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Default Order: Ratify iLLumanati P.Sagacity Lets Us Know Wats Good. . .We're Expecting Hate From Certain People. . .Also Turn The Volume Up Cause I Needa Get Louder . . . Any Lyrics Questions Just Ask Away |
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shit was coo cuh, 7/10
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shit was actually aiight...All 3 0f u LiL duNs jus Need 2 work oN ya flows a lil bit, stay oN beat, aNd fiX ya voices...theN yall lil Niggas'll be aiight...
-cc- verse was koo, the best outta the 3 flow was koo, best outta the 3 voice, souNds like a ghost moaniNg haviNg sex...fix that that other LiL Nigga verse was aiight flow was weak/shaky voice, u souNd like a Nerdy teacher...fix that... L0tus verse was aiight flow, u was off beat like a muthafucCa voice, u souNded horrible my dude...r0b0tiC ass Nigga...fix that |
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Agitating the Ignorant
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pretty good peeps
criticism cc -pretty solid flow -needs louder voice -needs more confidence in general...which should give it some more energy -pretty nice lyrics cf -strong mic presence -the flow is also good, but the voice is a lil robotic -lyrics were great, personal, unique, clever, nice rime pattern -switch the tempo so its not one tone throughout, end was dope sagacity -strong lyrics from the start, some real clever bars -flow is ok but single toned, voice too robotic, needs work -pretty good energy overall good effort, i actually wanted to listen to it more than once....overall the verses didnt really mesh like a song, seemed more like 3 verses over the same beat...small problems seem same for everyone, and will likely improve with more experience stay up
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
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good looks to every1 tho....
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Agitating the Ignorant
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p.s. you guys should re-do the whole album or like the best 10 songs...seems like a good set of production for a fist mixtape....
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CC- It Was Iite..Decent Lyrics..Sounded like You Were Whispering..
ILL- It Was Iite As Well..Your Voice Was Kinda Boring, And Flow/Lyrics Was Ok But It Definitely Picked Up @ The End, Thought u Were Lotus For a Sec Too.. Lotus- Decent Flow As Usual..Lyrics Was Very Good But I Thought You Could Of Executed Them Better.. Anyway This Was Straight..6.5/10 |
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Yo both of you stepped up Crazy
With this Joint!!! Im loving how you guys flipped the slow Flow AHA Good Shit!!! Good Drop and Lotus Tight Wordplay at the End ~1~
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people are missing my wordplay and one amazing punch![]() nah its all good. . .thanks for the feed latin |
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cc sounded coo, best i heard from you, flow was nice, needs to turn volume up a lil, sounded a lil whispery, nice lyrics.
2nd guy was aiight, pretty nice lyrics, flow was good for the most part, slightly high mic volume imo. lotus, coo lyrics as always, nice flow, your voice is weird a always lol, you need to back off the mic a lil and/or turn the mic volume down.overall it was coo all round, liked the beat alot also. |
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sweet JESUS, we all killed that shit, especially Lotus, his verse was fuckin beastly !
uppin this shit
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and i feel u about the not really seemin like a song, CC wanted to put in the Vinnie hook, i didnt let him that may have cleared things up
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myspace.com/ObeythePen
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Ehhhhh...Sound Absofuckinlutley HORIIIBLE.....CC was The Best....Fell Off At The End Alot....Very
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C.c. I Was Impressed After I Heard Ya Verse ... Cuz U Stepped Dat Shit Up ... I See Potential In You ... Punches Were Good ... Da Fuck Was All Dat Noise At Da Beginning & Ur Whisperin?
Ill ... Ya Voice Was Kinda Funny Buh Then Again All Ur Voices Are =) ... Buh Ya Flow Could Of Been Better ... Lyrics Were Ight Tho ... Lotus ... Punches Were Nice ... Flow Could Have Came Way Better Buh Den Again U Said U Don't Like Slow Beats So U Shouldn't A Really Got On This ... Buh Yuh Lyrics Were Ok ... Quality Was Weird ... Overall ... Just Work On Ya Flow More ... Toss Some Adlibs & Add Sum Emotion In Ya Tracks Next Time 3 2 Da Mutha Fuckin ~1~
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STUD P.H.a.M.O.U.S
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CC - .. U Had a Steady Flow ..
i Liked Some Of ya Lyrics .. But U Gotta Speak Up .. Control ya Voice More .. ill - U Had Nice ass Lyrics .. But ya Voice is Ugh Man .. i Loved ya Lyrics .. U Came Tha Nicest Outta Lyrics Wise .. But U Gotta Get a Better Mic Present .. Lotus - Yeah .. U Was Koo` .. i Didn`t Catch Were U Fell Off .. Everythin` Was Pretty Solid .. |
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cc-good flow...i couldnt even understand wut u were sayin at times,u needa fix ur voice....lyrics was decent but u needa fix dat voice to up ya game
ill-i liked ur lyrics...pretty dope for sum1 who dont text or anythin...flow was iight to lotus-u started off pretty nice den u fell off,flow was kinda off overall-dis track was iight...all 3 needa up der game a lil...n i was impressed wit ill..1 |
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iigh, whoever spit first needs to speak up, it sound like u whisperin n shit, but ya flow was on point......2nd cat I found came nice for his first track, good presence n what not, just work on flow.....I dun know who was last but I just stopped playin the track lmao....it sounded to me like u were just talkin over the beat and the vocals were a little loud....keep at it..1
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propz on the feed, both of u
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Nice track to all of you dudes, i liked it, 3rd verse was a bit dodgy, too loud compared to other verses, but lyrics hard and a good track.
IRC
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propz on the feed C
uppin this shit
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oooooooonce again
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Banned
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props everyone. . .i'll get around to repping sometime . . .
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^ we have to rep the people that feed us ?!?! .......... *quits internet rap*
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Very poor track... Production wise this was sad... Rap Wise very sad... People tellin me they improoving but on the real it dont seem so.... This was Awful... Rebel was cool for ya first drop... CC....Lotus... yall could have came way better... and this should have had a hook it sounded disorganised....
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by rap wise do u mean lyrically. . .cause if so. . .u needa clean your ears?
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