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Hyphy V.S Menace
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07-02-2007, 02:06 AM
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AY BAY BAY
Accepting my callout? U must be one of those Meth Fiends, I battle to Test Teens On the battlefield watch his ‘Dead Body Get Carried Away’ like ‘Over-Exaggerated Death Scenes’ Waiting 4 me 2 drop first? Probly A Stall, i win wit punches, imagine if u Saw Me in Brawls Fuck coming weak…ima ‘Hand It To Tha Don’ like ‘Ventriloquist’s wit Mafia Dolls’ He literally a Heavyweight, imagine his fat ass plus wet clothes, must be a fat Dude Thing ‘Making porn Threads got dis nigga 1 Touch(click) Away From Excitement’ like showing ‘Horny On A Mood Ring’ * Pre-Write ur shit cuz never I wanna see a Don-Key(donkey), we all know its ass, n now we see who’s Wacker... N tha only time sum1 will be ‘Feelin’ D/Feel Indie’ is if he had Groupies as an Independent Rapper *
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07-02-2007, 02:07 AM
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Check It..
Gosh Im So Sick..Call'em 'Micheal Moore's Belt'..Cuz He 'Buckles Under Pressure' Wen MC's Stop His Flow Bid.. Yu Been 'Layed Out From Boxden's' So Many Times..Can't Enter 'Livin Rooms' Without Feelin' 'Claustrophobic'..!! Who Ace Playin? He Ain't Wat Da 'Wes{t} Craven'..And Niggaz Said Im Ova Skilled.. So It'll Be A 'Sad Sight To See' Once Ma 4{bars} Leave Ya 'Head Over Heels/Hills'..!! Dis Nigga Ugly To Da Funny Bone!!..God Should Have Yu Deceased And Past Up For Laughs.. Beatin' Me? Yu'll 'Try Your Best'..Like 'Horny Paraplegic Cannibals' When Ders A 'Peice Of Ass' 'Up For Grabs'..!! May Seem Calm But..This Da 'Source' Ta Find 'Men On Blast' Without Readin' 'Naplam Books'.. Cuz Lyrically..Your As 'Bad' As 'White Dudes Dancin' Wit Two Left Feet'..Dat 'Got Up On Da Wrong Foot'..!! Check* 1) Menace Got KO'd On Boxden..and a den could be a living room 2) "Wes Craven" Made Da "Hills Have Eyes" 3) Hes A Ugly Bastard..I Mean..Damn...Look At Him |
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07-02-2007, 02:28 AM
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Multies-Menace
Wordplay-Menace Personals-Hyphy Flow-Menace Creativity-Tie Punches-Menace Overall-Menace......he came harder(No homo). stay up both of yall. 1.
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07-04-2007, 02:42 PM
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Accepting my callout? U must be one of those Meth Fiends, I battle to Test Teens
On the battlefield watch his ‘Dead Body Get Carried Away’ like ‘Over-Exaggerated Death Scenes’ Meh. Multies were forced, but the punch was bad. 1.5/5 Waiting 4 me 2 drop first? Probly A Stall, i win wit punches, imagine if u Saw Me in Brawls Fuck coming weak…ima ‘Hand It To Tha Don’ like ‘Ventriloquist’s wit Mafia Dolls’ Lol. Lot better. Nice punch tho multies werent that complex. 3.5 He literally a Heavyweight, imagine his fat ass plus wet clothes, must be a fat Dude Thing ‘Making porn Threads got dis nigga 1 Touch(click) Away From Excitement’ like showing ‘Horny On A Mood Ring’ * Wow. No hate, but flow was horrible. Personal was aight but coulda been worded alot better. 2.5 Pre-Write ur shit cuz never I wanna see a Don-Key(donkey), we all know its ass, n now we see who’s Wacker... N tha only time sum1 will be ‘Feelin’ D/Feel Indie’ is if he had Groupies as an Independent Rapper I like the wordplay in the first line...Punch was decent. 4 total: 11.5 Gosh Im So Sick..Call'em 'Micheal Moore's Belt'..Cuz He 'Buckles Under Pressure' Wen MC's Stop His Flow Bid.. Yu Been 'Layed Out From Boxden's' So Many Times..Can't Enter 'Livin Rooms' Without Feelin' 'Claustrophobic'..!! I liked the michael moore line...personal was aight, but it coulda been wordd alot better...multies decent. 3 Who Ace Playin? He Ain't Wat Da 'Wes{t} Craven'..And Niggaz Said Im Ova Skilled.. So It'll Be A 'Sad Sight To See' Once Ma 4{bars} Leave Ya 'Head Over Heels/Hills'..!! I dont think people get this line lol. I mean i think its pretty dope...wordplay was there...multies decent. 3.5 Dis Nigga Ugly To Da Funny Bone!!..God Should Have Yu Deceased And Past Up For Laughs.. Beatin' Me? Yu'll 'Try Your Best'..Like 'Horny Paraplegic Cannibals' When Ders A 'Peice Of Ass' 'Up For Grabs'..!! LOL. Sick punch. reminiscent of vakill. i do think it was too much tho. you coulda just stuck with Horny parapelgics but w/e. 4 May Seem Calm But..This Da 'Source' Ta Find 'Men On Blast' Without Readin' 'Naplam Books'.. Cuz Lyrically..Your As 'Bad' As 'White Dudes Dancin' Wit Two Left Feet'..Dat 'Got Up On Da Wrong Foot'..!! lol. set up didnt make much sense, but the punch made up for it. 3 overall 13.5 Winner: Don Lon. As a final note...don you try to make ur shit to complex. It dont need to be that way..just flow it like natural. menace...Urs wasnt bad, i just wish u spent more time on ur verse. U had the personals and good punch concepts just take more time and use them to the greatest extent. good battle to both.
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07-04-2007, 06:30 PM
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07-12-2007, 11:31 PM
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ay fam dis 3-2 cuz soljah voted....and on da official rules said all rhyme refs could vote...feel me?
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07-18-2007, 10:33 PM
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uppin.........
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07-18-2007, 10:52 PM
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rhyme refs should have better knowledge...lol @ ur verse being flawless 2 him...3-2 i guess, uppin
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07-18-2007, 11:03 PM
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Lonnel
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have yu looked at your verse lately?..most of da votes on our verses are accurate..bar 4 bar wise...uppin for more votes
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07-18-2007, 11:23 PM
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well apparently 2 him u shit was impeccable...which was false, im not saying my verse was, but he didnt any anything bad about ur shit
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07-18-2007, 11:26 PM
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Lonnel
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neither did komplex...he said "Menace......he came harder(No homo)"...gave me only 1 cat......in his eyes...yu slaughted everything i said......but dats not wat everyone else is saying....{and they did bar 4 bar votes..which are more accurate}
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07-18-2007, 11:28 PM
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he didnt say anything about any of our verses, he just said i came harder
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07-18-2007, 11:32 PM
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but wat type of explanation is that?...i could go into any battle and say that......how bout explaining how yu "came harder"......
no diss to plex...but he has problems with wordplay/punch connections...so i wouldn't except a good thorough vote from him........everyone else that voted knows it |
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07-18-2007, 11:34 PM
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ya but he didnt say how every bar of mien was good, not pointing out 1 flaw n saying sum crazy things(i wont say wat was crazy cuz im not gonna sway)
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07-18-2007, 11:37 PM
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Lonnel
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from soljah's vote...he said wat was good about your verse...obviously he didn't find ma verse flawless because i didn't get a 5/5 vote........
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07-18-2007, 11:41 PM
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but he didnt note any of ur flaws, ANY of them
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07-18-2007, 11:42 PM
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sooo...your saying i have flaws on my verse?...do tell
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07-18-2007, 11:50 PM
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Accepting my callout? U must be one of those Meth Fiends, I battle to Test Teens
On the battlefield watch his ‘Dead Body Get Carried Away’ like ‘Over-Exaggerated Death Scenes’ Aight multies, but the punch ok. 2/5 Waiting 4 me 2 drop first? Probly A Stall, i win wit punches, imagine if u Saw Me in Brawls Fuck coming weak…ima ‘Hand It To Tha Don’ like ‘Ventriloquist’s wit Mafia Dolls’ multie seemed forced....punch coulda been worded betta 3.5 He literally a Heavyweight, imagine his fat ass plus wet clothes, must be a fat Dude Thing ‘Making porn Threads got dis nigga 1 Touch(click) Away From Excitement’ like showing ‘Horny On A Mood Ring’ * aight i aint like dis bar at all....it was just put 2gether terribly 1/5 Pre-Write ur shit cuz never I wanna see a Don-Key(donkey), we all know its ass, n now we see who’s Wacker... N tha only time sum1 will be ‘Feelin’ D/Feel Indie’ is if he had Groupies as an Independent Rapper nice wordplay...good personal 4 total: 10.5 Gosh Im So Sick..Call'em 'Micheal Moore's Belt'..Cuz He 'Buckles Under Pressure' Wen MC's Stop His Flow Bid.. Yu Been 'Layed Out From Boxden's' So Many Times..Can't Enter 'Livin Rooms' Without Feelin' 'Claustrophobic'..!! dis was aight....belt line was coo. 3 Who Ace Playin? He Ain't Wat Da 'Wes{t} Craven'..And Niggaz Said Im Ova Skilled.. So It'll Be A 'Sad Sight To See' Once Ma 4{bars} Leave Ya 'Head Over Heels/Hills'..!! hahaha good wordplay....its sad if u dont get dis....good multie was a bit off 3.5 Dis Nigga Ugly To Da Funny Bone!!..God Should Have Yu Deceased And Past Up For Laughs.. Beatin' Me? Yu'll 'Try Your Best'..Like 'Horny Paraplegic Cannibals' When Ders A 'Peice Of Ass' 'Up For Grabs'..!! good multies....good metaphor/wordplay....4/5 May Seem Calm But..This Da 'Source' Ta Find 'Men On Blast' Without Readin' 'Naplam Books'.. Cuz Lyrically..Your As 'Bad' As 'White Dudes Dancin' Wit Two Left Feet'..Dat 'Got Up On Da Wrong Foot'..!! ummm da the wording was bad....the last line was good tho 2.5 overall 13 Winner: Don Lon. |
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07-18-2007, 11:53 PM
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Lonnel
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thanks for da breakdown...uppin
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07-19-2007, 12:19 AM
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i think yung mizfit has a simile n a metaphor mixed up...n nah i wont tell cuz thats swaying, get @ me on AIM if u wanna know
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07-19-2007, 01:52 AM
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lol if dats da fact..den joe budden has da same probblem...can we please let da battle go on
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07-19-2007, 03:05 PM
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Accepting my callout? U must be one of those Meth Fiends, I battle to Test Teens
On the battlefield watch his ‘Dead Body Get Carried Away’ like ‘Over-Exaggerated Death Scenes’ not very creative, but coo flow & multies, decent opener 2.5/5 Waiting 4 me 2 drop first? Probly A Stall, i win wit punches, imagine if u Saw Me in Brawls Fuck coming weak…ima ‘Hand It To Tha Don’ like ‘Ventriloquist’s wit Mafia Dolls’ first line meh, dope punch, 4/5 He literally a Heavyweight, imagine his fat ass plus wet clothes, must be a fat Dude Thing ‘Making porn Threads got dis nigga 1 Touch(click) Away From Excitement’ like showing ‘Horny On A Mood Ring’ * personal...iight punch 2.5/5 Pre-Write ur shit cuz never I wanna see a Don-Key(donkey), we all know its ass, n now we see who’s Wacker... N tha only time sum1 will be ‘Feelin’ D/Feel Indie’ is if he had Groupies as an Independent Rapper stretched flow, nice wordplay 1st line..coo 2nd, 3.5/5 12.5/20 overall coo shit Gosh Im So Sick..Call'em 'Micheal Moore's Belt'..Cuz He 'Buckles Under Pressure' Wen MC's Stop His Flow Bid.. Yu Been 'Layed Out From Boxden's' So Many Times..Can't Enter 'Livin Rooms' Without Feelin' 'Claustrophobic'..!! coo opener, sick flow, nice punch, 4/5 Who Ace Playin? He Ain't Wat Da 'Wes{t} Craven'..And Niggaz Said Im Ova Skilled.. So It'll Be A 'Sad Sight To See' Once Ma 4{bars} Leave Ya 'Head Over Heels/Hills'..!! nice flow again..like the way your punches are constructed3/5 Dis Nigga Ugly To Da Funny Bone!!..God Should Have Yu Deceased And Past Up For Laughs.. Beatin' Me? Yu'll 'Try Your Best'..Like 'Horny Paraplegic Cannibals' When Ders A 'Peice Of Ass' 'Up For Grabs'..!! flow kinda fell off to me here, punch was average 2/5 May Seem Calm But..This Da 'Source' Ta Find 'Men On Blast' Without Readin' 'Naplam Books'.. Cuz Lyrically..Your As 'Bad' As 'White Dudes Dancin' Wit Two Left Feet'..Dat 'Got Up On Da Wrong Foot'..!! iight finisher, coulda been better, wording was coo, 2/5 overall 11/20 menace gets it...just i felt hyphys shit was more complex but fell of as the verse went on. the structure was consistent but became repitive and a little boring. menace was more personal which gave his verse an edge. felt his flow slightly more. hyphys multys were nicer but didnt totally connect every time. so yeah, menace got it for me. get at me if you want more analasis. |
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07-19-2007, 04:11 PM
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thanx on tha vote....3-3
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