Mar-Velous- My Reflection *New Album*

Mar-Velous · 10-16-2007, 07:03 PM

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                                Tracklisting

    1.Mar-Velous-Intro_(Music)
    2.Mar-Velous-How_It_Go_(Produced_By_Raezr)
    3.Mar-Velous-Mutha_Fucka_(Ft_Skipp)
    4.Mar-Velous-They_Shootin_(Ft_Lyrikcha_Produced_By_ST)
    5.Mar-Velous-Drug_(Produced_By_ST)
    6.Mar-Velous-Til_The_Day_I_Die
    7.Mar-Velous-Tired_Of_It
    8.Mar-Velous-Right_Girl
    9.Mar-Velous-Ride_With_You_(Ft_Poynt_Blank)
    10.Mar-Velous-Remember
    11.Mar-Velous-Represented_Hard_(Ft_And_Produced_By_Cez)
    12.Mar-Velous-You_Know_Who_It_Is_(Ft_And_Produced_Raezr)
    13.Mar-Velous-Hip_Hop_On_My_Side_(Produced_By_DisKreet)
    14.Mar-Velous-That_Marvelous_Song
    15.Mar-Velous-Cali_Boi_(Produced_By_ST)
    16.Mar-Velous-Who_Am_I_(Ft_Lyrikcha_And_Lotus)
    17.Mar-Velous-Outro_(My_Reflection)



    Release Notes
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    My 1st Album All New Productions No Mixtape Material Chea
    Had Have Da Release Day On My Birthday So Check This Out
    And Hit Me Up Wit Sum feed Back Holla!!!!!!!! :gunsmilie:

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 10-16-2007, 07:09 PM

im listenin...but uh...on that track "How It Go"..the way u said "go" didnt come out right..err, lol, that was...um, just didnt sound right

Tom Chambers · 10-16-2007, 07:16 PM

i'll listen tonight famo.....

Raezr Productions · 10-16-2007, 07:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by C. Sense AKA L.J.

im listenin...but uh...on that track "How It Go"..the way u said "go" didnt come out right..err, lol, that was...um, just didnt sound right

i told u there was sumthin weird about it marv lol..

imma peep dis

Raezr Productions · 10-16-2007, 08:20 PM

1)

2) How It Go- Good Track....Flow fell off once in a while, but it didnt really kill tha track, like LJ said, how u said "go" wasnt rite...damn, da producer of da shit is really ill

3) Mutha Fucka- Like The beat, hook is alrite, nothin too catchy tho...u did pretty good on this shit marv, but Skipp really murked it

4) They Shootin'-This track is pretty old, ive heard it before, heres ma feed from when i posted it before:

"beat was koo
nice hook, like it a lot
Marv, ur verses is crazy hot, like it
Lyrik, u had a really good verse too"

5) Drug- Liked The Beat, Kool Concept, dont like tha hook too much tho. Flow is good througout

6) Til The Day I Day- Really like tha beat, hook seemed a lil off beat, i can tell that if it was on beat more, it woulda been really hot. verses were good tho

7) Tired Of It- Really kool hook...beat is different but really dope...verses were kool

8) Right Girl- Not feelin tha beat at all...like always, the verses are really good, Dont like the hook tho

9) Ride With You- 1st off...ive always loved ANSANE beats, so im already feelin tha track...the verses are crazy "ill keep u frosted up" haha.......fuckin love the hook, sounds like Poynt Blank dis dat shit, real hot....

10) Remember- DOnt like tha beat at all....wuts wit all the songs about women bein in the middle of the tape lol, o well.

11) Represented Hard- Heard it before....heres tha feed that i left before:

"da first dude sound a lil weird, like he tryin too hard to make his voice sound like that, flow was on tho, and lyrics

Ur flow was on and off a lil, but thats the only part of ur game that u need to improve on...fix ur flow and u straight

Real Nice Beat, Feelin Dat Too"

12) You Know Who It Is- Hook is kool, Love The beat

, ya verses were good...not gonna rate ma self

13) Hip Hop On My Side- Shit Sound like Price is right lol....i like tha hook, like tha way it sounds like a lil kid is doin it...quick flow is really hot

14) That Marvelous Song- Good beat, nice hook...good verses...typical good song haha

15) Cali Boi- Not feelin tha beat too well....like one of the otha songs, it sounds like the hook is a lil bit off beat, fix that and it would be hot...good verses as usual

16) Who Am I- Like the beat...Slow flow is really kool....DOPE HOOK!!!.....Typical Lyrik verse, good....Lotus, one of tha better shits ive heard from you

Good Tape Overall, Ya Flow was ya biggest issue...fix that and u good

Mar-Velous · 10-16-2007, 08:25 PM

Thx 4 takin ya Tyme 2 Listen and Dropp dat Feed Raezr i Appreciate It fam Waitin On ya Tape Now
Uppin 4 Sum More feed

Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga · 10-16-2007, 08:29 PM

Album bangin ma dude...as i tol u MArv jus werk on ya hookz den u really goin b on a nex level

SaF HeaT · 10-16-2007, 08:57 PM

propz im likin dis shit if up load dem so i can download dem ill bump dis in tha whip and shit i got my mixtape comin out oct 31st ya'll look out for dat.........H.e.a.T: Halloween Russerection

Mar-Velous · 10-16-2007, 09:02 PM

np Man Ill Get at Ya wit da Link 2nite or 2maro Fam thx 4 Da Feed and skipp i cya Fam thx 4 Feed Uppin 4 sum more Feed

J-Deezy · 10-16-2007, 09:07 PM

Yo i gotta agree wit Raez on diz whole album. but yea dat Go thang... it do sound wierd a lil fam lol. but yea... shouldve had me on a feature. u already know what i do wit trackz fam.

YUNG STIXX · 10-16-2007, 09:54 PM

oh shit a new marv albulm leaked?? imma peep this out and leave feed when im done my nigga aiight...and you shouldve had the kid stixx on this, i got quality now lol

abcdefghijklmnop · 10-16-2007, 11:15 PM

only have time to peep a couple tracks, but i liked what I heard. Good for a first album, get at me man we can work something out you using my music for ya next one..

Lyrikcha · 10-17-2007, 12:48 AM

yo im a burn it and listen to it at work tomorrow and give u feed...

Mar-Velous · 10-17-2007, 02:26 AM

Deezy- Chea Man we Gotta Collab real Soon

Yung Stixx-Chea Man we Gona Collab Too Just hit M eup

J Oliveira SHS Ima Hit ya Up man and well get sumthin Laid out I be Likin ya Beats Fa Real

Lyrik-yea Man Make sure U leave dat Feed lol

Thx 4 Feed on this Yall Uppin for sum More

.............

S to the T · 10-17-2007, 01:35 PM

yo marv, tha album is hooooot, especially songs, 4, 5, 15 LOL

Mar-Velous · 10-17-2007, 01:41 PM

ahha Thx 4 feed ST and we Ready 2 Get workin On da Album wit Lyrikcha Man so Lets Get It

Uppin

mickilla · 10-17-2007, 02:55 PM

yeah marv i like it, ima leave a bit more detail very soon.

we should work with each other very soon, got a track finished that we never released.

throw me on the you and lyric album.

hit me up.

Mar-Velous · 10-19-2007, 02:46 AM

Yea Man ill hit ya up 4 averse on our album once we get da right song

Uppin this Shit Peeps Holla!!!!!!

Viktor Vaughn · 10-19-2007, 09:30 AM

looks good,downloadin, feedback after i listen to it all

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 10-19-2007, 12:18 PM

sorry marv., i had a hook for that drug song...thats tha one bout tha female right ?

got so caught up workin..havent had time for music fam

next album/mixtape...get at me cuz

Mar-Velous · 10-19-2007, 12:31 PM

Naw Jae I switched da Song Its Coo Tho Fam we Still Gotta Get dat laid Out we Stilla Gotta Collab

Uppin 4 sum feed Back

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-19-2007, 04:17 PM

any chance of a soundclick ?

Raezr Productions · 10-19-2007, 04:44 PM

go to tha bottom of his post

Mar-Velous · 10-20-2007, 04:16 PM

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rebel INS {CF} · 10-20-2007, 07:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raezr Productions

go to tha bottom of his post

it was sendspace whenever i got here

ill check this tomoro

10-16-2007, 08:57 PM	#8
SaF HeaT HeaT IIRipZzII Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: P-noCc(kiLLa Qu33nZ)nYc Posts: 1,488 Repped: 139 Repped 208 Times in 78 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	propz im likin dis shit if up load dem so i can download dem ill bump dis in tha whip and shit i got my mixtape comin out oct 31st ya'll look out for dat.........H.e.a.T: Halloween Russerection __________________ Took a minute off got lost had to find da kid//Tryna Catch up u can call me da Condament//Hook game changed Shined a lil had to polish it//Grade A Raps Like I really was a honors kid//Neva was a honest kid//I lied all the time what da problem is//Skim thru solutions u can call me a scholar kid -HeaT

10-16-2007, 09:07 PM	#10
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Yo i gotta agree wit Raez on diz whole album. but yea dat Go thang... it do sound wierd a lil fam lol. but yea... shouldve had me on a feature. u already know what i do wit trackz fam. __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

10-16-2007, 11:15 PM	#12
abcdefghijklmnop Dusty B, Producer Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 487 Repped: 26 Repped 80 Times in 35 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	only have time to peep a couple tracks, but i liked what I heard. Good for a first album, get at me man we can work something out you using my music for ya next one.. __________________

10-17-2007, 12:48 AM	#13
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,372 Repped: 11 Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	yo im a burn it and listen to it at work tomorrow and give u feed... __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

10-17-2007, 02:55 PM	#17
mickilla 2 Face Records Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: The Booth (audio only) Posts: 1,505 Repped: 15 Repped 24 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah marv i like it, ima leave a bit more detail very soon. we should work with each other very soon, got a track finished that we never released. throw me on the you and lyric album. hit me up. __________________ Deadly Sins Tape - Coming Soon! soundclick.com/cdubz

10-16-2007, 07:09 PM	#2
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	im listenin...but uh...on that track "How It Go"..the way u said "go" didnt come out right..err, lol, that was...um, just didnt sound right

10-16-2007, 07:16 PM	#3
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	i'll listen tonight famo.....

10-16-2007, 08:20 PM	#5
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	1) 2) How It Go- Good Track....Flow fell off once in a while, but it didnt really kill tha track, like LJ said, how u said "go" wasnt rite...damn, da producer of da shit is really ill 3) Mutha Fucka- Like The beat, hook is alrite, nothin too catchy tho...u did pretty good on this shit marv, but Skipp really murked it 4) They Shootin'-This track is pretty old, ive heard it before, heres ma feed from when i posted it before: "beat was koo nice hook, like it a lot Marv, ur verses is crazy hot, like it Lyrik, u had a really good verse too" 5) Drug- Liked The Beat, Kool Concept, dont like tha hook too much tho. Flow is good througout 6) Til The Day I Day- Really like tha beat, hook seemed a lil off beat, i can tell that if it was on beat more, it woulda been really hot. verses were good tho 7) Tired Of It- Really kool hook...beat is different but really dope...verses were kool 8) Right Girl- Not feelin tha beat at all...like always, the verses are really good, Dont like the hook tho 9) Ride With You- 1st off...ive always loved ANSANE beats, so im already feelin tha track...the verses are crazy "ill keep u frosted up" haha.......fuckin love the hook, sounds like Poynt Blank dis dat shit, real hot.... 10) Remember- DOnt like tha beat at all....wuts wit all the songs about women bein in the middle of the tape lol, o well. 11) Represented Hard- Heard it before....heres tha feed that i left before: "da first dude sound a lil weird, like he tryin too hard to make his voice sound like that, flow was on tho, and lyrics Ur flow was on and off a lil, but thats the only part of ur game that u need to improve on...fix ur flow and u straight Real Nice Beat, Feelin Dat Too" 12) You Know Who It Is- Hook is kool, Love The beat , ya verses were good...not gonna rate ma self 13) Hip Hop On My Side- Shit Sound like Price is right lol....i like tha hook, like tha way it sounds like a lil kid is doin it...quick flow is really hot 14) That Marvelous Song- Good beat, nice hook...good verses...typical good song haha 15) Cali Boi- Not feelin tha beat too well....like one of the otha songs, it sounds like the hook is a lil bit off beat, fix that and it would be hot...good verses as usual 16) Who Am I- Like the beat...Slow flow is really kool....DOPE HOOK!!!.....Typical Lyrik verse, good....Lotus, one of tha better shits ive heard from you Good Tape Overall, Ya Flow was ya biggest issue...fix that and u good

10-16-2007, 08:25 PM	#6
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Thx 4 takin ya Tyme 2 Listen and Dropp dat Feed Raezr i Appreciate It fam Waitin On ya Tape Now Uppin 4 Sum More feed

10-16-2007, 08:29 PM	#7
Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga INT.~Rhymers~Council Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Council Board Room Posts: 2,678 Repped: 0 Repped 36 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Album bangin ma dude...as i tol u MArv jus werk on ya hookz den u really goin b on a nex level

10-16-2007, 09:02 PM	#9
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	np Man Ill Get at Ya wit da Link 2nite or 2maro Fam thx 4 Da Feed and skipp i cya Fam thx 4 Feed Uppin 4 sum more Feed

10-16-2007, 09:54 PM	#11
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,900 Repped: 411 Repped 1,295 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	oh shit a new marv albulm leaked?? imma peep this out and leave feed when im done my nigga aiight...and you shouldve had the kid stixx on this, i got quality now lol

10-17-2007, 02:26 AM	#14
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Deezy- Chea Man we Gotta Collab real Soon Yung Stixx-Chea Man we Gona Collab Too Just hit M eup J Oliveira SHS Ima Hit ya Up man and well get sumthin Laid out I be Likin ya Beats Fa Real Lyrik-yea Man Make sure U leave dat Feed lol Thx 4 Feed on this Yall Uppin for sum More .............

10-17-2007, 01:35 PM	#15
S to the T Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Slovenia/Europe Posts: 588 Repped: 38 Repped 92 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo marv, tha album is hooooot, especially songs, 4, 5, 15 LOL

10-17-2007, 01:41 PM	#16
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	ahha Thx 4 feed ST and we Ready 2 Get workin On da Album wit Lyrikcha Man so Lets Get It Uppin

10-19-2007, 04:17 PM	#22
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 645 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	any chance of a soundclick ? __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

10-19-2007, 02:46 AM	#18
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Yea Man ill hit ya up 4 averse on our album once we get da right song Uppin this Shit Peeps Holla!!!!!!

10-19-2007, 09:30 AM	#19
Viktor Vaughn Krimson Militant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Sydney City Biotch Posts: 3,274 Repped: 940 Repped 44 Times in 28 Posts Blog Entries: 3 Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	looks good,downloadin, feedback after i listen to it all

10-19-2007, 12:18 PM	#20
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 5,579 Repped: 644 Repped 835 Times in 415 Posts Neg Reps: 108 Neg Repped at 125 Times in 89 Posts	sorry marv., i had a hook for that drug song...thats tha one bout tha female right ? got so caught up workin..havent had time for music fam next album/mixtape...get at me cuz __________________ {-LONG TIME COMIN'-}..COMIN SOON..

10-19-2007, 12:31 PM	#21
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Naw Jae I switched da Song Its Coo Tho Fam we Still Gotta Get dat laid Out we Stilla Gotta Collab Uppin 4 sum feed Back

10-19-2007, 04:44 PM	#23
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	go to tha bottom of his post

10-20-2007, 04:16 PM	#24
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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