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Old 04-05-2007, 06:23 PM   #1
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Old 04-06-2007, 01:28 AM   #2
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Old 04-06-2007, 02:48 AM   #3
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i love tha beat...the flow seemed off and on...lol it seemed like u had a speech impediment...i feel like u could put in alot more emotion...im really feeling the lyrics though, i think u really could've done without tha lil gun-talk that u had(it was minimal though), alot of good meta's...
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Old 04-06-2007, 02:50 AM   #4
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i love tha beat...the flow seemed off and on...lol it seemed like u had a speech impediment...i feel like u could put in alot more emotion...im really feeling the lyrics though, i think u really could've done without tha lil gun-talk that u had(it was minimal though), alot of good meta's...
....i have a big tongue....... ;)
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Nice beat.....Flow was off and on like menace said....Nice vocab...was a lil laid back on the beat but it goes with the beat well...Overall nice drop 8/10..........Return the favor this time bitch
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