01/22/08 - Prophet aka OZONE ft. Yung Primo - All Dat

yung primo · 01-22-2008, 07:31 PM

sike....................

gunitworld50 · 01-22-2008, 09:34 PM

Ya trying to be too gangsta.
The first dude was alright and primo you already know the deal with you.
Ya need a new mic too.

5/10

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 01-22-2008, 09:45 PM

to be honest man..it was boring

my attention went elsewhere....the first dude was ok flow wise i guess..very repetitive
the hook was meh

last verse was ok.. and whats wit that backin off the mic...it got quiet

6/10

yung primo · 01-23-2008, 05:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gunitworld50

Ya trying to be too gangsta.
The first dude was alright and primo you already know the deal with you.
Ya need a new mic too.

5/10

yo man. we aint tryin to be gangta. we just got together and did this cuz. its how we livin. get some shit off ya mind. ya digg. and by "the deal with me" u mean my lyrics, it wasnt the most lyrical shit i put out, i know. i wrote em pretty quick.

Quote:

Originally Posted by C. Sense AKA L.J.

to be honest man..it was boring

my attention went elsewhere....the first dude was ok flow wise i guess..very repetitive
the hook was meh

last verse was ok.. and whats wit that backin off the mic...it got quiet

6/10

well u know, we wasnt tryin to get too hype on this joint, tried to just be mellow, i was smoking when i started my verse. but hey.

good looks on da feed yall

mickilla · 01-23-2008, 05:30 PM

let me av a listen.

beat sounds oldskool, i like it man.

raise your quality if you can?

flow is good, but im sure you could of been more complex with the lyrics.

2nd dude - i think you should of recorded your bars at seperate times, so it dont seem the bar is rushed, as you run out of air.

not a bar track tho, liked it. 6/10

****leave feed on my new track**** called influence intro

01-22-2008, 07:31 PM	#1
yung primo wooda Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: california Posts: 846 Repped: 75 Repped 209 Times in 92 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	01/22/08 - Prophet aka OZONE ft. Yung Primo - All Dat 01/22/08 - Prophet aka OZONE ft. Yung Primo - All Dat sike.................... __________________ All I Ask Is That You Treat Me With Respect// And I Dont Want To Be Greeted Less You, You Greet Me With A Check - Yung Primo

01-22-2008, 09:45 PM	#3
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	to be honest man..it was boring my attention went elsewhere....the first dude was ok flow wise i guess..very repetitive the hook was meh last verse was ok.. and whats wit that backin off the mic...it got quiet 6/10 __________________ 20100426

01-23-2008, 05:30 PM	#5
mickilla 2 Face Records Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: The Booth (audio only) Posts: 1,505 Repped: 15 Repped 24 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	let me av a listen. beat sounds oldskool, i like it man. raise your quality if you can? flow is good, but im sure you could of been more complex with the lyrics. 2nd dude - i think you should of recorded your bars at seperate times, so it dont seem the bar is rushed, as you run out of air. not a bar track tho, liked it. 6/10 **leave feed on my new track** called influence intro __________________ Deadly Sins Tape - Coming Soon! soundclick.com/cdubz

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01-22-2008, 09:34 PM	#2
gunitworld50 Brainstorm Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: IN Posts: 2,722 Repped: 959 Repped 677 Times in 173 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 2 Posts	Ya trying to be too gangsta. The first dude was alright and primo you already know the deal with you. Ya need a new mic too. 5/10