Check ma new shit out

Houstatlantavegas · 06-14-2007, 11:11 AM

Track "Serious Business"

gimme feed nukkenz

-LATIN- · 06-14-2007, 02:36 PM

LMAO Who ever said that I sound like you should get slapped..
I would quit rap if I sounded like you kid!!
Nah but fa real
You need more emotion
I can't feel none of ur punches
I stopped after the first 30 seconds..
You probobly need better quality.. Real Talk 1

Raezr Productions · 06-14-2007, 03:25 PM

theres a lil sumthin that makes u two sound a like, i cant point it out tho....but u do

anyways....emotion, emotion, emotion

u need it

flow was pretty good

hook sucked ass, honestly

not a very good track, but keep workin

06-14-2007, 11:11 AM	#1
Houstatlantavegas Veteran Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: . Posts: 10,641 Repped: 1,261 Repped 699 Times in 157 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Check ma new shit out Check ma new shit out Track "Serious Business" gimme feed nukkenz

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06-14-2007, 02:36 PM	#2
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	LMAO Who ever said that I sound like you should get slapped.. I would quit rap if I sounded like you kid!! Nah but fa real You need more emotion I can't feel none of ur punches I stopped after the first 30 seconds.. You probobly need better quality.. Real Talk 1

06-14-2007, 03:25 PM	#3
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	theres a lil sumthin that makes u two sound a like, i cant point it out tho....but u do anyways....emotion, emotion, emotion u need it flow was pretty good hook sucked ass, honestly not a very good track, but keep workin