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06-12-2007, 09:32 PM
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Go play somewhere im busy
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~!~Optimized~!~ vs V Da MiTiGaToR (King Of The Board Tourney)
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Battles due Friday june 15th midnight eastern time Battlers must spit 4 bars No bitin/feeding/ or recycling or dq No rookie votes/hate/crew/or dickrydin votes No biters can vote Vote bar by bar or brackets Punches- Wordplay- Creativity- Multies- Flow- Personals- Overall- Must give a explanation in why you think the person won Don’t NO SHOW or you wont be able to participate in any other tourneys on the site
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06-13-2007, 02:35 PM
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checkin in g luck virus
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06-13-2007, 10:34 PM
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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good luck opto
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 "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT |
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06-13-2007, 11:14 PM
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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! Makin My Presence Felt on The Return !
Put My Pic @ Tha End Of Ya Sig......... Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores// my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!// please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason// i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!// (pro. new-even) there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick// why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya [B]I aint list!B]// dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced// looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...// Bar 1 - he had a post jokingly saying eric e is his protege Bar 2 - he asked for a key-gen to that nerdy ass game world of warcraft....Ruth Knueven is a cat hoarder...meaning she "collects" cats.. http://www.wtopnews.com/index.php?sid=599010&nid=25 Bar 3 - he had a thread witta free titled "i aint" and he kept saying shit like " i aint a gangsta, i aint a thug" Bar 4 - self explanatory E-Z....
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"The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT |
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06-15-2007, 01:22 AM
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Banned
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virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me
lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen! ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird! i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny http://hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=14218 <-------the bambi line |
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06-15-2007, 03:07 AM
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Devil's Greatest Trick
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Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores//
my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!// I feel like this style everyone uses is borderline cheatin, cuz this is a long ass bar...it was a decent open please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason// i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!// kinda funny...I'm assuming you mean category's not cats as in mobbin deep (pro. new-even) there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick// why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya I aint list!// creative lil play there... dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced// looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...// eh...kinda played...not a good closer.. p.s. you called him nerdy for playin a pc game, but you knew who Ruth Knueven was..lol. Also that explainin ya punches shit is kinda garbo, but it looks like everyone here does it so...eh, guess I been on audio too long. virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi um...ok punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen! what's age got to do with it? You had material, but the punch you put it in wasn't very creative... ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird! there's no punch...u just stated somethin about you...filler line i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny it's really pushin it to rhyme tourny wit horny in text...wasn't really a punch. p.s. a lot of your lines stated facts but had no punchline...there was no wit just research. Plus u didn't cover up the fact that you were lacking in creativity with exessive multis. You'll prolly lose the first round, but keep battlin & try to incorporate more witty punchlines & multis into your lines. Final Thoughts- First cat had very stretched lines & used what he thinks is multis, but they're actually extra bars...so technically you had around 6-8 bars, but that style's become standard at a lot of sites so it's whateva. some punches were kinda played & some didn't hit too hard...but it's the first round. Second cat didn't really have punches...& also had some filler...& when you only have 4 bars you can't afford to use 1 as filler, especially not in text where every punch counts & you can't rely on flow or delivery. your rhyme scheme was also a bit too simple. punches: 1st guy personals: 1st guy had warcraft, 2nd guy had porn searching 1st guy worded his better, 2nd guy had 2 references...guess it breaks even multis:1st guy, 2nd guy was simpleton creatvity:1st guy, 2nd guy had poor wording & just stated things humor: neither dropped anything funny overall: first guy v/ first guy |
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06-15-2007, 06:08 AM
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Banned
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thats what i call a vote...haha, i'll vote later
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06-15-2007, 04:44 PM
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Punches-Vdam, his was overall better
Creativity-Vdam, was worded better Multies-Vdam, opt's was too basic Flow-Vdam Personals-Vdam, cuz he was shitting on him(aint list,eric e's ya boss,nerdy game)but lol @Vdam being in the XXX section lookin at bambi Overall-Ez win for Vdam, Opt didn't seem to take it as a Tournament
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[02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U |
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06-15-2007, 04:56 PM
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2RawForTheStreetz
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V da mitigator all calls
to clearify Multies V Creativity V Punches V Flow : O Personals : V Wordplay : V overall V BLOW OUT
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06-15-2007, 06:07 PM
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V da advances to the next round
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06-15-2007, 08:09 PM
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^^wut he said....
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