Jay Duece

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jbcomfort

smooth out the beats and clean it up.......it's aight though...you'll get betta i'm sure and you did it fast so idk what to think next....


lata playa
here's some rep

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-Grizzly-

good track my nigga tha beat transition could be a lot smoother tho but yur barz was on point....u still killin em wit tha flow

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Lyrikcha

it was aight...wasnt feelin the talkin like 50 at the end...

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Jay Duece

aigh propS man...i apreeciate u aint hate

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Mr.Smith

I like dis shit. Do you got anymore tracks?

Jay Duece

aigh props yo

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Jay Duece

yes mah dude ill pm u

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Thug N Harmony

Propz.....ill Shit... I Likez Yo Style Son * No Homo*

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Jay Duece

props man, whee u been?

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!{THR!LLZ}!

Good Shit ... U Came Off At Sum Points But U Brought It Back ... I Like That ... This Shit Was To Long 4 Me To Re Listen To It & Give U Full Feed ... Well Stay Doin' U ... 3 2 Da Mutha Fuckin ~1~

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B Dope

First off nice beat selection....every beat u chose between the 5 or 6 u rode real well(no homo). Nice flow, it was choppy in some places but we can talk about that later. U stepped up ya vocab a bit but it still can get better, naw mean. Most ya punches were played, especially the chiken pox one...U can still work on ya multies too. U had a lot of good inner rhymes but multies are better..

Overal: 7.6/10

Stevie C.

I still think that e-beef is retarded... but this is straight... definitely better than way back when... when you was dissing that Playboy cat over that 'They Ain't Ready' beat... punchlines were decent... I wasn't feeling the rhymes when you were rapping over the 'In Da Club' and Fight Night beats... but overall... it was still tight... a little repetition... but that's alright... 8/10... keep doing your thing, man...



- Stevie C.

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C. Sense AKA L.J.

lol lgay...so original

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20100426

Jay Duece

lol at u hating, man its okay..ppl feeling it...

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C. Sense AKA L.J.

no personals...u gon run up on me...and put a gun to my dead moms?

and move out from my dads house? when i got my own apartment?

u were very repetitive....u said the word "fake" like 15 times...talked about guns too much....flow fucked up everytime u switched beats...u said my name so many times...u gon chop me in pieces? crack cookin in the kitchen? u said your name a lot too...Lyrikcha was right...all that gun talk lol

from a diss perspective my shit >>>>

and I am cocky lol...no personals man...nice flow tho...u took 3 days for that shit?

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20100426

Jay Duece

dogz, i know i hurd u say ur moms dead, think i give a fuck? its jsut a diss, and ery body sayin its me>>u.....u aigh, but honestly dog stop frotin




AND IF U LISTEN TO THE BEGIING OF THE DIS, I WASENT EVEN GONNA TALK ABOUT GUNZ, BUT U NIGGAZ TALKED SHIT SO IM LIKE, AIGHT IL LTALK ABOUT GUNZ TO PISS YA OFF


but yo props on da honest review...WTF 3 DAYS, my nigga, it was my b day, and i was workin out on mah new wight set, and i was outta town for a while, i jsut started today yo

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C. Sense AKA L.J.

stop frontin?


what did u say about me besides blowin my noodles out...and sayin im cocky..which i agree wit

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20100426

Jay Duece

yall niggaz said i would, so i did, i coulda came harder but why???????


jsut a net diss.......






all ui said is, il lblow ya noodlez out,or i would, i said u whack and cocky......and etc...but yall said i was gonna, so i did....lol

i wasent gonna tho...

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C. Sense AKA L.J.

lyrikcha said that...u jus tryna flip around like u wasnt gonna rap about guns

disses consist of personals and punchlines

the gun talk is for any rap song...say it aint

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20100426

Jay Duece

wtf,i aint switchin shit round, i recorded the beiging before i wrote the diss,i done songs without gunz, i like gun talk..but on da real, leave now, i said now spam..

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"mE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>" - Jay Boy Deuce

C. Sense AKA L.J.

u got like 80 post in my thread...thanks for makin it 3 pages

repped

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20100426

Jay Duece

aight im deleting this spam....

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Jay Duece

bump nigga

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THEY'L GO STRAIGHT TO YA GUT LIKE "ROSCOES CHICCEN AND WAFLES"
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C Gilbert

Yeah Smooth Out The Transistions For Sure...But Beat Selection Was Tight..You Flowed Pretty Well On Every One..Sum Points Where It Sounded Choppy...Lyrics Where Good...Ya Vocab Stepped Up On This Track..Good Emotion And Energy..
7/10