Marvelous ft Cez -Represented Hard

Mar-Velous · 08-04-2007, 04:04 AM

Chea This Shit is Off My Upcomin Album Its Produced By Cez Too so Yea Holla at da Track its More Like a Freestyle Set Up No Hook But Chea Holla wit Sum feed Back

and Chek Out da Poster 4 Da Album

NavyBlue · 08-04-2007, 10:35 AM

dude says "coz i stay with birds like noahs ark" right?

he does realise that noah only took animals on the ark that couldnt fly or swim....so that punchline is total trash and wrong Lawl

pwnt

oh and your punchline....."i run these streets like a participator in marathons" or whatever....is biting what i did on a freestyle on here
my line was "i run these streets like a marathon competitor" wow so a bitten punchline and a punchline that makes no sense

smfh

Raezr Productions · 08-04-2007, 12:29 PM

i dont even kno who u are....and nobody prolly does, so nobody knos about dat line. and if it makes no sense, why did u use it?

anyways, da first dude sound a lil weird, like he tryin too hard to make his voice sound like that, flow was on tho, and lyrics

Ur flow was on and off a lil, but thats the only part of ur game that u need to improve on...fix ur flow and u straight

Real Nice Beat, Feelin Dat Too

C Gilbert · 08-04-2007, 01:01 PM

Beat Is Tight

1st Dude Sounds Like He ForciN How He Sounds Not FeeliN That.. But The Flow Is Nice Good Lyrics
Marv-Good Lyrics, I Woulda Said More Hits Than Cal Ripken Though, Flow Is Alright, Its On And Off..Just Work On That Fam.

NavyBlue · 08-04-2007, 04:13 PM

im thugsy so everybody fucking know me...and i didnt use the noahs ark line i used the marathon line in a freestyle and an audio

Raezr Productions · 08-04-2007, 04:32 PM

hmmm neva seen u post an audio

08-04-2007, 04:04 AM	#1
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Marvelous ft Cez -Represented Hard Marvelous ft Cez -Represented Hard Chea This Shit is Off My Upcomin Album Its Produced By Cez Too so Yea Holla at da Track its More Like a Freestyle Set Up No Hook But Chea Holla wit Sum feed Back and Chek Out da Poster 4 Da Album __________________ Thoughts Turn To Words And Words Turn To Rhythm I First Learned To Listen Now Its My Turn To Gettem

08-04-2007, 01:01 PM	#4
C Gilbert †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 1,214 Repped: 69 Repped 57 Times in 37 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Beat Is Tight 1st Dude Sounds Like He ForciN How He Sounds Not FeeliN That.. But The Flow Is Nice Good Lyrics Marv-Good Lyrics, I Woulda Said More Hits Than Cal Ripken Though, Flow Is Alright, Its On And Off..Just Work On That Fam. __________________

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08-04-2007, 10:35 AM	#2
NavyBlue Banned Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,180 Repped: 0 Repped 37 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dude says "coz i stay with birds like noahs ark" right? he does realise that noah only took animals on the ark that couldnt fly or swim....so that punchline is total trash and wrong Lawl pwnt oh and your punchline....."i run these streets like a participator in marathons" or whatever....is biting what i did on a freestyle on here my line was "i run these streets like a marathon competitor" wow so a bitten punchline and a punchline that makes no sense smfh

08-04-2007, 12:29 PM	#3
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i dont even kno who u are....and nobody prolly does, so nobody knos about dat line. and if it makes no sense, why did u use it? anyways, da first dude sound a lil weird, like he tryin too hard to make his voice sound like that, flow was on tho, and lyrics Ur flow was on and off a lil, but thats the only part of ur game that u need to improve on...fix ur flow and u straight Real Nice Beat, Feelin Dat Too

08-04-2007, 04:13 PM	#5
NavyBlue Banned Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,180 Repped: 0 Repped 37 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	im thugsy so everybody fucking know me...and i didnt use the noahs ark line i used the marathon line in a freestyle and an audio

08-04-2007, 04:32 PM	#6
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hmmm neva seen u post an audio