3,351 Repped: 1,925 Repped 2,023 Times in 227 Posts Neg Reps: 12 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	props man, but buy some better mic, cause quality is fucked, but I like the style cause its new, I make some beats but I dont know if you will like em, cause I got my style if you like any just say, and I got a thread with few of them, the first link got 30 beats on it in 17 minutes...and lol at jefferey song __________________ I love counting dirty doe, I might never see 30 tho.

03-25-2008, 04:01 PM	#14
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	aight famI'll check it out, propzon the feed

03-25-2008, 05:43 PM	#15
bagaric1 stranger Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: LJ Posts: 3,351 Repped: 1,925 Repped 2,023 Times in 227 Posts Neg Reps: 12 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	no problem, if you dont like beats, give me feed why __________________ I love counting dirty doe, I might never see 30 tho.

03-25-2008, 05:53 PM	#16
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Im not just hating but i honestly dont like the singing. at all. no hate. just being real. Simple Lyrics But Thats Alright Considering Its A Chick Track. Nice Flow. I Don't Really Like How You Pronounce Some Of Your Words But Thats Just Me. For What It Is, Its A Good Track. Just Really Not What I Like Naw Mean? Decent Track Dude.

03-26-2008, 03:29 PM	#17
LiLMiSs50 avy= my ribcage nOt neck Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: WEST COAST Posts: 5,832 Repped: 51 Repped 66 Times in 33 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	it was tite i liked it __________________ .. liLMiSsFiF BiTTERSWEET ...

03-26-2008, 07:42 PM	#18
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	^^I bet u did......................... =)

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