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04-15-2007, 05:10 AM
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Lonnel
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Phinali- Verbal Hypnosis {Spit 4 Rank I Guess}
Yo I'm demonik..I'll Get Da Toast N I Pop It.. Stop It.. Yull "Never Spit Nothin Close To Fire" Even If Yu Took Ya Tongue In Search Of "Flows In A Socket".. Do Or Die..Have Yu Commit Suicide Cuz I'll "Make Yu Lose Your Life" Like Holdin' Ya Own Soul In Ya Jeans Wit A Fuckin' Hole In Ya Pocket.. And Bein' Cold Ain't Da Topic.. Cuz Im "Strippin' Down" "Common Sense" While "Swingin' Poles" Through Ya "Logic".. Have Yu Rockin Slugs Wit A Knife In Ya Clothes.. Tellin' Rappers Not To Beef Just To Beef.. Cuz Im' "Hittin' Niggaz Wit Reverse Psychology" Like Martin Luther King Boxin' Gloves With A Mind Of Its Own.. Best Believe Anything I Say Will Be Used Against Yu.. Yu Wanna Bear Arms..I'll Limp Two.. With Lyrical 22's Cuz I got 1 Million Ways To Rap Taste Da Gat..So Gothic I Rape Da Dark And Make Da Bitch Fade To Black.. I Was Raised To Blast..Lace Da Past Wit A Lavish Skill Covering Ma Grill Leavin' These Jim Carrey Niggaz Turnin' Green Wen Dey Face Da Mask I Keep Ma Soul On Lock.. N If Yu Look In Da Chamber Your Sight'll Get Fired By A Flamming Gat.. Niggas Riskin' Ligaments Against Me Cuz i'll Have Yu "Goin' Out on A Limp" Like A Dismembered Firefighter Saving Cats My Rhymes Thrown Outta Slow Torrents Ya Flow Is So Horrid I Have To Ignore It.. "Blow A Fracture" Of Ya Dome N Show Yu "Blown Outta Proportion" I See Yu Tryin' To Cast A Rhyme.. Ya Too Slow Puto.. Ima Givin' Ya Faster Time.. N Ya "Gun Ain't Da Key" To "Open Dis Master Mind".. I'll "Spit A Virus" To "Get On Ya Nerves" And "Collapse Ya Spine".. Listen Ma Lines Will Tear Through Any Pairs Den Tie Ya Fates Cuz Ya Lifes Been Caught.. Ya "Mind Can't Bear Da Flair" So Not Knowing Me Is "Hibernating Your Thoughts".. Yu Crackin' Jokes But Nobody Hearin' Yu Or Feelin' Yu.. So Who Yu Foolin' Da Dead? Yu Makin' Me Resort "Violence With Humorous Antics".. By "Buckin' Off Ya Head" While "I'm Pulling Ya Leg".. |
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04-15-2007, 03:03 PM
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Lonnel
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04-15-2007, 03:14 PM
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Go play somewhere im busy
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punches were dope as hell
Cuz I'll "Make Yu Lose Your Life" Like Holdin' Ya Own Soul In Ya Jeans Wit A Fuckin' Hole In Ya Pocket.. And Bein' Cold Ain't Da Topic.. Cuz Im "Strippin' Down" "Common Sense" While "Swingin' Poles" Through Ya "Logic".. Cuz Im' "Hittin' Niggaz Wit Reverse Psychology" Like Martin Luther King Boxin' Gloves those my favorite punches flow was straight so were the multies AUDIO HEAVYWEIGHT
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04-15-2007, 03:17 PM
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Lonnel
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thanks g..uppin
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04-15-2007, 03:30 PM
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Lonnel- Virgin
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hot track...punchlines r nice, sick concepts...but tha only thing that kinda seemed weird was ur lines were so damn long it didnt make the punch as strong as it shouldve been...tha beat was decent, not sumthin i would use...good shit overall tho babes
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04-15-2007, 03:32 PM
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Banned
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Shits Hot... I Already Told You On Aim How I Feel Bout Tharhyme Scheme But Yea... Ya Flows Fuckin Bananaz And Ya Punches Is Crazy...
Audio Heavyweight... Go Check My Spit For Rank Audio |
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04-15-2007, 03:34 PM
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Iigh Good Track...Beat Was Nice
Flow-On Point Nothing Forced Not Much Emotion Jus Relaxed Flow..Not Bad Lyrics Were Nice..Sum Dope Punches In There MiddleWeight/HeavyWeight..Not Sure Which |
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04-15-2007, 03:36 PM
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Lonnel
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MenacePp (1:34:28 PM): heavyweight
MenacePp (1:34:34 PM): dont fuckin tell me wat 2 do LSPiNNa09 (1:34:33 PM): me sry faggot thanks nigg3rs... |
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04-15-2007, 04:47 PM
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Lonnel
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uppin'..........
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04-15-2007, 10:02 PM
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Lonnel
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uppin'.........
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04-15-2007, 10:17 PM
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
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ok.......................
flow.....is still a bit shakey...but your still improving... emotion....this was never a strong point for you....but on this song....it gave it a dark and grimy feel lyrical-...you already know what it is.................you are prob the most lyrical audio MC...... overall......add some emotion and work on shortening your lines.......... High-inter/low vet.........IMO........lyrics are a big part......but the other half you are lacking in....... |
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04-15-2007, 10:20 PM
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Veteran
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ok.........i'll say middle weight......ya flow needz work.....and your emotion iznt there.........your lyricz mean nuthin if u cant get your flow and emotion on point.......das why i say middle weight
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04-15-2007, 10:37 PM
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Lonnel
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meh...i like ma emotion..niggas like it too {no homo}..ima keep doin me at da end..i like work on da line structure tho..
..and J~Souljah...why do yu bother coming to ma threads..yu kno im not fond of your ignorant ass.......i can't even take yu serious most of the time cuz yu gas yourself so much everything yu say makes yu look like an air-head.. your feed to me is like tony yayo givin' advice to llyod banks..ill accept it but damn.. |
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04-15-2007, 11:45 PM
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Lonnel
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uppin.........
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04-16-2007, 07:18 PM
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Lonnel
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uppin'.........
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04-16-2007, 07:24 PM
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Dope.....
Emotion Was Eh... flow was on it... lyrics were CRACK
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04-16-2007, 09:35 PM
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Lonnel
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^^ Thanks......uppin...
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04-16-2007, 10:36 PM
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Lonnel
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uppin' on yu bitches
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04-16-2007, 11:13 PM
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Still a Buc
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good lyrics....i dont like the rhyme scheme tho...maybe thats just me
good punches, emotion is lackin good track
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04-17-2007, 08:55 PM
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Lonnel
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thanks.....uppin'
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04-17-2007, 09:59 PM
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middleweight def........
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04-17-2007, 10:42 PM
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Lonnel
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04-17-2007, 11:21 PM
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G.E.D......
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^ lmao.........funny
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04-18-2007, 02:58 AM
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You Improve Alot From Ya Last Tracks ... Ya Emotion ... I Think It's Straight As It Is ... People Have Different Styles ... Punches Were Creative ... So I Was Feelin' Lyrics All Together ... Flow & Quality Could Of Been Better Tho ... You Seem Like U Improvin Pretty Quick So I Think U Should Be Able To Get Ery Thing On Lock Soon Enough ... So Wit That Said ...rank ... I Will Slide U Off Wit Heavyweight ...
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Lonnel
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