New Song!! From Ya Boy FaYme

hoodman · 12-03-2006, 04:37 PM

Sup Ya'll its ya boy FaYme......Well I Got a New Track.....kind of my proper first one knowing how 2 stay on beat......would just really appreciate the feed and what I can improve on.....

holla back too........and also Add me if u got a myspace and leave comments

Peace

Would apprecaite the love

The FaYme aka Respectt

hoodman · 12-04-2006, 10:41 AM

No-one Checkeed Wtf ???

DreamUnit36 · 12-04-2006, 03:28 PM

Yo beat is fire, good choice, how long you been doin dis rap game stuff cause it don't seem like you been 'round long, you need to work on flow, energy, multies, punches. If you new its understandable but don't give up stay on ya grind

hoodman · 12-04-2006, 04:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DreamUnit36

Yo beat is fire, good choice, how long you been doin dis rap game stuff cause it don't seem like you been 'round long, you need to work on flow, energy, multies, punches. If you new its understandable but don't give up stay on ya grind

I've Been Rhymin Lyrcally For About 2 Years.......This Is My First Audio...and yo homie....dunno if u listened 2 it properly lol it did have multies.lol.......what u mean by work on energy & Flow ?? Holla Back

here are the lyrics

U Gon Run with them Dudes and act like a fool
Dont Come back like you cool
Coz...U Know What I'ma do? Smack U with the tool
I Hold tight the nine and grip on the handle
Aim tha duece duece on a side angle
Pop the bitch Just 2 See Her Thighs Dangle
I aint sayin no names...and I aint playin no games
I aint showin U this...and I aint blowin the kiss
Stop Actin fly....coz You Will get this (**slap**)
When I spray Clips They Out Like A Perfume
I was curious........What Did Ya'll Assume?
People say I be frontin when I make threats
I Got The Chrome that'll bake ya chest
You'z Got Some Real In You But U Fake The Rest
We do things my way...I'ma Show U How I Play
Dudes Trippin Like They Seen Me Rushin On the highway
its hard 2 hate say i rhyme like John Jay
Keep Talkin Shit I'ma do it like kan-yey.......(when he had that accident...lol)

Holla Back At Ya Boy

~one~

mickilla · 12-04-2006, 07:06 PM

to be honest was'nt feeling it man, there seemed to bo no emotion, you gotta feel what your spittin.

i think that you should first get a new mic, lyrics fine but you need to get emotionally connected to this shit.

yo check out my new audio called 'i'm silent' and leave some feedback son.

2 face

hoodman · 12-05-2006, 12:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mickilla

to be honest was'nt feeling it man, there seemed to bo no emotion, you gotta feel what your spittin.

i think that you should first get a new mic, lyrics fine but you need to get emotionally connected to this shit.

yo check out my new audio called 'i'm silent' and leave some feedback son.

2 face

cool cool appreciate the feed.......its my first audio lol so you know..

Uppin fo mo feed

dtale253 · 12-06-2006, 04:03 PM

your not on beat fully
no emotion
wtf is with your voice, where are you from?
you got a lot of things to work on
lyrics aint that great either
but stay up
everybody gets better

hoodman · 12-07-2006, 04:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dtale253

your not on beat fully
no emotion
wtf is with your voice, where are you from?
you got a lot of things to work on
lyrics aint that great either
but stay up
everybody gets better

cool appreciate the feed.....Erryone sayin this emotion shytt (but i aint got a clue on how 2 put it lol) some ppl say act loud sound hyper and shiytt
lol what u mean wtf is with my voice:S:S:S......I'm From London

Uppin Fo More Feed

<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' · 12-07-2006, 08:55 AM

Holla @ My Rap academy.....

hoodman · 12-07-2006, 03:44 PM

^^ huh??
Uppin for feed

hoodman · 12-09-2006, 12:42 PM

Uppin for feed

hoodman · 12-10-2006, 11:54 AM

Uppin Ya'll

hoodman · 12-11-2006, 12:44 PM

uppin fo feed

~KILLA~ · 12-11-2006, 05:17 PM

iightz work on ur flow...

i couldnt really hear ur lyrics...but i see u posted dem and they was coo

turn ur vocals up when u done recordin..n ur voice is kinda snorky...so double vocal it a or add some adlibs...

no doubt stay up

dtale253 · 12-11-2006, 07:35 PM

ROFL @ snorky

hoodman · 12-13-2006, 10:14 AM

lol cool I appreciate the feed......and btw what on earth does snorky mean looool???

Uppin for feed

Don K-OZ · 12-13-2006, 10:20 AM

which program did you use for da beat

hoodman · 12-13-2006, 06:17 PM

I didnt make the beat.....and yo gimme some feed mayne lol

Uppin for feed

hoodman · 12-14-2006, 05:45 PM

Uppin.....

YoungGunna · 12-16-2006, 12:10 AM

first thang first

work on your emotion....ur shit just sound borin, ur lyrics alight...and find your flow....ur why of rhyming,

work on your emotion more than anything, cause your lyrics alight, but to get better..work at thous too, and workin on ur flow wouldnet hurt either

so keep doin ya thang cuz, stay up

keep droppin

hoodman · 12-16-2006, 08:03 AM

^^^ cool cool Jae Rock.......how do I find my flow???.........and how do u put the emotion...I'll try put emotion in my next audio tho

mickilla · 12-16-2006, 09:12 AM

just believe in whatyour spitting.

willtheydie4you · 12-16-2006, 10:11 AM

oh god its him again

this isnt ur first audio, i remmeber u dropping stuff MONTHS ago on RA... u kept saying u want to sound like Fab and how do u change ur voice to sound like him

then u rapped over some lil fame song or something :(

hoodman · 12-16-2006, 12:37 PM

^^ lol yeah that was waaaaay back......when I started I barley knew shit bout hiphop and rap I barley knew about audio.........but now I do this is like my proper audio knowing how 2 stay on beat and with my lyrics.........and yeah I used 2 say I wanted 2 soundd like fab and my voice and shit but now I know.........Its all about being original & Unique so u know

hoodman · 12-19-2006, 04:22 AM

Uppin Ya'll.........

12-03-2006, 04:37 PM	#1
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	New Song!! From Ya Boy FaYme New Song!! From Ya Boy FaYme Sup Ya'll its ya boy FaYme......Well I Got a New Track.....kind of my proper first one knowing how 2 stay on beat......would just really appreciate the feed and what I can improve on..... holla back too........and also Add me if u got a myspace and leave comments Peace Would apprecaite the love The FaYme aka Respectt

12-04-2006, 07:06 PM	#5
mickilla 2 Face Records Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: The Booth (audio only) Posts: 1,505 Repped: 15 Repped 24 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	to be honest was'nt feeling it man, there seemed to bo no emotion, you gotta feel what your spittin. i think that you should first get a new mic, lyrics fine but you need to get emotionally connected to this shit. yo check out my new audio called 'i'm silent' and leave some feedback son. 2 face __________________ Deadly Sins Tape - Coming Soon! soundclick.com/cdubz

12-07-2006, 08:55 AM	#9
<^>..OhboyJ..<^>' The Element Of Surprise Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Trinidad Posts: 9,312 Repped: 131 Repped 157 Times in 45 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Holla @ My Rap academy..... __________________

12-16-2006, 12:10 AM	#20
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,079 Repped: 348 Repped 128 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	first thang first work on your emotion....ur shit just sound borin, ur lyrics alight...and find your flow....ur why of rhyming, work on your emotion more than anything, cause your lyrics alight, but to get better..work at thous too, and workin on ur flow wouldnet hurt either so keep doin ya thang cuz, stay up keep droppin __________________

12-16-2006, 09:12 AM	#22
mickilla 2 Face Records Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: The Booth (audio only) Posts: 1,505 Repped: 15 Repped 24 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	just believe in whatyour spitting. __________________ Deadly Sins Tape - Coming Soon! soundclick.com/cdubz

12-04-2006, 10:41 AM	#2
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	No-one Checkeed Wtf ???

12-04-2006, 03:28 PM	#3
DreamUnit36 King of Kontroversy Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: D-Port, IA Posts: 1,203 Repped: 498 Repped 34 Times in 18 Posts Neg Reps: 2 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Yo beat is fire, good choice, how long you been doin dis rap game stuff cause it don't seem like you been 'round long, you need to work on flow, energy, multies, punches. If you new its understandable but don't give up stay on ya grind

12-06-2006, 04:03 PM	#7
dtale253 Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: washington Posts: 4,765 Repped: 35 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	your not on beat fully no emotion wtf is with your voice, where are you from? you got a lot of things to work on lyrics aint that great either but stay up everybody gets better

12-07-2006, 03:44 PM	#10
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ huh?? Uppin for feed

12-09-2006, 12:42 PM	#11
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin for feed

12-10-2006, 11:54 AM	#12
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin Ya'll

12-11-2006, 12:44 PM	#13
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin fo feed

12-11-2006, 05:17 PM	#14
~KILLA~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: JerZ----973 niggas Posts: 398 Repped: 0 Repped 10 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iightz work on ur flow... i couldnt really hear ur lyrics...but i see u posted dem and they was coo turn ur vocals up when u done recordin..n ur voice is kinda snorky...so double vocal it a or add some adlibs... no doubt stay up

12-11-2006, 07:35 PM	#15
dtale253 Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: washington Posts: 4,765 Repped: 35 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ROFL @ snorky

12-13-2006, 10:14 AM	#16
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol cool I appreciate the feed......and btw what on earth does snorky mean looool??? Uppin for feed

12-13-2006, 10:20 AM	#17
Don K-OZ Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 161 Repped: 89 Repped 4 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	which program did you use for da beat

12-13-2006, 06:17 PM	#18
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I didnt make the beat.....and yo gimme some feed mayne lol Uppin for feed

12-14-2006, 05:45 PM	#19
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin.....

12-16-2006, 08:03 AM	#21
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^ cool cool Jae Rock.......how do I find my flow???.........and how do u put the emotion...I'll try put emotion in my next audio tho

12-16-2006, 10:11 AM	#23
willtheydie4you Ghostwrite 4 Ghostwriters Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: The UK Posts: 48 Repped: 3 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	oh god its him again this isnt ur first audio, i remmeber u dropping stuff MONTHS ago on RA... u kept saying u want to sound like Fab and how do u change ur voice to sound like him then u rapped over some lil fame song or something :(

12-16-2006, 12:37 PM	#24
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ lol yeah that was waaaaay back......when I started I barley knew shit bout hiphop and rap I barley knew about audio.........but now I do this is like my proper audio knowing how 2 stay on beat and with my lyrics.........and yeah I used 2 say I wanted 2 soundd like fab and my voice and shit but now I know.........Its all about being original & Unique so u know

12-19-2006, 04:22 AM	#25
hoodman Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: In Paradise Posts: 1,469 Repped: 3 Repped 352 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin Ya'll.........

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