01/23/08 - J Prov - In The Air Tonight

YoungJ · 01-23-2008, 03:50 PM

J Prov - In The Air Tonight

If only I had better quality . .
This song meant so much to me and I've been meaning to record this as soon as I got my mic.

Well, here it is . .

scool · 01-23-2008, 04:02 PM

u sound like a bitch with that "meant so much to me" bulshit fam... dont let me catch u slippin again or I'll put the tools on you like a dentist!!!!!

(thats my punchline fags so dont steal it)

im j/p.. Im drunk thats why im hating... aaaaaaw

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 01-23-2008, 04:33 PM

felt the emotion....
ill shit......
9.10

gunitworld50 · 01-23-2008, 04:34 PM

First off let me say that beat is hard bro.

Your lyrics are good and your flow seemed on point to me.

9.5/10 best so far from you...

Do you think you can hook me up with that beat?

mickilla · 01-23-2008, 05:26 PM

let me av a listen................................

lyrics so hard, deep stuff, like you said if only you had better quality. the vocals only coming out of the left speaker.

flow hard to catch, as the beat is so non hip hop, but you flowing ok fam.

i like it, it is deep and you cant tell when you spit it means lots to you.

i wouldnt mention celebs in the track, keep it bout you.

it a nice change form 'gangster' and randon disses.

nice track - 9/10

***leave feed on my track*** called influence intro

YoungJ · 01-23-2008, 08:25 PM

good looks to all yall
mic ill get at ur track, no doubt

abcdefghijklmnop · 01-24-2008, 12:20 AM

The Phil Collins track is one of my favorite songs ever made, I've listened to it over a thousand times so I can't comment on the beat.

But your a good lyricist, flow needs work but I think you said its one of your first track so good stuff.

01-23-2008, 03:50 PM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	01/23/08 - J Prov - In The Air Tonight 01/23/08 - J Prov - In The Air Tonight J Prov - In The Air Tonight If only I had better quality . . This song meant so much to me and I've been meaning to record this as soon as I got my mic. Well, here it is . .

01-23-2008, 04:33 PM	#3
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	felt the emotion.... ill shit...... 9.10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

01-23-2008, 05:26 PM	#5
mickilla 2 Face Records Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: The Booth (audio only) Posts: 1,505 Repped: 15 Repped 24 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	let me av a listen................................ lyrics so hard, deep stuff, like you said if only you had better quality. the vocals only coming out of the left speaker. flow hard to catch, as the beat is so non hip hop, but you flowing ok fam. i like it, it is deep and you cant tell when you spit it means lots to you. i wouldnt mention celebs in the track, keep it bout you. it a nice change form 'gangster' and randon disses. nice track - 9/10 *leave feed on my track* called influence intro __________________ Deadly Sins Tape - Coming Soon! soundclick.com/cdubz

01-24-2008, 12:20 AM	#7
abcdefghijklmnop Dusty B, Producer Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 487 Repped: 26 Repped 80 Times in 35 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Phil Collins track is one of my favorite songs ever made, I've listened to it over a thousand times so I can't comment on the beat. But your a good lyricist, flow needs work but I think you said its one of your first track so good stuff. __________________

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01-23-2008, 04:02 PM	#2
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	u sound like a bitch with that "meant so much to me" bulshit fam... dont let me catch u slippin again or I'll put the tools on you like a dentist!!!!! (thats my punchline fags so dont steal it) im j/p.. Im drunk thats why im hating... aaaaaaw

01-23-2008, 04:34 PM	#4
gunitworld50 Brainstorm Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: IN Posts: 2,722 Repped: 959 Repped 677 Times in 173 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 2 Posts	First off let me say that beat is hard bro. Your lyrics are good and your flow seemed on point to me. 9.5/10 best so far from you... Do you think you can hook me up with that beat?

01-23-2008, 08:25 PM	#6
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	good looks to all yall mic ill get at ur track, no doubt