The Worst {Spit 4 Rank Again}

LaWN NAiL · 04-22-2007, 08:15 PM

Checka Check it Out!!

J~Souljah · 04-22-2007, 08:22 PM

Ok now i finally understand your flow. Your metaphors were vicious. Your vocab was also nice as hell. Only thing i can say iz that you need to perfect your emotion. You're gettin betta tho. Keep dis shit up. O yea, nice choice of beat. Vocalz were good. Adlibz were good unless da "Uh" came wit da beat. But yea.....hmmmm......i'll say realll realll realll high middleweight...

C. Sense AKA L.J. · 04-22-2007, 09:36 PM

it was str8...um...ya flow was kinda nice....unique rhyme scheme....i didnt like the beat...emotion was betta then that last track....i guess middleweight...idk

the quality wasnt good and alot of times i didnt hear what you said

Tom Chambers · 04-22-2007, 11:20 PM

..........................................we need something in between middle weight and heavyweight..........

i like my rating system better

i gotta holla @ the ref............

B Dope · 04-22-2007, 11:41 PM

This was nice...not heavy weight though....U had some nice lines, a played one too, the ghost writers ghost writer, Fab used that before.......u close to heavy weight though

LaWN NAiL · 04-22-2007, 11:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by P. Sagacity

..........................................we need something in between middle weight and heavyweight..........

i like my rating system better

i gotta holla @ the ref............

call da shit "Hyphyweight"..lol

LaWN NAiL · 04-22-2007, 11:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baller

This was nice...not heavy weight though....U had some nice lines, a played one too, the ghost writers ghost writer, Fab used that before.......u close to heavy weight though

so the fuck wat if he used blah blah..nigga i better den dat bitch ass chip'd tooth bastard...wat else stupid yu fin say huh? I TOOK DA SONG FROM JEDI MIND TRICKS!?....stfu

B Dope · 04-23-2007, 12:33 AM

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Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

so the fuck wat if he used blah blah..nigga i better den dat bitch ass chip'd tooth bastard...wat else stupid yu fin say huh? I TOOK DA SONG FROM JEDI MIND TRICKS!?....stfu

ight u took it from jedi mind tricks, i didn't say shit about that...and no u aint better than that chipped tooth bastard, u mad cause people are rankin u middle weight and because u took a fab line.....so what else stupid do you have to say?

LaWN NAiL · 04-23-2007, 12:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baller

ight u took it from jedi mind tricks, i didn't say shit about that...and no u aint better than that chipped tooth bastard, u mad cause people are rankin u middle weight and because u took a fab line.....so what else stupid do you have to say?

lol how would i take a fab line...wen i do even listen to da prick.......now yu tryin' to start sumptin? yu want me to end your lil e-career? yu wanna die vato?

B Dope · 04-23-2007, 12:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

lol how would i take a fab line...wen i do even listen to da prick.......now yu tryin' to start sumptin? yu want me to end your lil e-career? yu wanna die vato?

No u tryin to starrt shit....i left u feed of what i thought of this audio, then u say i'm sayin things that are dumb when i clearly didn't...I'm cool, are u?

LaWN NAiL · 04-23-2007, 12:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baller

No u tryin to starrt shit....i left u feed of what i thought of this audio, then u say i'm sayin things that are dumb when i clearly didn't...I'm cool, are u?

stfu b4 i shove a weener in your mouth...kosher to be exact

B Dope · 04-23-2007, 12:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

stfu b4 i shove a weener in your mouth...kosher to be exact

well i'm pretty hungy for some(nohomo)

~Menace~ · 04-23-2007, 01:03 AM

u should turn tha beat down a lil bit...pretty hot lyrics from wat i heard...ur emotion sounded better 2 me, so w/e u did on this track i suggest u continue/elevate...decent flow

LaWN NAiL · 04-23-2007, 01:50 AM

^^ Thanks..and i yea i will just uppin' da vocals

♪Spoken Word♪ · 04-23-2007, 10:08 PM

Yo... On Tha Real... This Shit Is Soooo Banananaz Compared Ta Ya Old Audios... Tha Lyrical Content Is Very Very Nice... Me Wanna Make Sexy Time =]... But Nah... Punches & Multies Is Crazy... And Yo... Ya Fuckin Flow Is Fuckin Bananaz... On Tha Real... HeavyWieght

Tom Chambers · 04-23-2007, 11:11 PM

^shut up you fucking cock sucker............................

...........................

~Menace~ · 04-24-2007, 12:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

^^ Thanks..and i yea i will just uppin' da vocals

NEGRO STFU!!!!

LaWN NAiL · 04-24-2007, 12:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~Menace~

NEGRO STFU!!!!

BOY LOOKA HERRE!!

-LATIN- · 04-24-2007, 08:30 PM

Beat was Nyce
Need better quality but decent
lyrically it was okay!!
Should ove made it longer
Shit was tight tho..
Yo peep my track son 1hun..

LaWN NAiL · 04-29-2007, 04:30 PM

thanks...uppin

04-22-2007, 08:15 PM	#1
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	The Worst {Spit 4 Rank Again} The Worst {Spit 4 Rank Again} Checka Check it Out!!

04-22-2007, 09:36 PM	#3
C. Sense AKA L.J. Still a Buc Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tampa Bay Posts: 4,476 Repped: 371 Repped 403 Times in 174 Posts Neg Reps: 14 Neg Repped at 24 Times in 18 Posts	it was str8...um...ya flow was kinda nice....unique rhyme scheme....i didnt like the beat...emotion was betta then that last track....i guess middleweight...idk the quality wasnt good and alot of times i didnt hear what you said __________________ 20100426

04-24-2007, 08:30 PM	#19
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Beat was Nyce Need better quality but decent lyrically it was okay!! Should ove made it longer Shit was tight tho.. Yo peep my track son 1hun.. __________________ NEW MYSPACE NEW GRAPHICS NEW PICTURES NEW MUSIC LATIN RELOADED (COMING SOON) CUT FROM A DIFFERENT CLOTH COMING AUG 26TH

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04-22-2007, 08:22 PM	#2
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	Ok now i finally understand your flow. Your metaphors were vicious. Your vocab was also nice as hell. Only thing i can say iz that you need to perfect your emotion. You're gettin betta tho. Keep dis shit up. O yea, nice choice of beat. Vocalz were good. Adlibz were good unless da "Uh" came wit da beat. But yea.....hmmmm......i'll say realll realll realll high middleweight...

04-22-2007, 11:20 PM	#4
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	..........................................we need something in between middle weight and heavyweight.......... i like my rating system better i gotta holla @ the ref............

04-22-2007, 11:41 PM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This was nice...not heavy weight though....U had some nice lines, a played one too, the ghost writers ghost writer, Fab used that before.......u close to heavy weight though

04-23-2007, 01:03 AM	#13
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,753 Repped: 116 Repped 38 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	u should turn tha beat down a lil bit...pretty hot lyrics from wat i heard...ur emotion sounded better 2 me, so w/e u did on this track i suggest u continue/elevate...decent flow

04-23-2007, 01:50 AM	#14
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	^^ Thanks..and i yea i will just uppin' da vocals

04-23-2007, 10:08 PM	#15
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yo... On Tha Real... This Shit Is Soooo Banananaz Compared Ta Ya Old Audios... Tha Lyrical Content Is Very Very Nice... Me Wanna Make Sexy Time =]... But Nah... Punches & Multies Is Crazy... And Yo... Ya Fuckin Flow Is Fuckin Bananaz... On Tha Real... HeavyWieght

04-23-2007, 11:11 PM	#16
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^shut up you fucking cock sucker............................ ...........................

04-29-2007, 04:30 PM	#20
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	thanks...uppin