XxCritikalxX

**Lyrical Assasin**

sorry about this,
pffft


Why did you even start this???? U really don’t even know who u facin!
Ill leave you seeing so many stars…
…That You could start your own constellation!!

Your trash, fuck ur verse, u aint even close to me, im far above you,
...so look up^ Dude,
Because your verses are liked by ''NOBODY'' - and posted by one too!!

You can’t win, ill leave u dead on the site cause u aren’t packing text!!
Il leave ya wrecked,
But you ''aren't cocky'' – no thats just your ''preference'' when having sex!

ya names jus an 'adjective' im pass this kid, u catholic? u must be ya 'pastors bitch'!
Ur So wack im laughin.. shit..
u on a pathless trip, ima instigate til u practice iraq tactics n blast yaself to a 'past less myth'!

"no cash" just broke-as-fuck, "battle me never" u wanna stroke-ya-luck?!
u've been smoked-enuff!
this "herb" been "skunked" like "piff", still you wanna gloat-n-bluff!

u kno i clown-fun, but the sounds-tru, when my round-gun comes back and you found-blue!/
body sticky, i pound-glue
when im at you, my stats new, u got knocked out in ROUND 1 so theres no need for ROUND 2!

Smashin ya life, ya ass is all hype,… have caskets for types of all bastards in sight,
Illness u better value ya life,
Grasping a mic, put rashes on dykes,… w/ glass in the side, Im blessed w/ HOLY flow like passion of Christ

For you, ''Ill'' punches are too discrete to find, If I had him eat his brains, Dude still couldn't speak his mind,
Even if u ate a dictionary.. u still wudn be illnessdefined,
He repeats my rhymes so I write short bars so him n babeTruth can compete for lines,

I've wrecked the best, punches leave ya exasperated so ya constantly gotta check ya breath,
U Going Against the Best!!
this kid aint seen direct effects so i attach a compass to ya brain so that you can ''direct ya death''!!

him SPITTEN-WAS-A-WASTE, Ills a DIS-GRACE, cuz ya "hitz aint touchin" like he was KICKIN-IN-HIS-PLACE!,
i "see ya moves" comein at a PACE, cuz ya "punches is to predictable" like ur verse was WRITTEN-ON-YA-FACE!

...iLL...

:::::*DRUM ROLL*::::: :::::*DRUM ROLL*::::: :::::*DRUM ROLL:::::*
{Serial Killa Playing}
[Assasin Hits Illness With His HARDEST Punches.}

[But Illness Doesn't Even Flinch.... Assasin Knows he's Gon Die}

[Illness Takes Da Gloves Off... It's Ova Nigga, Sry for This}

[The Bell Rings, The Battle Continues.N Illness Bout 2 drop a BOMB!}
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Finally.
Da Champ Is Finally
Seated In Da Throne...
Lend me Ya Earz
for a Lil..


Leave him 'Cut Off wit a RAZOR' Like His "Phones-Breakin", I'll Have his Dome-Shakin!
Cuz If "A-Will-Try-This" {Arthirtis} Illness Gon Have Dis Nigga Bones-ACHIN!!*

Nigga I Bust-da-Gun, One Pop I Guarantee Dis-Cunt'll-Run, Comparin Me N Assasin Is Like Breads-2-Crumbs!
U a Legend? Nope U Ain't No Vet-U-Fuck, U winnin Against Me? Pfft Better Press-Ya-Luck, Cuz yall cant tell by his name He loves 2 get his ASS-FUCKED!**
{ASSasIN}

What are you Supposed-To-Push-Me? PLEASE!!! i'll Decompose-This-Rookie!
And I'll "WACK-SIN"(Waxin'), just to "EXPOSE-THIS-PUSSY"!!!!! ***

i'm in, My-Own-Zone, N I Brought The Nine-From-Home, So in my Spines-A-Chrome.
To Recline-Ya-Dome... n "Spray ONE in ya Face" Like "Calvin-Kleins-Cologne!!!!!

Nigga the products in the Kitchen-Bakes, I punch till ya Vision-Shakes…
Assasin ur weak and I “GO THROUGH YA BARS” like “PRISION-BREAKS”!!!

Like "shoot outs in church" "bullets Hittin-Ya-Temple", juss cuz we Crew don't mean u "OFF THE HOOK" like "Fishing-Utensils"!
ANd Nigga U better Know i'm #1, n u can "HOLD on to #2" like u "Grippin-a-Pencil"!!!!!!

Dawg I Floss-Wit-Nines, Homie u Saw-da-Signs, that i'll Cause-Ya-Spine to Flaw-sum-Times
cuz Goin Against Me Is like "Illegal-free-throws" u "CROSSED-THE-LINE"!!!!!!!! WHOA

Nigga i Roll wit heat So u better Not Tempt-Me, Cuz I know da P-90 will Sting-G, Have dis Nigga Scringed n Fling-B!!
Think U can Win Da Tourney? Homie U Havent even beat D! n How Is He Considered "A VET" He almost got K.O'd By Blue Da VINCI!!!
<<CLICK****

^Beat Me?. Dude Get Back-2-Reality, Cuz Da Gat-Will-Give-Fatalites, U-Mad If U think U-Can-Handle-Me.
Nigga I'm Strapped-Wit-Keys, N He Neva Hot DUde Even made my 'Screen FREEZE' N When I Pop off Da Shotty-Will-End-ya-STREAK!!

EXPLANATIONS:
1. His Name Is A ssasin, It Has An A in it N Da Word Play I used Is: If A-will-Try-DIs {Arthirtis} Den it connects to the Bone Achin Punch!

2. Check his Username Assassin In AND Ass WHich If U Think Bout it means assfucked,,

3. ANother Personal namePlay assa SIN And wax SIN.. A 'Wax' Is Usally basically a shave.. and when i wax assa SIN Hes gon be shaved as A PUSSY!

4. The quote on da bottom says he think hes gon WIN... n da Link Has where he ALMOST LOST to blue davinci.....
sAD
And the final bar refers to his quote.. and how I ended his WINNING STREAK!
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**DA CHAMP IS HERE**
EZ

[CC]Ratify[CC]

flow - assasin
punches - illness
personals - illness
multies - illness
wordplay - illness

O/R- IllnessDefined

great battle by both

XxCritikalxX

flow:assasin
creativity:illness(w/ explaining and use of colors)
metas:illness
mutlis:illness!!
punches:assasin
personals:illness(blue-da-vinci thing)
strating:illness

over all:illness(good battle)

Over_Flow

flow:assasin
creativity:illness
metas:assasin
mutlis:illness
punches:assasin
personals:illness
strating:assasin

over all:assasin


omg this took me a fuckin while 2 vote this was 2 good of a battle!!!!!

ReFleXiOn

Lyrical Assassin:

Why did you even start this???? U really don’t even know who u facin!
Ill leave you seeing so many stars…
…That You could start your own constellation!!
^not bad opener, descent punch.

Your trash, fuck ur verse, u aint even close to me, im far above you,
...so look up^ Dude,
Because your verses are liked by ''NOBODY'' - and posted by one too!!
^descent

You can’t win, ill leave u dead on the site cause u aren’t packing text!!
Il leave ya wrecked,
But you ''aren't cocky'' – no thats just your ''preference'' when having sex!
^lol, funny, cudda been worded better though

ya names jus an 'adjective' im pass this kid, u catholic? u must be ya 'pastors bitch'!
Ur So wack im laughin.. shit..
u on a pathless trip, ima instigate til u practice iraq tactics n blast yaself to a 'past less myth'!
^dope

"no cash" just broke-as-fuck, "battle me never" u wanna stroke-ya-luck?!
u've been smoked-enuff!
this "herb" been "skunked" like "piff", still you wanna gloat-n-bluff!
^lol, good stretch right here

u kno i clown-fun, but the sounds-tru, when my round-gun comes back and you found-blue!/
body sticky, i pound-glue
when im at you, my stats new, u got knocked out in ROUND 1 so theres no need for ROUND 2!
^lmao, ouch

Smashin ya life, ya ass is all hype,… have caskets for types of all bastards in sight,
Illness u better value ya life,
Grasping a mic, put rashes on dykes,… w/ glass in the side, Im blessed w/ HOLY flow like passion of Christ
^bangin, dope stretch

For you, ''Ill'' punches are too discrete to find, If I had him eat his brains, Dude still couldn't speak his mind,
Even if u ate a dictionary.. u still wudn be illnessdefined,
He repeats my rhymes so I write short bars so him n babeTruth can compete for lines,
^fuckin' ill

I've wrecked the best, punches leave ya exasperated so ya constantly gotta check ya breath,
U Going Against the Best!!
this kid aint seen direct effects so i attach a compass to ya brain so that you can ''direct ya death''!!
^dope again

him SPITTEN-WAS-A-WASTE, Ills a DIS-GRACE, cuz ya "hitz aint touchin" like he was KICKIN-IN-HIS-PLACE!,
i "see ya moves" comein at a PACE, cuz ya "punches is to predictable" like ur verse was WRITTEN-ON-YA-FACE!
^nice closer

Overall, u started out slow on the first lil' stretch or so there, then from that point on u fuckin' merked and merked, overall 9/10.


Illnessdefined:

Leave him 'Cut Off wit a RAZOR' Like His "Phones-Breakin", I'll Have his Dome-Shakin!
Cuz If "A-Will-Try-This" {Arthirtis} Illness Gon Have Dis Nigga Bones-ACHIN!!*
^first line good, wordplay doesn't work right, good attempt though.

Nigga I Bust-da-Gun, One Pop I Guarantee Dis-Cunt'll-Run, Comparin Me N Assasin Is Like Breads-2-Crumbs!
U a Legend? Nope U Ain't No Vet-U-Fuck, U winnin Against Me? Pfft Better Press-Ya-Luck, Cuz yall cant tell by his name He loves 2 get his ASS-FUCKED!**
{ASSasIN}
^good name play that time "Ass-in" lol, pretty good

What are you Supposed-To-Push-Me? PLEASE!!! i'll Decompose-This-Rookie!
And I'll "WACK-SIN"(Waxin'), just to "EXPOSE-THIS-PUSSY"!!!!! ***
^meh, descent, punch cudda been more effective

i'm in, My-Own-Zone, N I Brought The Nine-From-Home, So in my Spines-A-Chrome.
To Recline-Ya-Dome... n "Spray ONE in ya Face" Like "Calvin-Kleins-Cologne!!!!!
^descent

Nigga the products in the Kitchen-Bakes, I punch till ya Vision-Shakes…
Assasin ur weak and I “GO THROUGH YA BARS” like “PRISION-BREAKS”!!!
^BANG, that's wat i'm talkin' bout, dope ass concept and punch right here.

Like "shoot outs in church" "bullets Hittin-Ya-Temple", juss cuz we Crew don't mean u "OFF THE HOOK" like "Fishing-Utensils"!
ANd Nigga U better Know i'm #1, n u can "HOLD on to #2" like u "Grippin-a-Pencil"!!!!!!
^lol, dope again

Dawg I Floss-Wit-Nines, Homie u Saw-da-Signs, that i'll Cause-Ya-Spine to Flaw-sum-Times
cuz Goin Against Me Is like "Illegal-free-throws" u "CROSSED-THE-LINE"!!!!!!!! WHOA
^haha pretty dope

Nigga i Roll wit heat So u better Not Tempt-Me, Cuz I know da P-90 will Sting-G, Have dis Nigga Scringed n Fling-B!!
Think U can Win Da Tourney? Homie U Havent even beat D! n How Is He Considered "A VET" He almost got K.O'd By Blue Da VINCI!!!
Davinci Vs Assasin <<CLICK****
^ouch, good personal, nice closer.

Overall, much like lyrical assassin u started off not so good then picked up after a bit and came hard with it. however I don't feel u came quite as hard as he did hence.....8.5.

Damn straight battle right here y'all, dope as fuck.

Vote: Lyrical Assassin

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~Young Gunna~

iight ill vote cry babys....no1 better catch any feelings

personals-illness....da ender got him dis cat
punches-assasin.....his punches was better n original
multies-illnessdefined...had alot more n dey were longer
flow-assasin.....was more on point and consistant
wordplay-illnessdefined....he had a couple good ones in der
creativity-tie....both was creative and original

winner-illnessdefined....i think he got dis by a bit...illness edged him out in multies and personals so that gave him my vote........stay up yall...1

InViNcIbLe

mulites: illness... just felt his more
punches: assasin...definitely won this cat, had good original ones
creativity: tie... both were pretty original
personals:illness..dont really know much about either of you but his were more direct
flo: neither really floed that well at all but assasins floed better
wordplay: Illness... cuz assasin really didnt have any


Illness got this, good verses to both though


AhA...

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assassin all cats
xcept Flow

Both was good verses but Assassin obliterated you in all cats but Flow

Overall: Assassin

Youngcity415

Yoo Dis Battle Wus Good
But Illness Got It In All Cats But Assasin Got In It Flow

The Gatfather

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