RAVENESS Vs IronLungzz

IronLungzz · 03-28-2007, 04:45 PM

Due Friday

5 bars

RAVENESS · 03-28-2007, 11:36 PM

Checks.............

IronLungzz · 03-29-2007, 07:32 PM

I Got My Verse Done, WIll Post When u Give Me The WOrd That U Done Too

RAVENESS · 03-30-2007, 12:03 AM

I Been Done Kiddo...

IronLungzz · 03-30-2007, 08:33 PM

Cutie’s Gotta Gun? Then Fire-It-Peach, The Top? I’m Higher-In-Reach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Verse, Admite-It-Beach And Watch How I Stop R/Arhhh Like Fixing A Pirates-Speech!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You’ve Beaten Someone Good? Pull-The-Names! Ya’ Verse? That Bull-Is-Flames?Haha
Caz When My Punches Hit Imma Have R-Cade/Arcade Like A Room Full-Of-Games!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This Bitch And Makeup? Her Face Look Like Smarties! My Bars? Most Heart-These!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loose? Start-Please N Only Time Cats Yellin “RAVE, RAVE” When They Talkin ‘Bout Parties!!!!!
Raveness? Her Bars-Smelly, Im Fuckin Witchu, Usin Star-Jelly, Pregnant Or Is It A Bizarre-Belly!
Imma Shit On You, But In This Case Lets Make It Piss, Caz Imma Leave R,-Kelly’d/R.Kelly!!!!!!!!!!
You Hatin This Stars-Luck! Straight Whippin Ya Scars-Up! My Line Closer Charrs-Fucks!!!!!!!!!!!
Man Ya Bars-Muck!!! Caz Like You Hatin The Taste Of Ass, Ya Shit? R's-Suck/Arse-Suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Explanations:

Bar 1-Arghhhh, Something A Pirate Says…R’s Her Name..Get It?
Bar 2-Cade Means Abandoned..R’s Her Name..Get It?
Bar 3-A Rave Is Like A HUGE Party In A Club…Alse Her Name…Get It?
Bar 4-R Kelly Pisses On Girls…Lol…R’s Her Name..Get It?
Bar 5-Arse Means Ass..R’s Her Name..Get It?

IronLungzz · 04-01-2007, 11:33 AM

RAVENESS post your verse up..

IronLungzz · 04-02-2007, 05:00 PM

upppppppppppppping

RAVENESS · 04-02-2007, 11:52 PM

**O.K..NO PLAYING WITH THIS KID**

IRON-LUNGZ!!?? lets be real dude.YOU TALKING TO WHO??!! 'I.L's 'body an hopes' get 'chopped into 2'!!
dropped into 'stew'..my FLAYMEZ 'EATS' THIS BITCH!! but only after i 'boil him alive' an 'ship him out' like 'boxes of soup'!!
so understand i'am the best-geek..ya text reeks,an you 'spitting fire' on 'mic's'..'ONLY CAUSE YA BREATHE STINKS'..!!
go ahead an test me!!?? 'fuck standing ya ground'--your be '6 feet under it by next week'!!
my verbal-weapons-are-reflected to this 'CROSS-DRESSER' cause i'am sure-to-BLESS-KIDS...!!
CORRECTION!! i'll have 'iron lungz' seeing more 'doubles' than 'Noah's ship..QUEST BITCH'!!
'IRON LUNGZ'..Why test...??..i'll 'FIGURE 8' you into a 'PRETZEL SHAPE' and make ya 'NECK and ya THIGHS MESH'....!!
You'll 'DIE DEATHS' similar to 'CRASH TEST DUMMIES' with their 'HEADS' leaning on 'SIDE RESTS'..!!!
so stop-ya-lies-kid!! RAVE-leaves 'iron lungz' with his 'side-split'!!
in this battle YOU MY BITCH!! besides-'Iron lungz' 'wearing tim's' is more 'PUSS IN BOOTS' than 'SHRIEKS SIDE-KICK'!!

RAVENESS · 04-03-2007, 05:28 AM

Votes!!!
Good Verse Iron Lungz

Over_Flow · 04-03-2007, 09:26 AM

its 8:21 am...im 2 tired 2 do a bar by bar breakdowns

so....

Punches: lungz
flow: lungz
multies: lungz
personals: none
wordplay/nameplay: lungz

overall: this was really one sided 2 me....rave u need 2 quit stretchin ur lines and ur punches were weak and ur mlties were blah.....and then lungz came wit the ill multies and nameplays and he didnt stretch his lines which gave him the flow cat and most of his punches were more hard hittin then yours...so my vote goes 2 lungz

*~Tambo~* · 04-03-2007, 12:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IronLungzz

Cutie’s Gotta Gun? Then Fire-It-Peach, The Top? I’m Higher-In-Reach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Verse, Admite-It-Beach And Watch How I Stop R/Arhhh Like Fixing A Pirates-Speech!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You’ve Beaten Someone Good? Pull-The-Names! Ya’ Verse? That Bull-Is-Flames?Haha
Caz When My Punches Hit Imma Have R-Cade/Arcade Like A Room Full-Of-Games!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This Bitch And Makeup? Her Face Look Like Smarties! My Bars? Most Heart-These!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loose? Start-Please N Only Time Cats Yellin “RAVE, RAVE” When They Talkin ‘Bout Parties!!!!!
Raveness? Her Bars-Smelly, Im Fuckin Witchu, Usin Star-Jelly, Pregnant Or Is It A Bizarre-Belly!
Imma Shit On You, But In This Case Lets Make It Piss, Caz Imma Leave R,-Kelly’d/R.Kelly!!!!!!!!!!
You Hatin This Stars-Luck! Straight Whippin Ya Scars-Up! My Line Closer Charrs-Fucks!!!!!!!!!!!
Man Ya Bars-Muck!!! Caz Like You Hatin The Taste Of Ass, Ya Shit? R's-Suck/Arse-Suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Explanations:

Bar 1-Arghhhh, Something A Pirate Says…R’s Her Name..Get It?
Bar 2-Cade Means Abandoned..R’s Her Name..Get It?
Bar 3-A Rave Is Like A HUGE Party In A Club…Alse Her Name…Get It?
Bar 4-R Kelly Pisses On Girls…Lol…R’s Her Name..Get It?
Bar 5-Arse Means Ass..R’s Her Name..Get It?

Quote:

Originally Posted by RAVENESS

**O.K..NO PLAYING WITH THIS KID**

IRON-LUNGZ!!?? lets be real dude.YOU TALKING TO WHO??!! 'I.L's 'body an hopes' get 'chopped into 2'!!
dropped into 'stew'..my FLAYMEZ 'EATS' THIS BITCH!! but only after i 'boil him alive' an 'ship him out' like 'boxes of soup'!!
so understand i'am the best-geek..ya text reeks,an you 'spitting fire' on 'mic's'..'ONLY CAUSE YA BREATHE STINKS'..!!
go ahead an test me!!?? 'fuck standing ya ground'--your be '6 feet under it by next week'!!
my verbal-weapons-are-reflected to this 'CROSS-DRESSER' cause i'am sure-to-BLESS-KIDS...!!
CORRECTION!! i'll have 'iron lungz' seeing more 'doubles' than 'Noah's ship..QUEST BITCH'!!
'IRON LUNGZ'..Why test...??..i'll 'FIGURE 8' you into a 'PRETZEL SHAPE' and make ya 'NECK and ya THIGHS MESH'....!!
You'll 'DIE DEATHS' similar to 'CRASH TEST DUMMIES' with their 'HEADS' leaning on 'SIDE RESTS'..!!!
so stop-ya-lies-kid!! RAVE-leaves 'iron lungz' with his 'side-split'!!
in this battle YOU MY BITCH!! besides-'Iron lungz' 'wearing tim's' is more 'PUSS IN BOOTS' than 'SHRIEKS SIDE-KICK'!!

flow- lungzz
multies- lungzz (your multies were much better constructed than Raveness's but they came across to me as just filler to grab the multie cat...gotta step it up fam)
punches-Rave...irons only good lines were nameplay...and rave only had one sub-par punch (puss in boots)
wordplay-lungzz...only cuz of the nameplay...I dont ever wanna see another R-Kelly line in one of your post...smh on dat one
personals- I aint really see any
creativity- Rave...she clearly had lines more origional than iron's

O all- Iron Lungzz grabs this but this was still an ass battle...I thought it was gonna be a nice one cuz I seen nice shit from both of yall but I was wrong...

yall need to step it up and put on a show next time,
321

PS- just some advice for Rave...if you see that your opponet hasnt talked about somethin factuall about you...then that means you can grab that personals cat easy with one lil ass personal...if you would've had one in there I would have given you this battle but you slackin so you lost lol

IronLungzz · 04-03-2007, 06:38 PM

Lol i did this up stoned RIGHT before i did my tambo verse...2-0 uppin

IronLungzz · 04-04-2007, 07:49 PM

Upping!!!!!!

RAVENESS · 04-06-2007, 11:46 PM

Upping................

B Dope · 04-07-2007, 12:06 AM

flow:iron
multies:iron
punches:close but rave got it...both had wack and ight ones
wordplay:iron
personals: None really but iron was more personal sayin her name more and how she's a girl

Overall Iron lungs

Now return the favor and leave feed in my freestyle both of u please....http://hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=193827

IronLungzz · 04-07-2007, 01:02 AM

KO...close this

LethalIsILL · 04-07-2007, 01:04 AM

Iron lungz wins ko

03-28-2007, 04:45 PM	#1
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	RAVENESS Vs IronLungzz RAVENESS Vs IronLungzz Due Friday 5 bars __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-29-2007, 07:32 PM	#3
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Got My Verse Done, WIll Post When u Give Me The WOrd That U Done Too __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-30-2007, 08:33 PM	#5
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Cutie’s Gotta Gun? Then Fire-It-Peach, The Top? I’m Higher-In-Reach!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Verse, Admite-It-Beach And Watch How I Stop R/Arhhh Like Fixing A Pirates-Speech!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’ve Beaten Someone Good? Pull-The-Names! Ya’ Verse? That Bull-Is-Flames?Haha Caz When My Punches Hit Imma Have R-Cade/Arcade Like A Room Full-Of-Games!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This Bitch And Makeup? Her Face Look Like Smarties! My Bars? Most Heart-These!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loose? Start-Please N Only Time Cats Yellin “RAVE, RAVE” When They Talkin ‘Bout Parties!!!!! Raveness? Her Bars-Smelly, Im Fuckin Witchu, Usin Star-Jelly, Pregnant Or Is It A Bizarre-Belly! Imma Shit On You, But In This Case Lets Make It Piss, Caz Imma Leave R,-Kelly’d/R.Kelly!!!!!!!!!! You Hatin This Stars-Luck! Straight Whippin Ya Scars-Up! My Line Closer Charrs-Fucks!!!!!!!!!!! Man Ya Bars-Muck!!! Caz Like You Hatin The Taste Of Ass, Ya Shit? R's-Suck/Arse-Suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Explanations: Bar 1-Arghhhh, Something A Pirate Says…R’s Her Name..Get It? Bar 2-Cade Means Abandoned..R’s Her Name..Get It? Bar 3-A Rave Is Like A HUGE Party In A Club…Alse Her Name…Get It? Bar 4-R Kelly Pisses On Girls…Lol…R’s Her Name..Get It? Bar 5-Arse Means Ass..R’s Her Name..Get It? __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-01-2007, 11:33 AM	#6
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	RAVENESS post your verse up.. __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-02-2007, 05:00 PM	#7
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	upppppppppppppping __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-28-2007, 11:36 PM	#2
RAVENESS THE ALPHA FEMALE!! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: A-SASSIN-NATION Posts: 163 Repped: 6 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Checks.............

03-30-2007, 12:03 AM	#4
RAVENESS THE ALPHA FEMALE!! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: A-SASSIN-NATION Posts: 163 Repped: 6 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Been Done Kiddo...

04-02-2007, 11:52 PM	#8
RAVENESS THE ALPHA FEMALE!! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: A-SASSIN-NATION Posts: 163 Repped: 6 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'am Here..... O.K..NO PLAYING WITH THIS KID IRON-LUNGZ!!?? lets be real dude.YOU TALKING TO WHO??!! 'I.L's 'body an hopes' get 'chopped into 2'!! dropped into 'stew'..my FLAYMEZ 'EATS' THIS BITCH!! but only after i 'boil him alive' an 'ship him out' like 'boxes of soup'!! so understand i'am the best-geek..ya text reeks,an you 'spitting fire' on 'mic's'..'ONLY CAUSE YA BREATHE STINKS'..!! go ahead an test me!!?? 'fuck standing ya ground'--your be '6 feet under it by next week'!! my verbal-weapons-are-reflected to this 'CROSS-DRESSER' cause i'am sure-to-BLESS-KIDS...!! CORRECTION!! i'll have 'iron lungz' seeing more 'doubles' than 'Noah's ship..QUEST BITCH'!! 'IRON LUNGZ'..Why test...??..i'll 'FIGURE 8' you into a 'PRETZEL SHAPE' and make ya 'NECK and ya THIGHS MESH'....!! You'll 'DIE DEATHS' similar to 'CRASH TEST DUMMIES' with their 'HEADS' leaning on 'SIDE RESTS'..!!! so stop-ya-lies-kid!! RAVE-leaves 'iron lungz' with his 'side-split'!! in this battle YOU MY BITCH!! besides-'Iron lungz' 'wearing tim's' is more 'PUSS IN BOOTS' than 'SHRIEKS SIDE-KICK'!!

04-03-2007, 05:28 AM	#9
RAVENESS THE ALPHA FEMALE!! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: A-SASSIN-NATION Posts: 163 Repped: 6 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Votes!!! Good Verse Iron Lungz

04-03-2007, 09:26 AM	#10
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its 8:21 am...im 2 tired 2 do a bar by bar breakdowns so.... Punches: lungz flow: lungz multies: lungz personals: none wordplay/nameplay: lungz overall: this was really one sided 2 me....rave u need 2 quit stretchin ur lines and ur punches were weak and ur mlties were blah.....and then lungz came wit the ill multies and nameplays and he didnt stretch his lines which gave him the flow cat and most of his punches were more hard hittin then yours...so my vote goes 2 lungz

04-03-2007, 06:38 PM	#12
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lol i did this up stoned RIGHT before i did my tambo verse...2-0 uppin __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-04-2007, 07:49 PM	#13
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Upping!!!!!! __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-06-2007, 11:46 PM	#14
RAVENESS THE ALPHA FEMALE!! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: A-SASSIN-NATION Posts: 163 Repped: 6 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Upping................

04-07-2007, 12:06 AM	#15
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	flow:iron multies:iron punches:close but rave got it...both had wack and ight ones wordplay:iron personals: None really but iron was more personal sayin her name more and how she's a girl Overall Iron lungs Now return the favor and leave feed in my freestyle both of u please....http://hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=193827

04-07-2007, 01:02 AM	#16
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	KO...close this __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-07-2007, 01:04 AM	#17
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,951 Repped: 135 Repped 993 Times in 212 Posts Neg Reps: 53 Neg Repped at 74 Times in 53 Posts	Iron lungz wins ko __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

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