Lyrikcha & Marv- Sweet Dreams

Lyrikcha · 11-04-2007, 01:29 AM

not a diss...so mando stfu and enjoy it...as well as the rest...

SaF HeaT · 11-04-2007, 01:50 AM

figured i'd drop in and shit 10/10 ya'll did ya'll thing i hope ya'll still got that project for da next mixtape

Lyrikcha · 11-04-2007, 09:44 AM

UPPIn.................................

Lyrikcha · 11-04-2007, 10:10 AM

oh and thx for the feed Ripzz

J-Deezy · 11-04-2007, 12:03 PM

i fuckz wit diz track fam. definitely sumthin to lay back and listen to. keep doin ya shit my niggaz. 9/10. holla. 1.

C Gilbert · 11-04-2007, 12:12 PM

Aw Hell Lyrik I Was Def Gon Use This Beat As A Project...Fuck It Still Will
Beat Is Sick As Hell...
Lyrik-Flow Was Good, Lyrics Is Cool...Stuck On Concept..Quality Is Nice
Marv-Flow Was Iigh...Nice Lyrics..Concept Was Good..And Quality On Point
Def A Track To Jus CHill With...8/10

Lyrikcha · 11-04-2007, 12:28 PM

thx fam...didnt know u was tryin to use that beat...but i kinda do now caz the beat and sample was hot and who wouldnt...anyways thx for the 8/10 even tho i know u ment 9/10... muhahaha

Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga · 11-04-2007, 12:51 PM

LYRIK dis wut im talkin bout...writin song format trakz u had a hot verse...keep at shit up...Marv real hot verse too..i expekt u to have dat song writin format u already on da right path stay up yal

Mar-Velous · 11-04-2007, 01:59 PM

Yea Thx For feed On this Joitn Dont 4get 2 chek da otha Joint Holla Uppin

Mar-Velous · 11-05-2007, 05:21 PM

Uppin 4 more feed

Tom Chambers · 11-06-2007, 11:10 PM

lyrik-

....very nice hook and good job at staying on topic

marv-nice verse marv...that parrarel(sp?) parking line was nice

very dope shit fella's....i'ma have to holla for a collab for my tape....

(lyrik...i'll have that verse tomorrow morning....)

Lyrikcha · 11-08-2007, 08:00 PM

UPpin..................................

Lyrikcha · 11-10-2007, 02:19 PM

Uppin.....................................

YUNG STIXX · 11-10-2007, 02:28 PM

^^^Aye Lyric go peep out that "whats wrong wwith the world" and "fuck the south" tracks

Lyrikcha · 11-10-2007, 08:34 PM

Uppin........................

JoshNeal123 · 11-11-2007, 07:27 AM

dope dope... both had nice flow and multies .... sick lyrics, good quality .... im feelin this shit fam... 9/10

scool · 11-11-2007, 10:46 AM

fucc what all these audio sexhun spitters say.. Ima give real feedback lol, none of that yes-man hype shit thats going on inn this thread

ur vocals are toooo looouuud, (first verse) .... like hookz said before: the vocals have to be like an instrument that blends in perfect with the instruments from the beat... which is certainly not the case here... it needs to be softeerr

second verse is the best verse IMO.. it was aight

Lyrikcha · 11-11-2007, 01:08 PM

real feed...as in unlock the drawer I keep kid gay's balls in to give him a chance to gain confidence back from gettin owned by everyone on here....smh uppin

scool · 11-11-2007, 02:43 PM

haha aight man

this track is fucking 10/10 shit is dope as fuck!! love the way u stayed on concept and ur voice sounds dope as fuck fam.. u killed this for real!!! keep it up u go do big things!!!!!

11-04-2007, 01:29 AM	#1
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	Lyrikcha & Marv- Sweet Dreams Lyrikcha & Marv- Sweet Dreams not a diss...so mando stfu and enjoy it...as well as the rest... __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-04-2007, 01:50 AM	#2
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	figured i'd drop in and shit 10/10 ya'll did ya'll thing i hope ya'll still got that project for da next mixtape __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

11-04-2007, 09:44 AM	#3
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	UPPIn................................. __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-04-2007, 10:10 AM	#4
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	oh and thx for the feed Ripzz __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-04-2007, 12:03 PM	#5
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	i fuckz wit diz track fam. definitely sumthin to lay back and listen to. keep doin ya shit my niggaz. 9/10. holla. 1. __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

11-04-2007, 12:12 PM	#6
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Aw Hell Lyrik I Was Def Gon Use This Beat As A Project...Fuck It Still Will Beat Is Sick As Hell... Lyrik-Flow Was Good, Lyrics Is Cool...Stuck On Concept..Quality Is Nice Marv-Flow Was Iigh...Nice Lyrics..Concept Was Good..And Quality On Point Def A Track To Jus CHill With...8/10 __________________

11-04-2007, 12:28 PM	#7
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	thx fam...didnt know u was tryin to use that beat...but i kinda do now caz the beat and sample was hot and who wouldnt...anyways thx for the 8/10 even tho i know u ment 9/10... muhahaha __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-04-2007, 12:51 PM	#8
Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga INT.~Rhymers~Council Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Council Board Room Posts: 2,678 Repped: 0 Repped 36 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	LYRIK dis wut im talkin bout...writin song format trakz u had a hot verse...keep at shit up...Marv real hot verse too..i expekt u to have dat song writin format u already on da right path stay up yal

11-04-2007, 01:59 PM	#9
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Yea Thx For feed On this Joitn Dont 4get 2 chek da otha Joint Holla Uppin

11-05-2007, 05:21 PM	#10
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Uppin 4 more feed

11-06-2007, 11:10 PM	#11
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	lyrik-....very nice hook and good job at staying on topic marv-nice verse marv...that parrarel(sp?) parking line was nice very dope shit fella's....i'ma have to holla for a collab for my tape.... (lyrik...i'll have that verse tomorrow morning....)

11-08-2007, 08:00 PM	#12
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	UPpin.................................. __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-10-2007, 02:19 PM	#13
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	Uppin..................................... __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-10-2007, 02:28 PM	#14
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,902 Repped: 411 Repped 1,298 Times in 405 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	^^^Aye Lyric go peep out that "whats wrong wwith the world" and "fuck the south" tracks

11-10-2007, 08:34 PM	#15
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	Uppin........................ __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-11-2007, 07:27 AM	#16
JoshNeal123 Jay Daniels Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,190 Repped: 86 Repped 492 Times in 101 Posts Neg Reps: 17 Neg Repped at 87 Times in 44 Posts	dope dope... both had nice flow and multies .... sick lyrics, good quality .... im feelin this shit fam... 9/10

11-11-2007, 10:46 AM	#17
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	fucc what all these audio sexhun spitters say.. Ima give real feedback lol, none of that yes-man hype shit thats going on inn this thread ur vocals are toooo looouuud, (first verse) .... like hookz said before: the vocals have to be like an instrument that blends in perfect with the instruments from the beat... which is certainly not the case here... it needs to be softeerr second verse is the best verse IMO.. it was aight

11-11-2007, 01:08 PM	#18
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,374 Repped: 11 Repped 793 Times in 298 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	real feed...as in unlock the drawer I keep kid gay's balls in to give him a chance to gain confidence back from gettin owned by everyone on here....smh uppin __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

11-11-2007, 02:43 PM	#19
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	haha aight man this track is fucking 10/10 shit is dope as fuck!! love the way u stayed on concept and ur voice sounds dope as fuck fam.. u killed this for real!!! keep it up u go do big things!!!!!

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