1st SINGLE- Smoke-Ft. Raezr,Kay Oh,Hookz,LaJIT

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 03:43 PM

Hook-Kay Oh
1st- Smoke
2nd- Raezr - added production to his own verse

3rd- Kay Oh
4th- Hookz
5th- LaJIT

Production By Me Of Course

props to raezr for mixing the verses

rep for feed here

by the way be on the lookout for the remix of this

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 03:47 PM

*Doesnt See Any Props To For Mixing The Verses*

Fuck U Fag....But Nice Beat

*Looks Again and Doesnt See Anything About the Raezr adding production to the Beat*

Fuck U Fag

overall this is a dope track, good features

Em_Young · 08-15-2007, 03:54 PM

Wow, guess i didnt make the cut. Alright here is how it goes.

Hook is the classic dirty south repeating vocals...need some fix...well need alot of fix.
Verse first is ok had good delivery and good flow. Second verse is fire, Raezr kills it, plus a very good quality (tho i noticed punch ins....hate punch ins), on third verse we hear part of the hook being in the verse....not good, but its aight, delivery is ok, rhymes could be a bit better tho. Hookz epitomizes the Texas style on it, kinda reminds of Scarface flow. LaJIT keeps the same tune with a sing-songy flow. Pretty well done.

Generally the whole song sounds like being on some UGK record which is a good thing. Topic was ok. The only real problem is the quality difference of each person on the song.

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 03:54 PM

^hahahaha @ Raezr
fuck u too man

re-read the post
u must be blind

uppin

props for the feed both of yall, em_young u gonna be on the remix seein as i was late getting ur verse

Smoke1Life · 08-15-2007, 03:59 PM

yeah im droppin a different verse for the Remix.

YALL COP THE ALBUM WHEN IT ARRIVES ALSO!!!!!!

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 04:13 PM

I Feel betta now Fab

@ Em Young....lol u rite bout da punch ins, i usually dont do that...hmmm, o well

yung primo · 08-15-2007, 04:14 PM

fabuless wut up fam

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 04:24 PM

^^whaddup man, ur verse gonna be on the remix as well

uppin for feed!!!

J-Deezy · 08-15-2007, 04:36 PM

Question... if diz iz ur 1st single, why u got so many ppl featured on it? Nonethaless, i'll get into tha feed while u answer tha question

1st: Verse waz nice. EQ it a bit better and it'll sound alot betta. Soundz kinda supressed... just a lil suppresed not too much. 8.5/10

2nd: Da modify to tha beat dont sound all dat good to be quite honest wit u. Lyricz>Ur modification if u want me to be on sum real shit and no dickrydin shit like deez message board lamez be on nowadayz. Other den dat, verse hard. 8/10

3rd: One long pause too many fam. I waznt really feelin dat shit bout ya verse but ya verse waz on point fam. 8/10

4th: At 1st when he came on... he sounded like Papoose i aint even gon front. 1 more verse 2 go but i think diz iz tha best verse on diz track so far. Real rap. 9/10

5th: Flow fell off already in tha beginnin but itz aight, u hopped right back on. Shouldve started out loud in tha beginnin too. Verse waz bangin 2. Aint touch Hookz but it waz hard. 8/10

A lil advice Smoke... neva let a feature outshine u on ur own track 1st and foremost if itz supposed to be ur single. And for ur 1st single, u wanna show u can hold ur own instead of havin a handful of featurez on it. Otha den dat, tha track rode out nice. I'll probably be on tha remix. Probably. 8.9/10

YUNG STIXX · 08-15-2007, 04:41 PM

This Shit Was Cool But Yall Shouldve Just Waited For My Verse

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 04:42 PM

^propz mayn...i wanted to do somethin to it, and that was all i could do that sounded halfway decent on tha beat, so i left it

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 04:43 PM

^^ u said youd have it to me but yesterday^^lol (@ STIXX)
but yo still get one done if u want cause the remix is gonna be pretty big

yung primo · 08-15-2007, 04:44 PM

my verse was off topic anyways

C Gilbert · 08-15-2007, 05:16 PM

Pretty Dope Track Overall Im Agreein With J Deezy On The Feed

Damn Idk How Yall Got Hookz On This But Its Tight, He Got That Papoose Sound

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 05:17 PM

Me & Hookz have worked together a couple times

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 05:29 PM

yeah it wasnt hard getting hookz on this, i just holla'd at him and asked him to drop a verse..he did it ASAP,

uppin for feed!!

Phantastik · 08-15-2007, 06:34 PM

its a pretty sick track.. Hookz and LaJIT stood out as the best verses in the song.. not surprising.. but you need to get smoke to record his vocals wit betta sound quality, and it would be betta if u cut the time of the hook in half, good job tho kay oh. nice beat my yung apprentince aka fabuless ur improvin

Smoke1Life · 08-15-2007, 06:36 PM

Yo Thankx For The Advice J-Deezy .

The Next Single Should Be All Me and im tellin you its gon be fire .

Rebel INS {CF} · 08-15-2007, 06:45 PM

is this the great smoke1 i hear so much about ? oh, well THIS will be interesting ...

Rebel INS {CF} · 08-15-2007, 06:56 PM

christ that hook is incredibly annoying and i hate the beat

Hookz owned the whole track ... like completly, every asepct, flow, quality, lyrics (although Smoke wasnt far off him lyrically)

i was disappointed with Smoke, quiet a lot, i had the impression u were ment to be completly amazing ...

gunitworld50 · 08-15-2007, 06:57 PM

This is nice...So I'm the remix right?

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 06:58 PM

hhmm^^^^ props for the feed
yes@gworld50
UPPIN

J-Deezy · 08-15-2007, 06:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Smoke1Life

Yo Thankx For The Advice J-Deezy .

The Next Single Should Be All Me and im tellin you its gon be fire .

no doubt famz. track still bangin doe. Watch out for tha jackin fo beatz seriez im puttin 2getha. niggaz want on, holla. 1.

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 07:00 PM

Holla @ Me Deezy, ill hop on it

Joe E ButtaGunz · 08-15-2007, 08:30 PM

Whatz been up yall?

I haven't been on here much....I had to get my shit together on a personal level. But Fab hit me up & I was honored to do the track, cause to be honest I didn't think I was still heard or talked about on here. So many new hot artists come out you have to be on point all the time.

But as for the track.

This was a cool listen. I really had no idea that all these people was going to be on it. I knew of a feature or so, cause I heard it was a single...not a One Blood Remix 2. LOL

Before I get into verses the quality of the track is border line garbage. Just being real.

I had a hard time undertsanding what people was saying & it did sound compressed & muffled. (I was wondering why Fab didn't want any accapellas from me..made me wonder) But if this is a single & plans to be on the radio...just on quality purposes alone...it won't make it. Its a good listen just to be listening to. But not to blow up off of. I would "SERIOUSLY" suggest having everybody supply accapellas & remix it. I will give you mine if you need it. Or better yet.....Take everybody off the song smoke & do the whole thing yourself. Its a nice beat & you by yourself can probably do a street buzz with it.

For The Verses:

1st: You need to speak more clearly, & take more time writing your verse (if you write). Its good to rewrite a couple of times to ensure your best verse. Besides that it was on point: 7/10

2nd: Razer you improved ALOT since I've been on here..gain alittle more control of your style & you got a unique & original flow: 8/10

3rd: This verse didn't do anything for me. I didn't believe what you was saying, because you sounded like you didn't believe yourself. And since the song is about leaving a mark in the game...you have to Cut deep to ensure that the mark is left...you know? The chours could of been much better as well: 6.5/10

4th: I can't and won't comment on my verse as far as if it was good or rate it. I've always been told since Papoose came out that I sound like him. But I've always rapped like that. I purposely rap how I talk so people can't ever say I'm trying to sound like anybody. I sound like me, cause thats how I talk. EVEN THOUGH that is a HONOR to be compared to him in anyway. Because I do feel he is a BEAST!: NO RATING!

5th: To me....this verse was all over the place in the wrong ways. He had NICE lyrics. But the Delivery & Flow had me ready to turn the song off. I never got into the outrageous insane scream & yell rap. This only works for people like DMX & MOP: 6/10

Song As A Whole Needs Alot Of Work!

P.S. Smoke do the song yourself....TRUST ME!

Good Job Everybody

***Also I got a track from Razer that Im putting the finishing touches on 2nite & I think its gonna be BIG as far as radio play goes. I'll post it on here tonight***

Glad to see everybodies still doing things.

08-15-2007, 03:43 PM	#1
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	1st SINGLE- Smoke-Ft. Raezr,Kay Oh,Hookz,LaJIT 1st SINGLE- Smoke-Ft. Raezr,Kay Oh,Hookz,LaJIT Hook-Kay Oh 1st- Smoke 2nd- Raezr - added production to his own verse 3rd- Kay Oh 4th- Hookz 5th- LaJIT Production By Me Of Course props to raezr for mixing the verses rep for feed here by the way be on the lookout for the remix of this __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 03:54 PM	#4
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^hahahaha @ Raezr fuck u too man re-read the post u must be blind uppin props for the feed both of yall, em_young u gonna be on the remix seein as i was late getting ur verse __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 03:59 PM	#5
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	yeah im droppin a different verse for the Remix. YALL COP THE ALBUM WHEN IT ARRIVES ALSO!!!!!! __________________

08-15-2007, 04:14 PM	#7
yung primo wooda Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: california Posts: 846 Repped: 75 Repped 209 Times in 92 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	fabuless wut up fam __________________ All I Ask Is That You Treat Me With Respect// And I Dont Want To Be Greeted Less You, You Greet Me With A Check - Yung Primo

08-15-2007, 04:24 PM	#8
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^whaddup man, ur verse gonna be on the remix as well uppin for feed!!! __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 03:47 PM	#2
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Doesnt See Any Props To For Mixing The Verses Fuck U Fag....But Nice Beat Looks Again and Doesnt See Anything About the Raezr adding production to the Beat Fuck U Fag overall this is a dope track, good features

08-15-2007, 03:54 PM	#3
Em_Young Syndicate Soldier Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 3,228 Repped: 946 Repped 154 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 29 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	Wow, guess i didnt make the cut. Alright here is how it goes. Hook is the classic dirty south repeating vocals...need some fix...well need alot of fix. Verse first is ok had good delivery and good flow. Second verse is fire, Raezr kills it, plus a very good quality (tho i noticed punch ins....hate punch ins), on third verse we hear part of the hook being in the verse....not good, but its aight, delivery is ok, rhymes could be a bit better tho. Hookz epitomizes the Texas style on it, kinda reminds of Scarface flow. LaJIT keeps the same tune with a sing-songy flow. Pretty well done. Generally the whole song sounds like being on some UGK record which is a good thing. Topic was ok. The only real problem is the quality difference of each person on the song.

08-15-2007, 04:13 PM	#6
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Feel betta now Fab @ Em Young....lol u rite bout da punch ins, i usually dont do that...hmmm, o well

08-15-2007, 04:36 PM	#9
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,073 Repped: 385 Repped 830 Times in 182 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Question... if diz iz ur 1st single, why u got so many ppl featured on it? Nonethaless, i'll get into tha feed while u answer tha question 1st: Verse waz nice. EQ it a bit better and it'll sound alot betta. Soundz kinda supressed... just a lil suppresed not too much. 8.5/10 2nd: Da modify to tha beat dont sound all dat good to be quite honest wit u. Lyricz>Ur modification if u want me to be on sum real shit and no dickrydin shit like deez message board lamez be on nowadayz. Other den dat, verse hard. 8/10 3rd: One long pause too many fam. I waznt really feelin dat shit bout ya verse but ya verse waz on point fam. 8/10 4th: At 1st when he came on... he sounded like Papoose i aint even gon front. 1 more verse 2 go but i think diz iz tha best verse on diz track so far. Real rap. 9/10 5th: Flow fell off already in tha beginnin but itz aight, u hopped right back on. Shouldve started out loud in tha beginnin too. Verse waz bangin 2. Aint touch Hookz but it waz hard. 8/10 A lil advice Smoke... neva let a feature outshine u on ur own track 1st and foremost if itz supposed to be ur single. And for ur 1st single, u wanna show u can hold ur own instead of havin a handful of featurez on it. Otha den dat, tha track rode out nice. I'll probably be on tha remix. Probably. 8.9/10 __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 2/17.

08-15-2007, 04:41 PM	#10
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 3,900 Repped: 411 Repped 1,292 Times in 404 Posts Neg Reps: 63 Neg Repped at 129 Times in 86 Posts	This Shit Was Cool But Yall Shouldve Just Waited For My Verse

08-15-2007, 04:42 PM	#11
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^propz mayn...i wanted to do somethin to it, and that was all i could do that sounded halfway decent on tha beat, so i left it

08-15-2007, 04:43 PM	#12
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ u said youd have it to me but yesterday^^lol (@ STIXX) but yo still get one done if u want cause the remix is gonna be pretty big __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 04:44 PM	#13
yung primo wooda Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: california Posts: 846 Repped: 75 Repped 209 Times in 92 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	my verse was off topic anyways __________________ All I Ask Is That You Treat Me With Respect// And I Dont Want To Be Greeted Less You, You Greet Me With A Check - Yung Primo

08-15-2007, 05:16 PM	#14
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Pretty Dope Track Overall Im Agreein With J Deezy On The Feed Damn Idk How Yall Got Hookz On This But Its Tight, He Got That Papoose Sound __________________

08-15-2007, 05:17 PM	#15
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Me & Hookz have worked together a couple times

08-15-2007, 05:29 PM	#16
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah it wasnt hard getting hookz on this, i just holla'd at him and asked him to drop a verse..he did it ASAP, uppin for feed!! __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 06:34 PM	#17
Phantastik Beat Specialist Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Oregon Posts: 1,099 Repped: 529 Repped 96 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its a pretty sick track.. Hookz and LaJIT stood out as the best verses in the song.. not surprising.. but you need to get smoke to record his vocals wit betta sound quality, and it would be betta if u cut the time of the hook in half, good job tho kay oh. nice beat my yung apprentince aka fabuless ur improvin __________________ Need HEAT Beats? get at me: Myspace.com/tastik Soundclick.com/PhantastikProductions

08-15-2007, 06:36 PM	#18
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,438 Repped: 154 Repped 122 Times in 60 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Yo Thankx For The Advice J-Deezy . The Next Single Should Be All Me and im tellin you its gon be fire . __________________

08-15-2007, 06:45 PM	#19
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	is this the great smoke1 i hear so much about ? oh, well THIS will be interesting ... __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

08-15-2007, 06:56 PM	#20
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 11,453 Repped: 151 Repped 644 Times in 301 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 77 Times in 69 Posts	christ that hook is incredibly annoying and i hate the beat Hookz owned the whole track ... like completly, every asepct, flow, quality, lyrics (although Smoke wasnt far off him lyrically) i was disappointed with Smoke, quiet a lot, i had the impression u were ment to be completly amazing ... __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

08-15-2007, 06:57 PM	#21
gunitworld50 Brainstorm Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: IN Posts: 2,722 Repped: 959 Repped 677 Times in 173 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 2 Posts	This is nice...So I'm the remix right?

08-15-2007, 06:58 PM	#22
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,285 Repped: 2,380 Repped 204 Times in 59 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hhmm^^^^ props for the feed yes@gworld50 UPPIN __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 07:00 PM	#24
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Holla @ Me Deezy, ill hop on it

08-15-2007, 08:30 PM	#25
Joe E ButtaGunz THE SON OF HIP HOP! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: St. Louis, Missouri Posts: 365 Repped: 84 Repped 44 Times in 22 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whatz been up yall? I haven't been on here much....I had to get my shit together on a personal level. But Fab hit me up & I was honored to do the track, cause to be honest I didn't think I was still heard or talked about on here. So many new hot artists come out you have to be on point all the time. But as for the track. This was a cool listen. I really had no idea that all these people was going to be on it. I knew of a feature or so, cause I heard it was a single...not a One Blood Remix 2. LOL Before I get into verses the quality of the track is border line garbage. Just being real. I had a hard time undertsanding what people was saying & it did sound compressed & muffled. (I was wondering why Fab didn't want any accapellas from me..made me wonder) But if this is a single & plans to be on the radio...just on quality purposes alone...it won't make it. Its a good listen just to be listening to. But not to blow up off of. I would "SERIOUSLY" suggest having everybody supply accapellas & remix it. I will give you mine if you need it. Or better yet.....Take everybody off the song smoke & do the whole thing yourself. Its a nice beat & you by yourself can probably do a street buzz with it. For The Verses: 1st: You need to speak more clearly, & take more time writing your verse (if you write). Its good to rewrite a couple of times to ensure your best verse. Besides that it was on point: 7/10 2nd: Razer you improved ALOT since I've been on here..gain alittle more control of your style & you got a unique & original flow: 8/10 3rd: This verse didn't do anything for me. I didn't believe what you was saying, because you sounded like you didn't believe yourself. And since the song is about leaving a mark in the game...you have to Cut deep to ensure that the mark is left...you know? The chours could of been much better as well: 6.5/10 4th: I can't and won't comment on my verse as far as if it was good or rate it. I've always been told since Papoose came out that I sound like him. But I've always rapped like that. I purposely rap how I talk so people can't ever say I'm trying to sound like anybody. I sound like me, cause thats how I talk. EVEN THOUGH that is a HONOR to be compared to him in anyway. Because I do feel he is a BEAST!: NO RATING! 5th: To me....this verse was all over the place in the wrong ways. He had NICE lyrics. But the Delivery & Flow had me ready to turn the song off. I never got into the outrageous insane scream & yell rap. This only works for people like DMX & MOP: 6/10 Song As A Whole Needs Alot Of Work! P.S. Smoke do the song yourself....TRUST ME! Good Job Everybody *Also I got a track from Razer that Im putting the finishing touches on 2nite & I think its gonna be BIG as far as radio play goes. I'll post it on here tonight* Glad to see everybodies still doing things.

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