MONEY IN THE BANK

A song i wrote extremely quick. I call these practice tracks just to see how fast i can write it and record it, but this one came out extremely good. Its called Dont Ever Rush. Give me feedback. Tell me what it iz. Instrumental - Apologize...if im mistaken about the instrumental correct me. but enjoy.


This Is Me I never Mean TO boast Or Brag/
I love u sorry that i never told you back/
I try so hard not to shatter dreams/
i lie so much just to get away from things/
my life at one time was a coke and smile/
now i leave others down with a broken smile/
life isnt perfect you know cuz i told you now/
you look at me you would think that im a spoiled child/
and got everything that you wish you had/
im the type you would envy and be pissed at/
you go to school while i worry bout gettin the cash
i though my life would never ever move this fast/
now i went through everything and i wanna restart/
cuz all i see is my hand and everything behind dark/
and if i did i wouldnt even know where i would start/
should i prevent a divorce or get a lady that is smart/ haha
i loook at you and i dont even think of the bad/
but when im not near i know im gettin you mad/
to tell the truth i dont even know why im rappin this for/
you said you got a place one with a basketball court/
just for me what makes you think i want all that/
i just want you but something is holdin me back/
cuz i dont really wanna grow up quick and thats a fact/
i know im 17 but other girls are all on my sack!/
they callin me sayin John i need you now/
but i dont really know if i can go and please u now
im talkin to a girl that i like alot/
i know were not together but we tend to fight alot/
i know what i want and what i really need/
thats the mic and i dont even know if i can even breath/
any more spit to spit out this little speech/
so i take the pen out and world i leave/
yeessssssssssssssssssss up to outer space/
to a place where im alone and my powers great/
a place where food isnt a Hour wait/
and a place where we can do things our way/
but thats just my imagination/
so i blink now reality im facing/
i set my goals i dont really want to be the average joe/
i wanna be a man they respect and give a hand when poor/
my standards are high the tops a must/
so i get the cookin n cleanin off the pots and dust/
my rap skills are in shape they will never rust/
im what u call greatness so dont ever rush!/