Thread: ~!~Optimized~!~ vs V Da MiTiGaToR (King Of The Board Tourney)

checkin in g luck virus

virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me
lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi
punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen
this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen!
ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd
i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird!
i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny
u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny

Do not Link <-------the bambi line

Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores//
my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!//
I feel like this style everyone uses is borderline cheatin, cuz this is a long ass bar...it was a decent open
please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason//
i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!//
kinda funny...I'm assuming you mean category's not cats as in mobbin deep (pro. new-even)
there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick//
why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya I aint list!//
creative lil play there...
dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced//
looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...//
eh...kinda played...not a good closer..

p.s. you called him nerdy for playin a pc game, but you knew who Ruth Knueven was..lol. Also that explainin ya punches shit is kinda garbo, but it looks like everyone here does it so...eh, guess I been on audio too long.

virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me
lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi
um...ok
punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen
this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen!
what's age got to do with it? You had material, but the punch you put it in wasn't very creative...
ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd
i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird!
there's no punch...u just stated somethin about you...filler line
i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny
u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny
it's really pushin it to rhyme tourny wit horny in text...wasn't really a punch.

p.s. a lot of your lines stated facts but had no punchline...there was no wit just research. Plus u didn't cover up the fact that you were lacking in creativity with exessive multis. You'll prolly lose the first round, but keep battlin & try to incorporate more witty punchlines & multis into your lines.


Final Thoughts- First cat had very stretched lines & used what he thinks is multis, but they're actually extra bars...so technically you had around 6-8 bars, but that style's become standard at a lot of sites so it's whateva. some punches were kinda played & some didn't hit too hard...but it's the first round. Second cat didn't really have punches...& also had some filler...& when you only have 4 bars you can't afford to use 1 as filler, especially not in text where every punch counts & you can't rely on flow or delivery. your rhyme scheme was also a bit too simple.


punches: 1st guy
personals: 1st guy had warcraft, 2nd guy had porn searching 1st guy worded his better, 2nd guy had 2 references...guess it breaks even
multis:1st guy, 2nd guy was simpleton
creatvity:1st guy, 2nd guy had poor wording & just stated things
humor: neither dropped anything funny
overall: first guy

v/ first guy

thats what i call a vote...haha, i'll vote later

Punches-Vdam, his was overall better
Creativity-Vdam, was worded better
Multies-Vdam, opt's was too basic
Flow-Vdam
Personals-Vdam, cuz he was shitting on him(aint list,eric e's ya boss,nerdy game)but lol @Vdam being in the XXX section lookin at bambi

Overall-Ez win for Vdam, Opt didn't seem to take it as a Tournament

V da advances to the next round

^^wut he said....

3-0 ko