12/30/07 - Serious Battle Verse

Tom Chambers · 12-30-2007, 02:50 AM

i dunno why i'm posting.....but i am.....

Fabuless · 12-30-2007, 11:39 AM

agressive flow, really liek to hear that, should work on ur emotion tho
not feelin the beat, whered u get that?
who the hell u talkin to on this?

7/10

Raezr Productions · 12-30-2007, 11:56 AM

^ Its "Whoa" by Black Rob

Whoa...wut happened to ya quality bruh???? ITS GOOD!!!! lol
Flow is on like crazy
Goooood Lyricsss

Tom Chambers · 12-30-2007, 03:24 PM

^i watched/read shit loads of tutorials on how to master.......

djxtacy86 · 12-31-2007, 01:36 AM

AYOOOOO!!
Lotus.. Lolo.. Tom.. this was tight, man,
And, I agree with Raezr.. quality was AMAZING!!
Best I've heard on here for real,
Looks like you've been doing your homework!!
Flow is much better, less of the slipping from before,
Delivery, cadence, and what-not, is excellent.
You sound different.. the Nelly line was funny as fuck, lol,
Punches were good overall, but, that one caught my ear.
I'll give this a 9/10.. much improved, I must say, Lotus.
Where did you learn how to master your vocals though??
I've been looking like crazy for some tutorials or some shit!!
Get at the young man, young man.. later.

- Stevie C.

Tom Chambers · 12-31-2007, 01:58 AM

itshiphop

dot

com

Dam3ion · 12-31-2007, 06:26 PM

pretty nice man....u ramble off ya words tho...nice tho man...
6/10

PresideNt Jay · 12-31-2007, 07:38 PM

Alot of your LiNes are too loNg...buT Other theN That this was Coo
6/10

Tom Chambers · 12-31-2007, 08:46 PM

^here goes his verse.....and lmfao @ too long?........do you mean i fell off flow or what?....or do you mean that my rhyme scheme wasn't something you enjoyed?

Joey Namath · 01-01-2008, 06:02 PM

Lmaoooo

i seriously laughed hard, not even just pressing the L and O keys when i heard "didnt you bite in a text battle mayn? fuckin lame ass net thugs" hahaha god damn

this shit sucks man u cant flow for shit, but it doesnt matter u jus post on hh so keep it up

Tom Chambers · 01-01-2008, 07:00 PM

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Lmaoooo

i seriously laughed hard, not even just pressing the L and O keys when i heard "didnt you bite in a text battle mayn? fuckin lame ass net thugs" hahaha god damn

this shit sucks man u cant flow for shit, but it doesnt matter u jus post on hh so keep it up

Thank you.......may i hear one your godly raps?

PresideNt Jay · 01-02-2008, 01:54 AM

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Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

^here goes his verse.....and lmfao @ too long?........do you mean i fell off flow or what?....or do you mean that my rhyme scheme wasn't something you enjoyed?

your rhyme scheme would be koo if u kNew how to do iT...your fLow is Horrible soN...im dissapoiNted iN u...you beeN RappiN for years aNd you still doNt kNow how to sTay oN beat...

:sm h:

Tom Chambers · 01-02-2008, 02:18 AM

years....this is my first year?

Joey Namath · 01-02-2008, 02:19 AM

your voice n futile attempt at rap was jus supa funny mayne

e thuggin n whatnot, its coo doe, im on mah greezy like grated cheezy Niggguhhhhh

PresideNt Jay · 01-02-2008, 03:38 AM

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Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

years....this is my first year?

iT's '08...i'Ve seeN you've beeN doiNg traCcs siNce like '06...probably writiNg way before thaT...aNd stiLL caNt flow to a beat...you should be a beasT by NoW LiL Fella...im extremly dissapoiNted iN you...this was below average...

...aNd u claim to have lyrics...but if u listen closey your lyrics aint even all that...forced multies sayiNg raNdom shit thaT sometimes dont make seNce...step ya game Up

Joey Namath · 01-02-2008, 04:16 AM

^^LMAooooo

thats allrealtalk too, goddamn son

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 01-02-2008, 10:43 AM

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Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

^i watched/read shit loads of tutorials on how to master.......

^ and were did u get thous from mister ?!

Tom Chambers · 01-02-2008, 07:39 PM

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iT's '08...i'Ve seeN you've beeN doiNg traCcs siNce like '06...probably writiNg way before thaT...aNd stiLL caNt flow to a beat...you should be a beasT by NoW LiL Fella...im extremly dissapoiNted iN you...this was below average......aNd u claim to have lyrics...but if u listen closey your lyrics aint even all that...forced multies sayiNg raNdom shit thaT sometimes dont make seNce...step ya game Up

^no...my first track was at the end of 06
i think november...so its been a year and some change....

and lmfao....they don't make sense???

now i'm sure your just hating....you and joey noname's the only kids in here who had something stupid to say.......

so...how about that 5G battle you suppose to have with price lil fuck boy?........i'm sure thats one night of tips from your stripping gig right?

PresideNt Jay · 01-02-2008, 07:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by T0M CH4MBERS

^no...my first track was at the end of 06
i think november...so its been a year and some change....

and lmfao....they don't make sense???

now i'm sure your just hating....you and joey noname's the only kids in here who had something stupid to say.......

so...how about that 5G battle you suppose to have with price lil fuck boy?........i'm sure thats one night of tips from your stripping gig right?

^^^101 EXCUSES FOR BEING WACK.......

Sion De Freitas · 01-02-2008, 07:49 PM

this was kool Tom

dont watch the hate fam

Joey Namath · 01-02-2008, 09:42 PM

its just sad dude, of course im adding a little more gas to the fire than need be but if you seriously think your super dope and all that then someone needs a reality check

actin all rough n tumble, save it for the washer and dryer doggy dogg.

maybe if u took the time to make a real song n not some bullshit i would b givin u props but this was lame." Yo son u biting in dat text battle? o hell nah" etc etc just sounds hilarious to me

anyways dont go cry im just havin fun criticizing everyones audios n keeping it gully gully

you punchlines suck totally, multies were decent but half the time your flow ruined everything, stop tryin to be someone your not(eminem*cough)

lol peace

PresideNt Jay · 01-03-2008, 01:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joey Namath

its just sad dude, of course im adding a little more gas to the fire than need be but if you seriously think your super dope and all that then someone needs a reality check

actin all rough n tumble, save it for the washer and dryer doggy dogg.

maybe if u took the time to make a real song n not some bullshit i would b givin u props but this was lame." Yo son u biting in dat text battle? o hell nah" etc etc just sounds hilarious to me

anyways dont go cry im just havin fun criticizing everyones audios n keeping it gully gully

you punchlines suck totally, multies were decent but half the time your flow ruined everything, stop tryin to be someone your not(eminem*cough)

lol peace

^^^reaL Talk from this caT...ThoMas goT them camroN PunchliNes...

Tom Chambers · 01-03-2008, 04:57 PM

^lmfao....i love it.......

i like how you guys stayed in my thread.....good boys.......maybe later i'll get you some milk bones and dog collars with your names on them?....would you like that?....

LMfao and jayson....wheres that 5G battle with price.....i thought you was balling enough to put that kinda cash up

@ joe......i didn't do any punchlines...unless of course you consider the nelly one a punchline....but you wouldn't catch the relevence of it anyways......i have only posted one "song" on this forum....the rest have been saved for my tape......

and i don't try to eminem...and i know exactly where i'm at and do not think of "super dope"....

i would say i'm 6/10 rapper when i actually try........

and if you honestly believe that i'm listening to yours or jayson's criticisms....then you sir are mentally challenged......i have to come to the conclusion of who's criticisms i should and shouldn't listen to.....and don't say its ppl i know....cuz honestly....only kats i can say i know is raez and jae....and jae didn't say shit bout the song......(itshiphop dot com dunny)

now......i got shit i need to handle.....when i come back i'll remember them milk bones and dog collars for yall........so just sit here and be good....remember...no shitting or pissing on the furniture......or i'll put you in the cage

Rebel INS {CF} · 01-04-2008, 01:20 PM

lmao lotus gets way too much hate on here its a fuckin joke, he gets mad love on IHH and he def murdered Serious, i ehard both their shits and it wasnt even close to be perfectly honest

then again Serious came with this weird ass Southern flow so im sure a lot of u weird fucks would be feelin that

Tom Chambers · 01-04-2008, 03:58 PM

123 views and i didn't even diss noone on here........

12-30-2007, 02:50 AM	#1
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	12/30/07 - Serious Battle Verse 12/30/07 - Serious Battle Verse i dunno why i'm posting.....but i am.....

12-31-2007, 06:26 PM	#7
Dam3ion Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: New Orleanz, Louisiana Posts: 5,696 Repped: 801 Repped 3,024 Times in 550 Posts Neg Reps: 35 Neg Repped at 50 Times in 43 Posts	pretty nice man....u ramble off ya words tho...nice tho man... 6/10 __________________ 9-0...Who's Gonna Beat Us...

12-31-2007, 07:38 PM	#8
PresideNt Jay Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: May 2006 Location: Your Mothers Bed... Posts: 1,355 Repped: 59 Repped 530 Times in 178 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 10 Posts	Alot of your LiNes are too loNg...buT Other theN That this was Coo 6/10 __________________

01-02-2008, 07:49 PM	#20
Sion De Freitas The McDuppy Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South London Posts: 1,310 Repped: 177 Repped 374 Times in 151 Posts Blog Entries: 1 Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 8 Posts	this was kool Tom dont watch the hate fam __________________

01-04-2008, 01:20 PM	#24
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	lmao lotus gets way too much hate on here its a fuckin joke, he gets mad love on IHH and he def murdered Serious, i ehard both their shits and it wasnt even close to be perfectly honest then again Serious came with this weird ass Southern flow so im sure a lot of u weird fucks would be feelin that __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

12-30-2007, 11:39 AM	#2
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	agressive flow, really liek to hear that, should work on ur emotion tho not feelin the beat, whered u get that? who the hell u talkin to on this? 7/10

12-30-2007, 11:56 AM	#3
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ Its "Whoa" by Black Rob Whoa...wut happened to ya quality bruh???? ITS GOOD!!!! lol Flow is on like crazy Goooood Lyricsss

12-30-2007, 03:24 PM	#4
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^i watched/read shit loads of tutorials on how to master.......

12-31-2007, 01:36 AM	#5
djxtacy86 The Pride of Homestead Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Homestead, Florida Posts: 2,517 Repped: 2,157 Repped 18 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	AYOOOOO!! Lotus.. Lolo.. Tom.. this was tight, man, And, I agree with Raezr.. quality was AMAZING!! Best I've heard on here for real, Looks like you've been doing your homework!! Flow is much better, less of the slipping from before, Delivery, cadence, and what-not, is excellent. You sound different.. the Nelly line was funny as fuck, lol, Punches were good overall, but, that one caught my ear. I'll give this a 9/10.. much improved, I must say, Lotus. Where did you learn how to master your vocals though?? I've been looking like crazy for some tutorials or some shit!! Get at the young man, young man.. later. - Stevie C.

12-31-2007, 01:58 AM	#6
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	itshiphop dot com

12-31-2007, 08:46 PM	#9
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^here goes his verse.....and lmfao @ too long?........do you mean i fell off flow or what?....or do you mean that my rhyme scheme wasn't something you enjoyed?

01-01-2008, 06:02 PM	#10
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Lmaoooo i seriously laughed hard, not even just pressing the L and O keys when i heard "didnt you bite in a text battle mayn? fuckin lame ass net thugs" hahaha god damn this shit sucks man u cant flow for shit, but it doesnt matter u jus post on hh so keep it up

01-02-2008, 02:18 AM	#13
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	years....this is my first year?

01-02-2008, 02:19 AM	#14
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	your voice n futile attempt at rap was jus supa funny mayne e thuggin n whatnot, its coo doe, im on mah greezy like grated cheezy Niggguhhhhh

01-02-2008, 04:16 AM	#16
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^LMAooooo thats allrealtalk too, goddamn son

01-02-2008, 09:42 PM	#21
Joey Namath Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Sandwich bag Posts: 276 Repped: 148 Repped 8 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	its just sad dude, of course im adding a little more gas to the fire than need be but if you seriously think your super dope and all that then someone needs a reality check actin all rough n tumble, save it for the washer and dryer doggy dogg. maybe if u took the time to make a real song n not some bullshit i would b givin u props but this was lame." Yo son u biting in dat text battle? o hell nah" etc etc just sounds hilarious to me anyways dont go cry im just havin fun criticizing everyones audios n keeping it gully gully you punchlines suck totally, multies were decent but half the time your flow ruined everything, stop tryin to be someone your not(eminem*cough) lol peace

01-03-2008, 04:57 PM	#23
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^lmfao....i love it....... i like how you guys stayed in my thread.....good boys.......maybe later i'll get you some milk bones and dog collars with your names on them?....would you like that?.... LMfao and jayson....wheres that 5G battle with price.....i thought you was balling enough to put that kinda cash up @ joe......i didn't do any punchlines...unless of course you consider the nelly one a punchline....but you wouldn't catch the relevence of it anyways......i have only posted one "song" on this forum....the rest have been saved for my tape...... and i don't try to eminem...and i know exactly where i'm at and do not think of "super dope".... i would say i'm 6/10 rapper when i actually try........ and if you honestly believe that i'm listening to yours or jayson's criticisms....then you sir are mentally challenged......i have to come to the conclusion of who's criticisms i should and shouldn't listen to.....and don't say its ppl i know....cuz honestly....only kats i can say i know is raez and jae....and jae didn't say shit bout the song......(itshiphop dot com dunny) now......i got shit i need to handle.....when i come back i'll remember them milk bones and dog collars for yall........so just sit here and be good....remember...no shitting or pissing on the furniture......or i'll put you in the cage

01-04-2008, 03:58 PM	#25
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	123 views and i didn't even diss noone on here........

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