Lon B- The Phinali

LaWN NAiL · 02-25-2007, 08:55 PM

Consumed By Revenge Vintage Wit a Sinners Pin..
Dip Ma Gat In Vinger And Have u Taste Da Bitter End..
Da Topic Is Dimmin Ya Knowledge Of Winnin
Cuz Dat Shit Can Wait..I'll Stretch Ya Waist
Do Palates With Ur Destiny..N Leave Wit a Twist Of Fate
Ma Flowings Upscale While U Goin To Hell
But I Ain't Comin With Unless Its Big Silcon Tits
And Then i Comin With Ma Kids
Im Gunnin For Ya Lids..Bullets Anxious To Blast..
Be Careful
Cuz My Weapon Of Choice Is Like Crabs In Da Barrel
So Cool..Keep Blastin Da Tool Till i Prove
His Skull Never Helped His Head..N After Im Done
Its Gon Be Like A Funarel Filled Wit Snitches
Cuz U Can Tell He Dead
cryin' n sighin' will leave you copin' wit da gat..
no ones flowin' wit me black..
its like velcrow consoled ma soul to a strap
how im emotionally attached..
And I Became Great Off Tha Mistakes U Make
Subjectin U To Doubt Partons
And Ma Gat's Bangin Da Knowledge From Ya Brains
No Wonder U Out Smarted..
So Juss Allow Ma Rhymes To Travel Up Ya Doomless Peak
One Battle N how U Figga U Devouring niggaz Worth Shit
Like Swallowin Homeless Skeet
U Could Die At Any Rhyme
So Ya Death Shouldn't Be Timed Dude
Remember Dat Bullet In Ya Front
Well Allow Me To Put It Behind You..No Hard Feelings..
I Improve Ma Groove..
Foo U Never Knew What Amend-Meant
Dats Y Wen Ya Eyes Are Set On Da 5th
Ima Bend It Cuz Im Da President Of Ya life
I'll Make Sure U Felt Da Led
N Take Ya Right To Live N Have U Left For Dead
And Im Too Sick For Ya Hate..
You Feuled Up N Stuck Behind
Its Gonna Take A Tow Truck
To Pick Up Ya Pace..
U Never Spittin Dolla Flows So
Da 4 Won't Be Placed To Ya Face
It'll Go Straight To Ya Waist..
Leave You Wit A Funny Walk
Money Talks When Da Toys Pop..
But Theres No Way In Yo Case..
Since I Juss Broke Its Voice Box..
Muthafucka!!

Jay Hussle · 02-25-2007, 09:05 PM

Thats Nice Lon...Keep that up
i like that vinger line and the Top half
its dope yo....

LaWN NAiL · 02-25-2007, 09:19 PM

^^ Thanks Maaaaa Nigga...uppin'

LaWN NAiL · 02-25-2007, 10:38 PM

uppin..........

LaWN NAiL · 02-25-2007, 11:13 PM

uppin'.........

Tom Chambers · 02-26-2007, 12:01 AM

you sound like tupac.....lyrics were good...not nice or sick....but good....flow was different....but good.......your quality is horrible.............i'll holla @ you about it tho........

overall decent......wasn't your best track....but still decent....7/10

LaWN NAiL · 02-26-2007, 01:10 AM

^^ dats u cc?

LaWN NAiL · 02-26-2007, 01:34 AM

uppin...........

Lyrical Coqui · 02-26-2007, 03:24 AM

Lyrics is nice....Beat was Sick....Quality is ass...;.Other than that, Stay up.

calibre · 02-26-2007, 04:51 PM

dope beat...i can tell you are dope in most of the catagories...flow, rhymes, lyrics, delivery...but your mic fucks all that up...but youre lucky...other dont have talent...you just need a better mic

LaWN NAiL · 02-27-2007, 12:05 AM

^^ thanks on dat feed man..

LaWN NAiL · 02-27-2007, 07:34 PM

uppin......

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 02-27-2007, 10:25 PM

I aint enjoyed this track cause the flow and delivery was off lyrics were cool but pointless sounded like a poetic recital more than anything... Get a new mic also cause u sound muffled @ times

LaWN NAiL · 02-27-2007, 10:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by <^>..OhboyJ..<^>'

I aint enjoyed this track cause the flow and delivery was off lyrics were cool but pointless sounded like a poetic recital more than anything... Get a new mic also cause u sound muffled @ times

Rofl.....I Ain't Enjoy Ur Lack Of Leadership in IRC..I Ain't Enjoy Any Of Your Tracks Entirely Because Of Your Horrible Accent..Seriously You Sound Like Shaggy Tryin' To Impersonate Ice-T..

I Ain't Enjoy Your Anything You Type Simply Because Anything From A Ignorant Depressed Faggot Who Can't Even Run His Own Crew W/o Being An Egotistical Prick..

And With That Being Said..

I Ain't Enjoy Your Feed................

LaWN NAiL · 02-27-2007, 11:50 PM

"lyrics were cool but pointless sounded like a poetic recital more than anything"

rofl..hella hatin'

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 02-27-2007, 11:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

"lyrics were cool but pointless sounded like a poetic recital more than anything"

rofl..hella hatin'

I'm Being Real Though You lacked emotion and the flow was constant and by Pointless I mean They Good But if your quality wack its pointless cause not everyone will listen to the track and read the lyrics.... Real Talk no Hate

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 02-28-2007, 12:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

Rofl.....I Ain't Enjoy Ur Lack Of Leadership in IRC..I Ain't Enjoy Any Of Your Tracks Entirely Because Of Your Horrible Accent..Seriously You Sound Like Shaggy Tryin' To Impersonate Ice-T..

I Ain't Enjoy Your Anything You Type Simply Because Anything From A Ignorant Depressed Faggot Who Can't Even Run His Own Crew W/o Being An Egotistical Prick..

And With That Being Said..

I Ain't Enjoy Your Feed................

Thats just sad.... W/E Tho I was Being Real....

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 02-28-2007, 12:01 AM

I mean I would Argue with ya But then again... its pointless if u wont even accept my honest opinion.... 1nE

LaWN NAiL · 02-28-2007, 12:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by <^>..OhboyJ..<^>'

I mean I would Argue with ya But then again... its pointless if u wont even accept my honest opinion.... 1nE

It Ain't Honest if It Isn't Sincere..Which It Wasn't..You Did It To Hate Which You Do On Everyone Who You Negatively Come Across With..

..What's To Argue?..Everything I Said Was Facts..

_|CC|_ · 02-28-2007, 03:26 AM

word

check out my shit too cause HH deleted my other account which deleted my threads

ps dope sig lonnelizzle

LaWN NAiL · 03-01-2007, 12:18 AM

thanks..........uppppin

The Gatfather · 03-01-2007, 09:41 PM

^^I wonder who anonymous is...

LaWN NAiL · 03-05-2007, 01:35 AM

ughppin...

02-25-2007, 08:55 PM	#1
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	Lon B- The Phinali Lon B- The Phinali Consumed By Revenge Vintage Wit a Sinners Pin.. Dip Ma Gat In Vinger And Have u Taste Da Bitter End.. Da Topic Is Dimmin Ya Knowledge Of Winnin Cuz Dat Shit Can Wait..I'll Stretch Ya Waist Do Palates With Ur Destiny..N Leave Wit a Twist Of Fate Ma Flowings Upscale While U Goin To Hell But I Ain't Comin With Unless Its Big Silcon Tits And Then i Comin With Ma Kids Im Gunnin For Ya Lids..Bullets Anxious To Blast.. Be Careful Cuz My Weapon Of Choice Is Like Crabs In Da Barrel So Cool..Keep Blastin Da Tool Till i Prove His Skull Never Helped His Head..N After Im Done Its Gon Be Like A Funarel Filled Wit Snitches Cuz U Can Tell He Dead cryin' n sighin' will leave you copin' wit da gat.. no ones flowin' wit me black.. its like velcrow consoled ma soul to a strap how im emotionally attached.. And I Became Great Off Tha Mistakes U Make Subjectin U To Doubt Partons And Ma Gat's Bangin Da Knowledge From Ya Brains No Wonder U Out Smarted.. So Juss Allow Ma Rhymes To Travel Up Ya Doomless Peak One Battle N how U Figga U Devouring niggaz Worth Shit Like Swallowin Homeless Skeet U Could Die At Any Rhyme So Ya Death Shouldn't Be Timed Dude Remember Dat Bullet In Ya Front Well Allow Me To Put It Behind You..No Hard Feelings.. I Improve Ma Groove.. Foo U Never Knew What Amend-Meant Dats Y Wen Ya Eyes Are Set On Da 5th Ima Bend It Cuz Im Da President Of Ya life I'll Make Sure U Felt Da Led N Take Ya Right To Live N Have U Left For Dead And Im Too Sick For Ya Hate.. You Feuled Up N Stuck Behind Its Gonna Take A Tow Truck To Pick Up Ya Pace.. U Never Spittin Dolla Flows So Da 4 Won't Be Placed To Ya Face It'll Go Straight To Ya Waist.. Leave You Wit A Funny Walk Money Talks When Da Toys Pop.. But Theres No Way In Yo Case.. Since I Juss Broke Its Voice Box.. Muthafucka!!

02-25-2007, 09:05 PM	#2
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thats Nice Lon...Keep that up i like that vinger line and the Top half its dope yo.... __________________ Vakill-Worst Fears Confirmed

02-26-2007, 12:01 AM	#6
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,378 Repped: 134 Repped 509 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 20 Neg Repped at 71 Times in 56 Posts	you sound like tupac.....lyrics were good...not nice or sick....but good....flow was different....but good.......your quality is horrible.............i'll holla @ you about it tho........ overall decent......wasn't your best track....but still decent....7/10 __________________ http://www.datpiff.com/Tom_Chambers_Official_Jae_Rock_Tash_Stack_B-d.m104300.html NEW TAPE!

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

02-25-2007, 09:19 PM	#3
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	^^ Thanks Maaaaa Nigga...uppin'

02-25-2007, 10:38 PM	#4
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	uppin..........

02-25-2007, 11:13 PM	#5
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	uppin'.........

02-26-2007, 01:10 AM	#7
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	^^ dats u cc?

02-26-2007, 01:34 AM	#8
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	uppin...........

02-26-2007, 03:24 AM	#9
Lyrical Coqui Lyrically Sick Rican Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: 254 Texas Posts: 514 Repped: 16 Repped 48 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lyrics is nice....Beat was Sick....Quality is ass...;.Other than that, Stay up.

02-26-2007, 04:51 PM	#10
calibre ... Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 137 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dope beat...i can tell you are dope in most of the catagories...flow, rhymes, lyrics, delivery...but your mic fucks all that up...but youre lucky...other dont have talent...you just need a better mic

02-27-2007, 12:05 AM	#11
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	^^ thanks on dat feed man..

02-27-2007, 07:34 PM	#12
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	uppin......

02-27-2007, 10:25 PM	#13
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	I aint enjoyed this track cause the flow and delivery was off lyrics were cool but pointless sounded like a poetic recital more than anything... Get a new mic also cause u sound muffled @ times

02-27-2007, 11:50 PM	#15
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	"lyrics were cool but pointless sounded like a poetic recital more than anything" rofl..hella hatin'

02-28-2007, 12:01 AM	#18
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	I mean I would Argue with ya But then again... its pointless if u wont even accept my honest opinion.... 1nE

02-28-2007, 03:26 AM	#20
_\|CC\|_ Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 54 Repped: 4 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	word check out my shit too cause HH deleted my other account which deleted my threads ps dope sig lonnelizzle

03-01-2007, 12:18 AM	#21
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	thanks..........uppppin

03-01-2007, 09:41 PM	#22
The Gatfather Banned Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 4,436 Repped: 519 Repped 2,049 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^I wonder who anonymous is...

03-05-2007, 01:35 AM	#23
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	ughppin...