1st Song

J~Souljah · 12-09-2006, 03:27 AM

I did mah 1st song on dis beat

it was pretty wack hahaha

but i thought i would do it again

leave feed

LethalIsILL · 12-09-2006, 10:03 AM

"make ya bust like a wet dream"
"hold more 3's than an ipods"
fav lines

~KILLA~ · 12-09-2006, 03:38 PM

forgot all bout dis beat....

shit hot..nice flow....ur quality alot better than wat it used to be

hoodman · 12-09-2006, 03:52 PM

u need 2 raise ur vocals up.......and also the first and 2nd verse there was nyce the style u spat at....but then u flopped on the third verse u neva put no style or emotion in it

J~Souljah · 12-10-2006, 02:56 PM

thnx....uppin

Raezr Productions · 12-10-2006, 04:08 PM

Not bad, vocals are low, need to be turned up, and heres a hint....record ur verses in parts, dont do it all at once, i can tell when u was runnin outta breath

alrite shit here

J~Souljah · 12-10-2006, 05:34 PM

chea i'ma start doin dat

n i can neva tell if mah vocalz is 2 low or 2 high

o well....i'ma try harder

thnx 4 da feed duke

D-money550 · 12-10-2006, 06:03 PM

It was hot.......

12-09-2006, 03:27 AM	#1
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	1st Song 1st Song I did mah 1st song on dis beat it was pretty wack hahaha but i thought i would do it again leave feed

12-09-2006, 10:03 AM	#2
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,012 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	"make ya bust like a wet dream" "hold more 3's than an ipods" fav lines __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

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12-09-2006, 03:38 PM	#3
~KILLA~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: JerZ----973 niggas Posts: 398 Repped: 0 Repped 10 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	forgot all bout dis beat.... shit hot..nice flow....ur quality alot better than wat it used to be

12-09-2006, 03:52 PM	#4
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	u need 2 raise ur vocals up.......and also the first and 2nd verse there was nyce the style u spat at....but then u flopped on the third verse u neva put no style or emotion in it

12-10-2006, 02:56 PM	#5
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	thnx....uppin

12-10-2006, 04:08 PM	#6
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Not bad, vocals are low, need to be turned up, and heres a hint....record ur verses in parts, dont do it all at once, i can tell when u was runnin outta breath alrite shit here

12-10-2006, 05:34 PM	#7
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	chea i'ma start doin dat n i can neva tell if mah vocalz is 2 low or 2 high o well....i'ma try harder thnx 4 da feed duke

12-10-2006, 06:03 PM	#8
D-money550 Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 972 Repped: 194 Repped 65 Times in 23 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	It was hot.......