01/06/08 - Smoke- Never Expect (NEW FLAME) LEAVE FEED

Smoke1Life · 01-06-2008, 07:28 PM

Yo People Check This Out And Leave Feed And I'll Return The Favor.

Lyrikcha · 01-06-2008, 07:51 PM

vocals remind me a lil of Marv...Flow was real good...beat was a new choice and hook was catchy and i liked it...u seem to be runnin outta breath by the end of ur lines so try to make room to breathe to...only downer was the quality of the vocals but this was on point...whats ur race, u spanish?

C Gilbert · 01-06-2008, 08:13 PM

Beats Tight As Hell

Flow Was Cool...Lyrics Is Tight...Quality Is Alright
Catchy Hook...
Good Trak. Keep Doin You

Smoke1Life · 01-06-2008, 08:26 PM

No Lyrikcha, Im White. Spanish..... Lmao.....
Good Looks On The Feed Both Of You.

gunit 101 · 01-06-2008, 08:35 PM

sounds aight still.

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 01-06-2008, 08:43 PM

flow was ill dawg

but do ya verses in sessions...dont go all out one time..cuz its obvious that you losin your breath...beat was good...this shit was tight...u tightened up ya flow

Joey Namath · 01-07-2008, 12:41 AM

No seriously dude, not even hatin or anything cuz i kno u get emotional about this type of shit but if anyone told u this was even romotely hot then they r lying to u

ur flow was wakk lyrixx sukkd, u sound like ur tryin to keep ur voice down so dad and mom dont hear u swearing. and if u made this beat i think its time to hang it up

find a new hobby mayne, rapping about shit u dont do and posting it on a hip hop forum isnt a good route to take

Hlla!

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 01-07-2008, 12:58 AM

how come the dudes that never drop are the ones who criticize every single song talkin shit

Joey Namath · 01-07-2008, 05:02 AM

yo LJ

are you seriously trying to tell me u thought this was dope? LOL fuccin homo go find a new hobby, you aint ever gettin a deal nigga

Smoke1Life · 01-07-2008, 07:49 PM

Dude, Its common knowledge you talk shit. I aint even worried about your punk ass. Make a track better if you gon talk shit
and you don't know what the fuck i do dogg so dont front on uncovered ground.

01-06-2008, 07:28 PM	#1
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	01/06/08 - Smoke- Never Expect (NEW FLAME) LEAVE FEED 01/06/08 - Smoke- Never Expect (NEW FLAME) LEAVE FEED Yo People Check This Out And Leave Feed And I'll Return The Favor.

01-06-2008, 07:51 PM	#2
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,371 Repped: 11 Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	vocals remind me a lil of Marv...Flow was real good...beat was a new choice and hook was catchy and i liked it...u seem to be runnin outta breath by the end of ur lines so try to make room to breathe to...only downer was the quality of the vocals but this was on point...whats ur race, u spanish? __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

01-06-2008, 08:13 PM	#3
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Beats Tight As Hell Flow Was Cool...Lyrics Is Tight...Quality Is Alright Catchy Hook... Good Trak. Keep Doin You __________________

01-06-2008, 08:43 PM	#6
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	flow was ill dawg but do ya verses in sessions...dont go all out one time..cuz its obvious that you losin your breath...beat was good...this shit was tight...u tightened up ya flow __________________ 20100426

01-07-2008, 12:58 AM	#8
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	how come the dudes that never drop are the ones who criticize every single song talkin shit __________________ 20100426

01-06-2008, 08:26 PM	#4
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	No Lyrikcha, Im White. Spanish..... Lmao..... Good Looks On The Feed Both Of You.

01-06-2008, 08:35 PM	#5
gunit 101 Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: South Posts: 125 Repped: 0 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	sounds aight still.

01-07-2008, 12:41 AM	#7
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	No seriously dude, not even hatin or anything cuz i kno u get emotional about this type of shit but if anyone told u this was even romotely hot then they r lying to u ur flow was wakk lyrixx sukkd, u sound like ur tryin to keep ur voice down so dad and mom dont hear u swearing. and if u made this beat i think its time to hang it up find a new hobby mayne, rapping about shit u dont do and posting it on a hip hop forum isnt a good route to take Hlla!

01-07-2008, 05:02 AM	#9
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	yo LJ are you seriously trying to tell me u thought this was dope? LOL fuccin homo go find a new hobby, you aint ever gettin a deal nigga

01-07-2008, 07:49 PM	#10
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Dude, Its common knowledge you talk shit. I aint even worried about your punk ass. Make a track better if you gon talk shit and you don't know what the fuck i do dogg so dont front on uncovered ground.

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